| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shiari On: February 20, 2003 17:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Mall!!!!!!!!! ::pounces:: this is a really really good fic! continue pleaaase! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: February 19, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I can not wait to see how it turns out and what exactly is Naraku's plan for Inuyasha and Kagoma. Please hurry and write more! |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: KiiKii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Wow, what a fantastice fic!!! Your plot is really original, and I'd crack up at the thought of Inu-Yasha facing the mall! Lol... keep the fic coming, because it's really wonderful! Thanks!
~*LiMeAwAyGiRl~* |
Reviewed By: DBprincess116 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 09:49 CST
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT STUFF MORE PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 06:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2 thumbs up! This piece is coming along beautifully. IY and Kagome are very much in character, making it smoother and easier to read. I can totally envision everything happening as if I'm glued to the boob tube ^_^ I can't to see how this story continues!
~EM |
Reviewed By: pyro_gal4U [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 03:55 CST
Comment/Review:
C'est moi, Rei-chan! You have to write more la petite! Lol, basic translation, my name's rei-chan and you gotta write more of this story! It's great, chere. Lol, I have french on the brain, sorry. |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: February 17, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this so much!!!! The whole rose thing turned my heart to silly puddy!!! Ooooooh you just have to write more soon....I don't think I can wait a month. Please?? Pretty please??? I'm a hopeless romantic, and the wait will drive me CRAZY!!! |
Reviewed By: sammie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
MAGNIFICENT! update! update! update! whoo hoo! pwetty pwezzz!!! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. I'll be waiting for you to write more. Also was thinking why not have Kagome take him to the beach or something like that.
Well , any ways keep it comeing.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: February 17, 2003 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT! I can't wait for more fluff! ^_^ this is really cute, and I hope you can upload faster if possible! Thanks!
*~sorena27~* |
Reviewed By: Raven On: February 17, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was good, its now one of my favorites, i love how you have the story line done, and i think the feelings between inuyasha and Kagome are cool. Its just a bit confusing at times but that just makes it better to read so as i can figure out the problem myself. Please update again soon. |
Reviewed By: Alia Lowe On: February 17, 2003 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far. I love the idea and I love your style of writing. You've done a terrific job of portraying Inu-chan and Kagome's emotions. I know how hard it is to write those situations out and I commend you for doing such a wonderful job.
Maybe in a future chapter you could send Inuyasha to the mall. It would be funny to see Inuyasha vs. the escalator. Lol
Maybe you could even send Inuyasha to school one day and use your creative writing rules to make Inuyasha a human ALL DAY. That would certainly make Hoho (I mean Hojo) jealous all day, not to mention introduce Kagome's friends to the guy that they have suspected she has the 'hots for' (Inu-chan).
Feel free to hit me up on my e-mail if you need any more ideas. Just look it up at mm.org (it won't let me sign in right now, grr).
~Alia |
Reviewed By: gackt_emu On: February 17, 2003 12:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write the next part soon! I can't wait for it! I know you're busy but could you try updating it sooner? Thanks! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: February 17, 2003 07:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious and down right cute. Inuyasha stuck in Kagome's time is even more funny than visa verse. Everything is new and amazing to him. Kawaii. |
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