| "Crossing the Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 116 ] |
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Reviewed By: sillydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...NEED...MORE!!!!!!! DON'T STOP THERE, WHAT HAPPENS NEXT? PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
Reviewed By: veggiesprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 04:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh its getting good dont keep us waiting plz continue as soon as u can and vegeta being nice who would have thunk lol
~veggie-p~ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want more and she is pregnat oh lord this is not going to be fun . well any way keep this up and you have me on the edge of my seat |
Reviewed By: veggiesprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 01:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more pretty plz ^_^ i like i like cant wait to see the rest
~Veggie-P~ |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 11:34 CST
Comment/Review:
"The candle had burned away completely, it's crimson wax having trickled over the edge of the dresser and onto the carpet like a pool of blood." I loved the imagery when I read the previous line. I love the story :) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like cliffhangers either, you have me hooked and I want to see what happeneds lol keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Hybrid On: December 15, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH DUDE WHY'D YA STOP IT THERE!! darn you and your cliffhanger to the inferno below!!! I love this story and I do so hope you put a new chappie up soon...
DEATH TO ALL CLIFFHANGERS YAAAHHHHH!!!! (waves sword around insanely) ^-^ |
Reviewed By: sillydragon On: December 18, 2002 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mina Son On: March 16, 2003 13:00 CST
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To be or not to be is the question, but in this case the question is when are you going to update!! I feel so sad now. It really dosn't help when you read the fic almost every single day and there aren't any updates. **Sigh**. You sure are evil, That was the biggest, cruelist cliffhanger created in the whole god damn world. So please update soon. You said that you would have updated last monday but now, it's Sunday. Life sucks, now if you don't update. And would you tell Trunks I don't hate him anymore, his his stupid actions are a essence of guilt afterwards. I would really like to get my questions answered someday.***sigh***** So please update soon. I swear I'm going to go insane if there isn't an update tonight, and it will be all your fault. Well I'm going to shut up now before Vegeta kills me? O and since Goku and the saiyans are in the real world, would there family and friends be wondering where they are? |
Reviewed By: veggiesprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 03:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope u update soon its getting good so update !!!plz plz plz u gotta update soon this a great story a whole different point of view where they aint what they seem very cool i love it and ur a very good author so plz update
~Veggie-P~^_^ |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This fic is incredible, and I like how you wrote it. You'rean incredible writer, and now one of my fav authors!!! Hurry and finish this, oh Bride of Trunks!!! LOL!!! |
Reviewed By: Passionova On: November 26, 2002 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my dear...YOU HAVE THE GIFT!..THAT was the BEST chapter so far!..Ive read many superior quality fics but you have managed to surpass excellence level!
I respect your "choice" of "mate" in Trunks ,but Gods!..your depiction of Vegeta..and his no nonesense attitude , not to mention the intensity of writing and characterisation, is leaving me breathless..
Congratulations!..Im in awe and stunned by this fic so far!
KUDOS ! KUDOS!! :) |
Reviewed By: S.W.H On: November 25, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! You suck! No more cliffhangers! AHHHHHHHHHHH! EEEEEEEEEH! I hate you....*sniff* you can make it up to me by posting longer chapters and more chapters cuz you luff me so much and I'm one demading bitch of a reviewer. So continue! MWAHAHAHAHA! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a great two ch keep them coming I love it |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i can't wait to see what comes up next. |
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