| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: MiraiXenia18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say...errr...or type for that matter. The way you portrayed the DBZ characters is just phenomenal. You made them seem more real by altering their appearances and behavior. After all as one of the old says go: "Nothing is always as it seems."
Trunks’s personality was the biggest shock, but it doesn’t seem far fetched one bit. They never accentuate their saiyan instincts in the show enough. The writing style is incredible and I have to say that you keep the characters within their respective personalities even if you tweaked them a bit for the plot.
Trunks did that!! OMG…and then he acted as if he didn’t care!!! I don’t blame her for leaving at all. The pain she received has me a little confused though. Did it derive from the fact that she’s human and pregnant with a saiyan-jin’s child? Or did it come about because Trunks wasn’t with her? I have read many fics where when one person within the relationship has their bond shut down by the other it causes increased pain. I am not sure which one it is. However, since Bulma and Chichi are human it makes the second possibility more probable to me.
She lost the baby. Oh God….That must be one of the worst feelings in the world. I honestly never saw that coming in a million years. I thought she’d get better, but considering the dark angst that this story revolves around, that would be highly unlikely, huh?
Then Trunks’s speech…… I feel so bad now for being mad at him!! He’s the good guy all over again. AAARRRGGGHHH!! You mix up your audiences’ feelings too much! He never wanted to hurt her. He just wanted to pretend that he hadn’t done any of those awful things and that he wouldn’t be hurt anymore. Though I still cant excuse his blatant ignorance for the situation. He wanted to keep his distance, yes, but couldn’t he have picked up the notion of talking to her a little sooner?? And he cried!! If that wasn’t the point where ever reader wanted to bash themselves for ever feeling any bit of anger towards him. God knows I did!!
And the way you wrote it without mentioning what your name is. I loved that. It make it sound like the reader themselves are in the story. I love it when authors do that!!
I LOVE this story so much!! It sweeps you up, captivating your attention completely as you imagination delves into the every word. This is now truly one of my favorite fics.
You don’t update often huh? ::gives evil glare:: Another author that I will have to wait forever on. LOL I don’t mind really, update when you can and when you have time. Being pressured into your writing makes it dull and well unenjoyable on both parts and who wants to write then?!
Man this has to be one of my longest reviews. But I’ve been told by many that I’m a typing junky. ^_^ Hopefully you’ll update within the next two months. If you don’t I’ll fear I’ll go insane. Loved the fic!! Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 01:13 CDT
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Wiating for next... chappie...Yay..I'm the 100th reviewer so you should give me a gift and that is to update faster....hehehehe |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: June 09, 2003 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story UPDATE SOOOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: emi On: May 14, 2003 18:44 CDT
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omg. woderful story,yes i was truly saddened by all that happend. this actually reminds me og my bf he is truly strange and im no longer sure how he feels about me. One minute he says he cant live w/o me and is calling me... the next he doesnt talk to me and he just ignores me. This story is very good b/c although we dont all have a saiya-jin in our life we do have someone remotely like them. I truly love ur story and ur writing style please update soon. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 08:13 CDT
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I love it! Trunks isn't a cold-hearted bastard after-all. But now I feel sorry for him, damn it. Oh well. Great chapter. looking forward to the next one. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay u updated. That was a great chap and you left it hanging. Not fair buthey keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 13:23 CDT
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Uh oh, well at least Vegeta's gone, but how exactly is Trunks going to 'handle' this? Please let him behave reasonably. |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a cliffhanger!!!! Trunks, like a hero, saves his mate!!! About time the boy did something right, dammit! ;) Great job with this chapter. Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 12:56 CDT
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You already have enough reviews, but considering that i never review anything unless i like it, here's my mark. :)
This is a good story, i have to say that the NC17 scared me away 3 times, but then when i came across this sroty a 4th time, i actually checked it out, forgetting completely that an NC17 was at the top. ...Until i saw the next chapter, but by then i was already hooked. :P
This is really good and i've read your smoke and mirrors fic too. With writing like yours, i hope to see you on the playing field called "Published Authors". The world needs decent writers nowadays, they're so lacking in them lately. |
Reviewed By: Mina Son [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yello!! I've been waiting patiently for a update, it's just the suspense is killing me.*jumps off bridge and dies*
Goten: Know look what you did. A fellow reader just commited suicide from the lack of reviews.
Mina: *Ghost rises from the dead.* Huh... I'm dead..yay I'm free from the suspense of what is goibng to happen next. What is Trunks going to say? What about the rest of the z-gang, how did they take the news especially Vegta? Does Trunks really care for her? Will they ever go back to there own diminsion?.... what its back.. Please update soon to release me out of my misry. From the dead I hope ever thing is going Okay for you know. Ja-Ne. |
Reviewed By: Leena On: April 14, 2003 12:21 CDT
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I'm sorry to hear about the events which have befallen you at the moment. I will keep you in my prayers. In the end all will be well.
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As always, great chapter. Now I will wait patiently for the next chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Rita On: April 13, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a real enjoyment to read. This story has had me riveted to it since page 1. You have a wonderful style of writing. Please continue you have me very intrigued. I need to know more. Please!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear about your mom. I hope everything works out.
Man, I can't believe she lost the baby! How did the rest of them take the news?? Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Tori On: April 09, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it but it would be great if you'd finish it!! I can't wait!!
-Tori |
Reviewed By: sunny On: April 08, 2003 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,
This was such a well written fic! I have become totally immersed into your story line. Perhaps because we all fantasize about a similar thing- having an anime hunk come to life. Mmmmmm. ^_~ This is sooo sad right now though. Sniff. Please update this as soon as you can. Good luck with your trying times as well.
~Sunny |
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