| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Galadriel On: April 07, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I like your fic... it really makes me crazy, seeing these 2(Kagome and Inuyasha) not getting along too well.. So please update, bring them together and make us readers happy! ;) |
Reviewed By: Paranormal On: April 05, 2003 15:53 CST
Comment/Review:
i think you have really great style and the stroyline is great! the date idea sounds wonderful and i have to admit that when you said that inyasha would be going through his human stage while in kagome's world i could picture them going out together, meeting kagome's friends or something like that...i can't wait to find out what happens next, post the next part soon onegai!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: EneiAkki On: March 31, 2003 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have laid an excellent foundation for, what can easily be, one of the best fanfics I have ever read before. You have managed to capture the attitudes, mannerisms, and overall style of the characters and portrayed them in a fashion which can match many good writers of today. You have a gift and I hope more of this story can be generated because of it. |
Reviewed By: dogflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fanfic overall. Write more please |
Reviewed By: Medianoche On: March 08, 2003 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY SO FAR! KEEP IT UP! |
Reviewed By: Sakimi On: March 07, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love this fic~! I think it would be cool to have Inuyasha run into Kagome and her school friends (: hehehe keep up the awesome work :D |
Reviewed By: Hyper Shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep this going. i'm giving you 10's across the board. |
Reviewed By: angle4u2nv [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 12:38 CST
Comment/Review:
i think that you should have inu yasha and kagome doing a certain something |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 25, 2003 14:16 CST
Comment/Review:
That was just so wonderfully written! You capture the characters' personalities so well. I can't wait for the next chapters. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked. the plot is very well ordered and its very cute! Nice JOB
Mikky |
Reviewed By: 2pac On: February 23, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up and finish writing. This is a really good fic and I'm not very patient. |
Reviewed By: Rika On: February 23, 2003 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Another superb chapter, I can't wait for the next! |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: February 22, 2003 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked it, just add a little spice if you know what I mean. Maybe you should make her grand pa trick them into going somewhere in her time that is away from the public eye but still romantic. Or wahtever just keep writing, its a great story. |
Reviewed By: dbz obsessed On: February 21, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it was a fluff chapter, it was great. The characters are so IC, I can visualize everything you write. I loved the rose and storyline around it. I don't know how soon, but you will get your pic.
As for suggestions for future chapters...Kagome's friends have to me InuYasha sometime, whether it's at the McD's or a school function, etc. It could even be the night he is human. He should also be able to confront Hojo, maybe at a school dance or a movie. Ya, he should have to see a movie...maybe, that takes place during the feudal time. Stephanie thought InuYasha and Kagome should drive in a convertable somewhere and of course, the lemon. Anyway, there are a few ideas...I'll be waiting to see what you decide to write about in next the chapter. I hope you write a little about what is happening to Miroku and Sango. If you don't, Burned will be unhappy. |
Reviewed By: lia_girl On: February 21, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv ur fic!!! Hope that u write more soon and keep updating. I wish that I don't hava to wait that long like for all the other fics. I enjoyed ur story by the way |
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