| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: Passionova On: November 26, 2002 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my dear...YOU HAVE THE GIFT!..THAT was the BEST chapter so far!..Ive read many superior quality fics but you have managed to surpass excellence level!
I respect your "choice" of "mate" in Trunks ,but Gods!..your depiction of Vegeta..and his no nonesense attitude , not to mention the intensity of writing and characterisation, is leaving me breathless..
Congratulations!..Im in awe and stunned by this fic so far!
KUDOS ! KUDOS!! :) |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: November 25, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! You suck! No more cliffhangers! AHHHHHHHHHHH! EEEEEEEEEH! I hate you....*sniff* you can make it up to me by posting longer chapters and more chapters cuz you luff me so much and I'm one demading bitch of a reviewer. So continue! MWAHAHAHAHA! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great two ch keep them coming I love it |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i can't wait to see what comes up next. |
Reviewed By: Satan's Widdle Hellper On: November 21, 2002 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story of its type! You SOOOOOOOOOO need to continue this as soon as possible. But could you PLEASE lengthen the chapters, ya know...to make me happy? ^_^ \\// |
Reviewed By: KrimsonTwilight [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 04:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Kill you? No...maim perhaps *smiles* Just kidding. You can contact me at: FatalxTouch@aol.com (didn't know how else to get it to you) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excelt writting loved it keep it up I weant to klnow what happens next. |
Reviewed By: DeathLloyd On: November 20, 2002 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didnt REALLY read it i was wounderin whats your e-mail address. I tried to figure what it was -.- and seeing i cant talk to you any other way i did this... dont kill me cuz this aint a review i just want to e-mail you -.- and NO its not a chain main, porn mail or any of that. |
Reviewed By: Hybrid On: November 18, 2002 08:32 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.... |
Reviewed By: Passionova On: November 18, 2002 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im STILL swallowing convulsively trying to get my heartbeat back after that! :)
Please write what happens next??..will you both be caught? Will he understand the consiequenses of his actions..will you?? DO TELL!! |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
All i can say is that you are a very talented writer, so talented that i actually wanted to reveiw it. This is an ideal i have never come across and i have read ALOT!!!! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: BabyKat02 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There is only one word to describe this... tight... this is good. One problem though, when you write a story like this, you can't just stop. You have to keep going. When I come back tomorrow there better be some more chapters. |
Reviewed By: leena On: November 22, 2002 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an intriguing fanfic. I can't wait to see what happens next with the story. I do hope you have time to write the next chapter. You may have heard this already but you are such a talented writer. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give this whole story a 10 cause it is that good and I also hate cliffhangers. But any way hurry up and put a new chapter up lol |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: February 21, 2003 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god what's going to happen next.
I really hate you. Your so damne talented. When I read other fanfics I can guess what might happen next, but your fic keeps me on the edge of my seat. Your I deas are so creativy I've never read a fic like this before, it's so intense.
Will Trunks leave her?
Please tell what happens.
Oh and I'm still mad at you for not updating faster, so could you please update faster next time. |
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