| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Title: It's me Miss Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 19, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! I've been printing this story out, and I don't think the teachers like me coming in empty handed and leaving out with a thick stack. But I like the long chapters and this is the best sequel ever. Well I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with a squel. I like it so keep up the good work. Love MN
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: May 14, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Great chapter. I can't believe I hadn't checked up until now! Well, glad you updated. ^_^
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Reviewed By: stephino On: April 29, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! i was afraid you forgot this storie^^, i do have a bit of constructive critisisum...the constant talk or "aura" is really annoying. ut you have a great writing talent
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 12:56 CDT
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So this Inuyasha did know Kagome at fifteen... But this Kagome didn't grow up in Tokyo or go through that well. Did something happen to make her forget, or is it some previous incarnation Inuyasha remembers? (Reads on) Okay, so it is. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The cutest little dead tart this side of the well, eh Yash?" ~~~ But what's this? The underplot thickens; it thickens like thick things.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:33 CDT
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I read the first 13 chapters on the Hero in the 21st Century site and have been waiting and waiting for more. Please continue on!
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Reviewed By: Tori16 On: April 04, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Another Update! I can see the stage being set for a bit of remorse from Kikyou. Interesting that she showed up at all. As always, I enjoyed this chapter and am hoping that you won't make us wait so long for the next update!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I am glad you updated. ^_^ I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 13:17 CST
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Score! Chapter from Fujifunmum! This piece didn't feel as "complete" as other chapters have. It seemed more like a bunch of scenes thrown together than a unified chapter, but they were all good ones. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I, too, hope for the illumination of Inuyasha's past.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 20:05 CST
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Update please update this story is really good oh yeah i would like to hear kagome and Inuyasha say i love you to each other i don't think they say it enough
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Title: Autumn_Winds_42069
Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds_42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 00:09 CST
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WOW! I didn't think that you were on Mediaminer. I read your story on hero 21 fanfics. That just really amazes me that you are on here too. Your story was what got me interested in reading fanfics in the first place so will you plz update?
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Title: Creepy
Reviewed By: V4mps On: February 10, 2004 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason i marked down on the origionality/creativity is because inu/kagome stories have happened before... but never quite like this. Nice story, keep it up. Vamps
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Title: Please updated!
Reviewed By: LadyPantera On: January 14, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been loving your lemonade fics!! Please tell me you'll be finishing Lemonade, too! Please, please, please!! (with a cherry on top?)
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 On: November 03, 2003 21:12 CST
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WOW!! Great fanfic !! Plezz review!!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kag is just not gonna give him a break.... Then again, most of this he brought on himself... So will the crypticness of Yash's past be resolved or are the readers just left to wonder? great chapter, I was wondering when you were gonna update. Update again soon!!
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Title: Rooster Ravisher
Reviewed By: Jennifer Munson (AKA mightymightymunson) On: October 18, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent chapter. I was particularly fond of the "demon database" and the manic possessiveness of the father to be. (Clyde was as paranoid as they came, always locking doors, checking windows and whatnot...he didn't even have the excuse of a looney demon on his heels) I feel that I am at a disticnt disadvantage when reading this well crafted fic, since I am not as familliar with this manga/anime as most of your readers. Thankfully, you write in a way that allows me to still really enjoy reading this story even if I don't have the requisite background on many of the characters and the original plot line. As a neophyte, I do have some questions that I hope you can answer. 1.) Is the position of MIKO hereditary? 2.) Is our hot little dog demon immortal or does he just have a very, very long life span. 3.) Is Kagome carrying more than one child (pup?) I know that on this question, I'll have to just be patient and wait. 4.) What place do dogs demons (and Mikos) hold in Japanese Mythology? On A side note, I really am impressed with your writing ability. YOu are able to totally change the tone and content of your work depending on the story and the timeline. In Dreams we dreamt instead, your writing style complimented the time period. It was reserved and subtle. This story certainly has one hell of an edge to it and is completely believable as an AU fic taking place in a tough town. Your characters are as hard as ten penny nails...and delightfully realisitc. Super job! Best wishes, Jenn
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