| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! Bulma is pregnant, Vegeta is depressed, and I think Yamcha might be gay! I can't wait for you to update!
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Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 23:34 EDT
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please update soon ! im dieing to find out what's goin happan next.
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Title: A Light in the Darkness
Reviewed By: (MACCAM) On: April 14, 2006 14:07 EDT
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Isn't that how it always is, when you both jump to conclusions and then later find out that you both were wrong. great chapter can't wait to read more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gardian [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 15:37 EST
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((I posted the last two ones, only under the wrong username.))
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Reviewed By: Gardian14 On: March 22, 2006 15:34 EST
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(To I'm your father)You're the one who sucks. I agree with maccam. You ARE a wuss. If you don't like it, go **** yourself. Its a great story line, so screw you, you ****er.
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Reviewed By: Gardian14 On: March 22, 2006 15:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Its always nice to have a change of couples and I'm glad you're making it where Goku and Chi-chi are getting along and not fighting. I also like the way you've made it to where Goku's not so much of a wimp when it comes to standing up to Chi-chi, but still have him in character. You seem to be a tad off on Vegeta's character, but I still like the way he's turning out. Good work on Bulma...I never thought of her as insecure, but what you're saying does make sense about her.
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Reviewed By: Kendraless [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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This is one of the first DBZ stories I read. It's a must read classic and don't mind what other people say.
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Title: PISSED OFF.(maccam)
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 08:02 EST
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To (I'm your father)it's people like you who make me sick. who do you think you are. have you written anything in your pathic life. you have some nerve. I'm for one am glad that she's putting this great story back up, if you don't like it DON'T READ IT. I think your just jealous cause she is a great writer and you can't touch her work. if anything Your the one who makes us all sick with your crap!!!. Pity your not even man enough to post who you are, so craw back under the rock you can out of >.< Mia again THANK YOU for updating, and please don;t pay no mind to the little child that has nothing else better to do then say nasty things!
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Reviewed By: I'm your father On: March 22, 2006 07:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is way too overrated. An excessively use of lemons a very unbelievable and badly written plot. I was glad when this shit was taken down from fanfiction.net but it seems you could not survive without people brownnosing your ass. You should form a club with SUERIC
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Title: italiana
Reviewed By: eb On: March 19, 2006 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read dis story last year..but, I was pretty shy 2 write a review..so, I decided 2 du da unthinkable thing dis year! writin a review!! I luv dis story...it is among my top 10 favorite v/b fanfix, I was quite surprised with vegeta's emotion reavealed and all, he doesnt seem 2 b, mean and selfish and just arrogant in dis story, he seems more, nicer...hmmm, I still luv him anyways..good job!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 19, 2006 14:48 EST
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*grins* i'm so glad to hear you HAVE completed this. I've been wondering how it all turns out. Guess I'll have to look for your other stuff, too. And I LIKE what you did with yamcha...
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Reviewed By: (maccam) On: March 17, 2006 23:59 EST
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Mia i understand all to well about being tired of fanfiction. I just love this story. this was one of the first i read when i got started. I'm very greatful that your posting this story and i hope i can read the ending :) Thank you!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wonderful...as always!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Mia, I'm glad you are still contiuing to write this wonder piece. Even though I was at chapter 100 or something when you had it over at ff.net... but its a thrill to re-read it again. I hope that more readers will leave reviews, I know it was hard letting all those reviews go at ff.net! Take care, and keep up the super work!
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Title: A Light in the Darkness
Reviewed By: falconsblade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 02:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD. I just read this entire fic. I started at about 11pm and just finished at 1:30AM. My eyes are killing me, but i jsut couldn't stop. I wish i could write like this! I write a little, but I'm shy. Maybe I should get over it. I have taken some classes in composition and creative writing, maybe its just nerves. Hope you update soon. I understand how bulma feels, shes boarderline suicidal isnt she? She feels worthless and left out. Dont worry baby, it gets better. Trust me, I know what I'm talking about. She just needs to let a few people in, and take what they say at face value instead of trying to read stuff into it all the time. Great story line. I think you have Vegeta down pat. I also thing your doing great with Goku. Just because he's seems so innocent and confused about deeper stuff doesn't mean he's not trying or will eventually get it. I hate stories that make him stupid.
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Reviewed By: NSB On: March 16, 2006 21:46 EST
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UPDATE THIS FIC IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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