| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Title: Chappie 7
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sobriety is a very beautiful thing, but so's getting drunk 3 times a year! Any-who, I LOVED LOVED L-O-V-E-D!!!! Gohan's reaction! Oh my God, I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF!!! Talk about ROFL! I just hate knowing I'm going to have to wait another bloody YEAR before I get to read the next chapter! Damn, you would think you're J.K. Rowling or something! ;) Just kidding, just kidding!!! Update, sooner than one year, MOST preferably!
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Reviewed By: OujiVegeta On: May 30, 2004 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, very nice indeed, all u need now is to get on with the show and plzzzz continue ;) i wanna see Vegeta and Vegito get it on with eachother, and then prehaps goku...w/e
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Title: too drunk to login properly
Reviewed By: Plyric_Drunk as a skunk On: May 28, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the song Elmer Fudd sings when he's hunting Bugs Bunny? Kill the Wabbit? Kill the Chichi, Kill the Chichi, Kill the Chichi, she must die! Oh yeah, let the booze speak. Uh, not usual for me, in the least, actually downright rare, the drunkenness I mean, but I seriously loved this chapter! Oh yeah, some triple-male sweaty slicked musking action with some serious orgy hot hot sex mama oh yeah.... *drops to floor, passed out from beer and overly horniness, smiling...* =)
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Reviewed By: aaf On: May 28, 2004 16:09 CDT
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Wow, that was amazing...though I'm still waiting for some Vegeta/Vegitto action, or a threesome heh heh. Also for Goku to just leave Chi-Chi already, lol!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 15:01 CDT
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This is so entertaining. You've done a lovely job weaving an implausible story into a totally believable one. It's amusing and hot all at the same time. (does that make sense? O.o)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 20:39 CDT
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Damn - I was all ready for some nasty Vegitto/Vegita action. *Sigh* I guess maybe that'll happen next chapter? Gohan's reaction was priceless! And a drunk Gohan sounds so cute, but he could also be very dangerous. Loose lips sink... adulterous fathers! O.o C's right - I loved that line, too!
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Title: I love this fic
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing concept. Um, amazing conceptS. Expert writing. What a way to spend a morning, reading all these chapters, delighting in sentence after sentence, details and deeper meanings. I'm thrilled from my heels to my pitutary gland (I have no idea what that means) and compelled to check off tens and gush like a schoolgirl. I am so glad I've tippytoed into yaoi. Maybe it's just you I love. No wait, the fusion has that little-boy-lost appeal and I'm quite sure I'm falling for him too. Fusion confusion. Tippytoeing away like dinosaur now. I love this fic. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: May 27, 2004 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Goku... if only he could have stayed dead..." LOL! My thoughts exactly! aeriously, another excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Fire of phoenix On: May 27, 2004 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry. This isn't my real sign-in name but I can't be assed to sign in at the moment. So glad you updated, I was waiting with baited breath for the next chapter and even though this hasn't been updated in a while (HINT HINT) it still flowed perfectly. But what a place to leave it! I was sitting there, getting all comfy and then Just as I was in to the chapter it ends! Terrible I tell ya! Some authors are real sadistic peoiple that love to keep us hanging...
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Reviewed By: Elenek *not logged in* On: May 27, 2004 11:08 CDT
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O my God You updated this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am shocked and amazed. I had to reread the entire thing just to make sure I was able to take it all in. I loved the conversation with Roshi. Gohan breaking down into peals of laughter. LMAO. I'm looking forward to reading the results Gohan's decision about Miri Trunks. Well Got to go now. -EL-
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 19:52 CST
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O M G!!!! MOREE MORE MORE!! please?? that last chapter was.... yummy... *drools* Can't wait to see all three of them together like that.... *_* anyway, post the next chapter soon, I'm sure it'll be just as great as the previous ones! I'll be waiting!!!Chibi Hoshi
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Title: chapter 6_Trinity
Reviewed By: SexaySaiyajin2004 On: January 18, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my favorite fic's,with this odd pair.I hope you'll be updating some time soon,I want to see what happens with Vegeta and Vegito?!
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Title: Waves franticly
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I still get completely wrapped up in your writing!! I love your style and the way you use words. I have to sayI think the cliff hanger you left was very good! Leaves you want to know what is going to happen next! But as much as I want to know I still enjoyed the entire picture you painted. Your right! I dont think Vegeta is very amused. =)
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, this is so well written! Your so professional! It blew me away. I haven't read much Yaoi, but I like this! *Ohhh.. I blushed through the whole end of Ch 6!* I love Goku in this.. poor thing, so lonely and Chi-whipped! I loved the part where Vejitto tells Gohan that he and the boys know about his stash of Porn!! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Myself On: August 20, 2003 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! What's taking so long for genius!? ::stomps foot:: AUGH! |
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