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"Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ]
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 Reviewed By: inufan  On: March 20, 2003 09:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know if anybody's ever told you this but your fanfics are GREAT! I love this one sooo much, please write more.
 Reviewed By: hurry!  On: March 13, 2003 19:21 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
excuse me if I'm being rude or anything, but you need to get up off your lazy butt and start typing!! I can't stand the suspense!
 Reviewed By: love it love it love it!  On: March 07, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm not kidding when I give you all tens for this fic. I love the original idea, and your superb writing style! The style of writing really kept me into the story, and overall, I loved it! Just enough waff and storyline! ^_^

I'm checking everyday for an update from you!

Great job and please update soon! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 03, 2003 10:15 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aaaaahh... Insightful writing, so refreshing! I love Inuyasha's explanation of why marriage wouldn't mean much to him. They don't all have to be full of lemony goodness to make my most-kickin'-'fic-ever list.

Oh yeah and what monkey86 said.
 Reviewed By: write more!!  On: February 23, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! I love your first fic "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" and I just love your sequal even more!! you have got to write more of this stuff. The title of this fic reminds me of "Look Who's Talking Too" hmmmm... I wonder if you got the name from that??
 Reviewed By: ale  On: March 31, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!!


Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
 Reviewed By: Silvertongue [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 21, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah! I love it! Such a kickass fic, I'm serious. I *love* Inuyasha in this fic, he's awesome. My favorite part was probably the "yes lord inuyasha" part... haha, so funny. Great job, I can't wait for more!
 Reviewed By: lemon gal  On: February 19, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it soooooo much. Pwease write more, is there gonna b more juicy lemon?
 Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 18, 2003 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: lemia  On: February 17, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
update soon,oh it was kickass ^_^
 Reviewed By: sorena27  On: February 16, 2003 03:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it!

My favorite lemon! ^_^ this is so cute, and I can't wait for the wedding! Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: Kalika Higurashi  On: February 15, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sorry but I really love this fanfic and you must update quickly! I'd love to know what happens next! :D
 Reviewed By: morningirl  On: February 08, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. Are you going to continue with it? I really like it. i've read alot of I/K fics but this one has to be the best so far. Please write more!
 Reviewed By: lizzie  On: February 13, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great update to this fic of yours...nice touch with the ring selection!!! Hope to read more from you as always!
 Reviewed By: Ithilwen  On: February 13, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This version of Miroku rocks! Even more than in "Lemonade," you're giving us a great pic of Miroku's levelheaded side translated into a modern context.

"You can't do that! This is Wisconsin!" I am so lucky I wasn't drinking anything during this one. I can only dry off my keyboard so many times...
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