| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Title: SHIZNIT
Reviewed By: DeeGeta [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2005 02:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE BEST DBZ STORY I'VE EVER RED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe I started reading this story at 12 midnight and now it's 3am! Man, at first I was like "WTF?!?!" then, I got to the third chappy and I was like "WHOA!!!" It was totally good. I'm not one for hentai, but here it is unavoiable. I could sense the peeps as real. I like that. You did an excellent job. They seemed like real people. I know you've been told of it before, but exactly HOW did they get to that world?!?!? I really want to know about that! hahahha. Cuz you read the story and it's all good, but that part excapes your understanding. Still, all in all it was good. I even cried for the peeps. Poor Trunks and woman! He didn't want to rape her, and she didn't want to get raped. It was still cool tho's. You are fantastic, email me (deegeta@yahoo.co.uk) and let me know if you have anymore stories. You are a fantastic author. I'll will be reading more of your masterpieces, but for now I need rest! Nighties and take car of yourself!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: sisko66002 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Absolutely loved. I hope that you will be inspired to write a sequal. I couldn't stop reading it and read the entire story straight through from start to finish. I wish my stuff was half as good.
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Reviewed By: Asakura Yuri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 20:35 CDT
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PLZ PLZ PLZ write a Sequel !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh On: April 15, 2004 15:13 CDT
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That was a good chapter! I've been waiting for forever for you to finish it and you ended it great! It's exactly how this sort of story should end actually. You don't know her past. And the future isn't important in the long run. This was just one story in a life that will obviously be full of them. I tip my hat off to you. :)
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Reviewed By: Mina son [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 19:03 CST
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Hello!!!! Is anyone ther.. I'm scared ther haven't been an up dates on this fic... what's going on... okay now I'm confused. Goten: Your always confused Mina: Look how's talking Goten: why do you waste your time reading this suff anyways I'ts not a wase of thime ok. Why don't you read it if your so sure....! Goten Fine I will ( reads, crys, crys) Goten: omg that is so sad... I'm going to go and ask trunks if this is real Mina : Goten your an idiot....( Mina gets an idea. She beats gotten , ties him to a chair) Heheheh..... If you want Goten to live you shall update... HAHAHAHAHAHA goten: What if this doesn't work it will.....
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Reviewed By: sillydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 20:33 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue...ppppweas...
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Reviewed By: Mina son [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:19 CST
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AHHHH........... I was hoping you updated.... um .. I've read the story up to the whole dissappearing act thing but was to lazy to review hope you don't kill me. I'm hoping you have eough inspiration to write cause I have read really good stories where the author doesn't update for a long time and become discountinued. I'm hoping it won't be the same fate for this story so please up date soon that is if you want too.... * smacks my self* Au revoir
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Reviewed By: Cres On: November 30, 2003 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have quite the imagination there. i really am enjoying your stroy. it is becoming very interesting to say the least. i hope you do update soon cause leaving it hanging like that... soooo cruel!!!!!! not fair mate, really, not fair!!!!! -_-' hope you do finish it soon though, or at least update. that's all i have to say mate, other than pretty pretty please finish the story!!!! laters ^_^
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Title: chapter 18
Reviewed By: sillydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...............what....where.....how..... B.T.W. i know i havent reveiwed in soooo long. remember me? i'm just wondering if your taking this next chapter where i think your taking it. you know...the hole disappering the next morning thing...i don't want to spoil it for the rest of the readers, but update soon. and also...this is so embasesing...i need help writing a lemon in ch 6 of "Why Me?" any advice would help. thanks. let me know if you have any ideas. plz. sillydragon P.S. my e-mail changed once again. santagirl100@yahoo.com
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Title: Perfection
Reviewed By: Famke On: November 09, 2003 01:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have loved this fic since...forever it seems. I was wondering when we would hear from you again seeing as it has been awhile. Well I suppose not that long, but when you are as anxious as I am how can you blame me. The style of your writing and the portrayal of your characters is so amazing. I wish you luck in your writing.
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Reviewed By: Sorceress Sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 11:25 CDT
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Sorry i haven't reviewed sooner. I think by the time i first found this fic some odd monthes ago, you'd already had a lot, so i let myself be lazy. :) But, i need to make my mark since this is getting to be one of my favorite fanfics. You write really well and i just realized rather recently that you never mentioned the chic's name! Cool. I hope you update soon, but then again (after reading that last part) i'm also hoping that you don't leave things as neither sees each other again... (tho you must keep with the realisticness of it all, it's still just as likely that there was a reason for them being there... :D )
Overall and with details, great story. Keep it coming while i go check out the rest of your goods. :) |
Reviewed By: Dark Rose of Castella On: September 18, 2003 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COntinue please!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bleed_Black [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 01:26 CDT
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Holy freakin god this is the best story i have ever read i hope you update soon its so well written very well written and grammer is great i love it its PERFECT!hope you update soon |
Title: vegetagirl101
Reviewed By: vegetagirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God,........Just when things are looking up...something happens!!!!
I love this story....Everyone always writes how fun it would be and how nice everyone would be if DBZ came over....but I think it would be more like this.....Awesome work!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! This story just keeps getting better and better. I love it. I don't know what else to say. The text is a bit small and hard to read, though. Still, excellent work. Can't wait to see if my suspicions are right about the next chapter. ^__^ |
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