| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: 411 On: April 08, 2003 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I think its great, I can't wait to know what happens next. Please update soon, I was almost crying reading chapter 14 so please don't leave me like that. |
Reviewed By: lizzy On: April 08, 2003 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! She couldn't have lost the baby! *grabs twilight by the frount of the shirt and shakes violently* i can't beleive you made her lose the baaaaaaaaaabyyyyyyyyyy!! *falls on the floor crying/wailing* WAAAAAAAAAAA! Your so MEAN! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 08, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! THt was such a sad chappie! What is going to happen next? Umm.......... Tunks.... *slaps myself in the head*. How does Trunks feel about everything? And what about Vegeta at the lose of his grandchild? I'm hoping that you will have time to update, and that your mom feels better. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was powerful to that and i hope everything goes well for you and your family. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
*cries very, very hard*
SO DAMN SAD!! ITS NOT FAIR!!
I'm so sorry you've been having a hard time :( life is never easy, but no one should be put through the bullshit you have been... *huggles*
Anyway... Great chapter as usual!! I look forward to your next installment!! |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think your fic is great you should write more! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: April 04, 2003 20:08 CST
Comment/Review:
.The suspense is killing me. It's been a month since you last updated, were all waithing for chapter 14 to be up. So pllease update. |
Reviewed By: leena On: April 02, 2003 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!!!!! I'm sure i'm not the only one who's just dying to read the next chapter. Alas, I do hope you have time to update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 28, 2003 01:02 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffs** It's bein so long since you last updated and I'm going crazy! The suspense is killing me! *Walks off and jumps off a bridge, but doesn't die**** Ahhh..... I hate you.... Please update soon or the Trunks lynch mob will kill him,,,, we have him!!!!!!!!!!!
*sitting in an asylam talking to herself**** |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 19, 2003 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello people I 'm going insane. Krimson please update soon I cant take the suspense anymore, god please Update soon. I'm sure everyone is waiting for you to upadte, I hope you don't have god damn writers block. So please update soon................ |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 16, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.Please update.
Pweety Pwease. |
Reviewed By: Rina Kai On: March 13, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been back here for a long timw! Great fic, it creates such an intense image of the charachters. I really love this fic and I hope you will update soon. Make her have twins, Boys...... |
Reviewed By: Mina son On: March 13, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey!!
Aren't you going to update yet? It's lets see too many days with without an update. Me go Crazy now.
So please update soon........... DIE TRUNKS DIE.... MUWHAHAHAHA. I don't really mean that. I have a question. Okay Trunks has recovered from his mating insictinces. Is Trunks like, feeling guilty becausee he forced you to be his mate and everything, and also the case of rape. |
Reviewed By: leena On: March 08, 2003 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter thirteen was great, just like the others. It was nice to know how they reacted towards the situation at hand. I do hope you are able to post up chapter fourteen!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BishounenChaser On: March 08, 2003 14:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh wow I love this fic so much! It's the best self instertion fic I've ever read please continue |
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