| "A Light in the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] |
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Reviewed By: (maccam) On: March 15, 2006 14:44 EST
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JUMPS FOR JOY. OH I'M SOOO HAPPY. I LEFT THIS STORY ON CHAPTER 80 AT YOUR OLD SITE. I TRUELY CAN'T WAIT TO FINAL NOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN. THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: March 06, 2006 21:10 EST
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(nearly crys with joy at seeing this story) you're reposting? you're UPDATING? I'm overwhelmed - this is one of my all time favorite fanfictions and I can't wait to see it's return!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 03, 2006 21:14 EST
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Welcome back, I was wondering where you were. Are you planning to do a big update to where it equals the amount of chapters on your home site.
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Reviewed By: heiress2thethrone(notsignedin) On: March 02, 2006 21:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. um chi chi is a bit too emotional for my tastes, but i don't like her much anyway. and did u say that other saiyan was female, i also thought u said she was vegeta's sister. maybe im totally wrong or something. but im really intrigued. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 19:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, yay! I've read this whole story before (I think..) somewhere else but lost the link. I'm happy to see you've found mediaminer, you'll get some good reviews, your story is awesome! Can't wait until the next chapter comes out
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Reviewed By: NJNlolo On: February 24, 2006 16:49 EST
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nice to see an update
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Reviewed By: RedHellWolf On: June 23, 2004 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic so far. I've reach the point of your little quiz you gave and surprisingly got most right except for one. The one where they don't fight a lot. Your right that Bulma does more of the insulting and I've only seen one episode where Vegeta insults first and Bulma retorts back but that's in Dragonball GT. Although its not like Dragonball Z/GT are focus on Bulma and Vegeta so we only know what we see. Guess I learn something new everyday. Never considered that in the series when you do see Bulma and Vegeta together they never really get into fights, just little arguments or spats. But back to the story. It's really good, way different from what one normally finds in B/V get-together fanfiction. Keep up the good work;)
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: August 09, 2003 07:28 EDT
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I konw she's already pregnant, but I was trying to say that if Bulma was so worried about how her body would be able to handle carrying a hybrid saiyan baby, (despite that fact that her money can bring her the best doctors and treatment as she had stated in that chapter where she and Vegeta were eating dinner in the bedroom), then maybe some strengthening exercises during her first months would be helpful especially if Vegeta was the one that trained her.
Bulma questioning Vegeta's feelings for her would no doubt be from her pregnancy mood swings, but how much further do we have to read where Vegeta reminds her that he would not leave her for any other woman; how it would kill him if she left him; and how that once a bond was formed it could never be broken (from that fight they had in the lab). |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 10, 2003 22:15 EDT
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Was beginning to wonder where you were?! Did you ever write in the later chapters of your story where Vegeta teaches Bulma how to fly to erase those feelings of being teased to prove his point. |
Reviewed By: Satoshi16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:56 EST
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Heyas, I read all the way into the like 60th chappy of this on ffn, but I planned on rereading it from the beginning once you mentioned redoing it anyways so I don't mind waiting inbetween. I can't wait to read every piece of this ficcy cause it's so on character and never dull. Hope you put up more chapters soon, I can't imagine you being able to improve the writing anymore than how wonderful it already is. Till then, ja ne! |
Reviewed By: DigitalAvatar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 08:45 EST
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Still keeping my eye on this fic...
And this will be my third time reading through chapters 1-75 (Or was it 76...?)
Anxiously waiting to read beyond, but this fic is so great I don't mind reading through it again. :D
--SPOLIER ALERT-- (For those that haven't read more than what's posted here at MediaMiner)
I still can't wait to find out whether Yamcha makes it to Super Saiya-jin ;) |
Reviewed By: Jade Kitten On: March 02, 2003 01:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb!! Once again, I'm re-reading this on another site besides fanfiction.net. ^^ I just registered with this site a few minutes ago so I don't know if my name is signed in yet. Anyhoo, this story is wonderful as ever! Ja ne!
~Jade Kitten ~_^ |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: January 15, 2003 08:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh...another great chapter...i thought that this chapter showed a bit of humour, which i greatly enjoyed...and it also showed that vegeta wasn't always mean...almost showed a tidbit of the softer side of him...i might say that he got in touch with his feminine side...but...i'm not. i also thought that it showed how a lot of people stereotypically think of vegeta, e.g. bulma, and how she wasn't really able to think of vegeta being able to say something simple like thank-you or something polite. i mean...he has to have manners...and he has better manners than(i believe) goku. for some reason, goku has grown up and matured...he's probably twenty-something years old by now, and he still acts quite a bit as a child. i will admit, that now that he has undergone the super-saiyan transformation, he has matured somewhat. any-who...back to reviewing your chapter...i like the chapter and it's a great job well done! sarah |
Reviewed By: Heerosgurl On: January 02, 2003 23:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for getting this chapter out. I have been waitiing soo long for this. I've had to read it off of ur website at my dad's, which has been a drag. Not reading your fanfic, because I love it, but because my dad's modem is sooo slow, each chapter took almost 10 minutes to load.
When I first started reading fanfictions about DBZ, Goku/Chichi was my favorite, but then I saw this one. I was like "What the hey, I'll try it." And i LOVED it. You got me hooked on Vegeta/Bulma! It's all I read now!
Keep posting!
~Heerosgurl |
Reviewed By: Mariah Ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 17:34 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I'd lke to say something about this chapter. What Bulma did WAS wrong, because she wasn't married to Vegeta when she let him take it away. So, actually they were both wrong from what they did. I skipped the lemon. I'm a christian, and I intend on keeping it that way. Not a flame, story's actually quite good, just pointing out the facts. |
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