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| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Title: Trinity
Reviewed By: SonSofiaNecros On: November 20, 2006 20:22 CST
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This time, instead of countering it as he normally would have, Goku simply grabbed Vegeta's ankle, pulled it up high, and used his momentum and his fist to punch the royal saiyajin in the balls as hard as he could. I was so surprised, tears flowed out of my eyes/ OH MY GOD, He punched Vegeta in the balls?! As hard as he could?! Can Vegeta even have anymore sexual relations without the help of the dragon?!
| Title: Trinity
Reviewed By: SonSofiaNecros On: November 20, 2006 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Vejitto understood all of this, and its meaning for him, on an intellectual level. The rest of his mind had gone through a simpler formula to reach the same place: Goku was a fine piece of ass + Goku was unhappy + Vejitto was lonely = Goku getting his lovely bones jumped as soon as possible.' Oh yeah, now that's logic for the textbooks, true philosophy! Three things: Goku is HOT! Vegeta is HOT! And Vegitto is... well, he's hot too but not as hot as Goku even though he looks mostly like him... Still, I mean, shit, this fic is gorgeous. I've never read a story like this before, it's unique and perfect. The best story I've ever read in my life. I love you, is that okay? Not like that, but you have the talent of a god, and if I were to meet you, I would bow before you, because you are the shit! Everything in this story is so perfectly worded and described. No one knows what Vegitto is really like, but I think if Funimation had to explore something like that, you would have Vegitto down to a tee. Of that I'm certain. Write more, maybe a Gogeta, with a different spin?
| Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:10 CDT
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I love this story, when will there be an update.
| Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, just a warning; this is probably going to be a crappy review because i'm tired, so this is going to be short... at least i think so anywayz...~ right, i really like this fic, it's very original and sometimes i have to remember that vegito is a completely different person to either goku or vegeta... he just has odd 'quirks' if that's the right word ~ and is able to access goku's and vegeta's memory too ~ and i know it seems a bit odd for me to type this but, i like when goku gets jelous... he's sort of kawaii when he does... i don't know why but that's the feeling i get when reading this ^_^;; ~ anywayz, good fic and i hope your still updating this, it's been about 2 years now... i don't want to sound annoying or anything like that, it's just that i review alot of fics where there hasn't been an update for a series of years and i never get feedback (except for 1 time) on whether they are trying to update or not... so, yeah... this doesn't seem that short anymore now, heh *scratches head* ~ ok i'll stop u.u;; ~ just please update as soon as you can ^-^
| Reviewed By: Dead One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this, I was crushed when I ran into a dead end. You have a talent in writing that is very hard to come buy, and I hope to see more!
| Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is AAAAARRRRGGGH! And I thought the Christmas party fic was funny. I am in traction right now. I have never laughed out loud at something I was reading before. My husband and daughter think I am insane, and I sure as heck am not showing them this! I refuse to sink to fangirl level and plead for another chapter, honestly, I just won't plead for another chapter. See, I didn't. *whimper*. Ahem; Gohan drunk as a skunk rolfing in Bulma's kichen. Vegiito in hawaiian dress. Goku with a hickey, blushing. Vegeta brooding with actual reason. Jealous Goku. Jealous Vegeta. Your dialogue is priceless. I could go on but I won't. I just read the whole thing in one sitting so forgive me if I'm a little incoherant.
| Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 12:56 CST
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What a fun ride! You've got to love any chapter that includes both Oolong and the word "boobage". Very funny and enjoyable. I hope you are able to update soon.
| Reviewed By: TalonSage On: November 07, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goddamn, I love this fic...wanted to review on LJ, but it's okay... The little bit about Puar, was PRICELESS...and I love Vegeta and Vejitto's interactions. And the image of Gohan surfing was wonderful. I just really enjoyed that for some reason. Now, Vegeta's plan is good...but...is it good enough? Will there be a pig roast next chapter? It's well worth waiting for, I can say that much!!! *drools over the sheer amount of bishieness in this fic*
| Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 06:33 CST
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Ohhh - *Jumps up and down in excitement* I don't know where to begin!! SO may wonderful moments and lines in this chapter!! Damn it woman - I think you may have outdone yourself! Let's see, I was particularly fond of the Chichi blasting line - even if they DID decide that doing that wasn't an option... :( I LOVED the hint of jealous Goku (GOD I LOVE HIM!!!) at the end of the chapter - Vegeta nearly grinninh - I had the strong urge to throw my arms around him at that point... :| Vejitto's erm... interesting, shirt... (You need to get someone to draw him in those clothes!! :D ) Dang, I should've taken notes as I was reading through this... but I was too busy enjoying reading it to do so... :D I loved this so much, I'm not even going to whine for 'Absolution'... :D (yet)
| Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:03 CST
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It's great to see another update to this fic kiddo! I love 'watching' Vegitto, Goku, and Vegeta circle around each other in an ever-tightening ring. Strangely, I find myself reviewing the past chapters quite often... just for reference, you know. Yeah; that's it. Drunk Gohan is both cute and scary. Maybe they should bottle up his vomit and sell it in paint stores and heavy equipment shops. He keeps secrets as well as his father, too. As horrible as Chichi is, I kinda feel sorry for her. She'll probably end up being the last person on earth to find out what Goku did, and even if she doesn't learn about Gohan's little sake episode until the boy's 35 years old, I'm sure she'll make him wish he'd never learned to even spell sake. Wonderful job again!
| Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 19:55 CST
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O laughed my ass of the entire chapter. Yhe way you moved from character to character was just great. I love stories where everybody is involved and no one gets bashed. Well, except for Chi Chi; and you even pointed out some of her good points. Must needs more -El-
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was well worth the wait. I'm grinning stupidly, and I can't believe you made me get the warm fuzzies over Bulma and Yamcha. I've never loved Vegeta more in any of your stories, and Vegeto is a breathtaking plot foil for everything--I'm infatuated with him as everyone else. Your style is so accomplished here--it floats like a butterfly, stings like a bee. Loveliness, pure loveliness.
| Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Gods! This is incredible! The humour the intrigue! Update! Update! Update!
| Reviewed By: Samira-chan On: July 08, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read your fics and its sad that you're so anti feminist. Bashing women to get charas who aren't gay anyway together is sick and I hope you wake up
| Reviewed By: SCOOB On: June 29, 2004 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one who really, really hopes that Vegeta misses out...Goku deserves happiness away from chichi's bitchin' and Vegeta's insults and what better way than on his own with Vegito....A wonderful story can't wait for the rest....the suspense is killing me!!!!!!!! The piece on Roshi's Island was a real scream
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