| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 01, 2003 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.
enough begging please update soon.!!!!!
I'm waiting.............. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 04:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahh yes.... the first wave of hormones of pregnancy, how I remember them well. Couple that with the actual feelings from the rejection of Trunks and I can't even imagine. Ok... Trunks better show up soon or I'm going to have to pick up a letter opener and join the lynch mob!
Request! Longer chapters? Pleasssssssssse? :) |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 27, 2003 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh that was an okay chapter (12). I really wanna know whats happening at the house that you ... the charchter left behind. How is Vegeta taking the concept of losing his grandchild? And totally why Trunks is acting like sucha bastard.. well he realy is one. since Bulma and Vegeta weren't married. Oh and If you ever decide to publish a book please tell me. I think that you really should become a writer. And what's the main charachter's name? Did you make like, if you did'nt state the name we, as in the readers, would relate and feel the pain your charcther is feeling. I realy do't care if the charchther has a name or not your fic is great. I'm looking forward to your next update so please update faster. And remember how I told you to put your fic on FF.net, don't, that site sucks now.
^_^ ^_~ ^o^ )> |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your fickie its so sad........... ^_^; read mine and ill keep reading your............ write more now i dont think i can keep away!!!!!!!!!!!! *waaaaaa* |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: February 27, 2003 18:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! I hope you keep it goin! I luff this story! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 12:32 CST
Comment/Review:
So now it sinks in...
Great chapter.
Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 25, 2003 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god..... I acutally cried reading the fic. Belive me, it's usually really hard to make me cry. Your style of writing is superb. Please update more often. You should post your fic on ff.net. I love this fic......... I hate you now.... no I don't. So please update soon.
A dedicated fan. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: February 25, 2003 20:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Trunks is SO damn mean!! Why does he have to be that way? stupid jerk... *mumbles something about taking a baseball bat after the bastard...*
Anyway, this last chapter was so heart breaking!! You did a great job with conveying emotions... you're very articulate
please update soon... I'm really looking forward to how this will all end up!!
*slings her baseball bat over her shoulder and grins wickedly*
Oh Truuuuuuuunks... I've got a surprise for yoooooooooooou |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats so sad...... does it have a twist this storry is cool! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 15:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...I haven't checked back on this in so long!! I really love this story, and I still can't believe how different and unique it is.
The whole conception of Trunks being a totally different being than who he is displayed as on the show and all the characters crossing over in a way like this is totally original. I really love it!
Please try and update EXTREMELY soon, I don't think I can survive without it!
^_^ Thanks!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: leena On: February 25, 2003 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your chapters were well worth the wait! I just love your writing style! I just hope you have the chance to update soon!!! ^_^
Keep up the wonderful work!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey here's a funny thought. What happens if one of her friends stop by to visit her and find her house beat to hell and full of hot, muscular men who are constantly fighting but she's not around? Heh heh. I know, it has absolutely nothing to do with your story. just a silly little thought that jumped in my head. sorry, back to the review now.
So she's going to leave, huh? I'd probably do the same thing, but somehow I can't help but think she's not going to get very far because of the baby. Vegeta wouldn't let his grandchild be raised not fully understanding its Saiyajin heritage, even if he's not happy about the circumstances.
Whoa, did I write all that? Okay, I'm gonna shut up now. Please update soon. I love this story. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I hope some one stops her, If not trunks then it should be Vegeta. lol I like this story. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...great turn of plot! Is Trunks going to show up and stop her from leaving? WIll he follow her? Will vegeta forbid her from actually leaving? Eeeks!
One question - what does she look like? And what's her name??? If you left these intentionally unknown - then I'm really impressed! It really makes it so much easier for the reader to imagine it could really happen! :) |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
WOAH... |
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