| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Title: Autumn_Winds_42069
Reviewed By: Autumn_Winds_42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 00:09 CST
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WOW! I didn't think that you were on Mediaminer. I read your story on hero 21 fanfics. That just really amazes me that you are on here too. Your story was what got me interested in reading fanfics in the first place so will you plz update?
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Title: Creepy
Reviewed By: V4mps On: February 10, 2004 10:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason i marked down on the origionality/creativity is because inu/kagome stories have happened before... but never quite like this. Nice story, keep it up. Vamps
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Title: Please updated!
Reviewed By: LadyPantera On: January 14, 2004 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I've been loving your lemonade fics!! Please tell me you'll be finishing Lemonade, too! Please, please, please!! (with a cherry on top?)
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 On: November 03, 2003 21:12 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW!! Great fanfic !! Plezz review!!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kag is just not gonna give him a break.... Then again, most of this he brought on himself... So will the crypticness of Yash's past be resolved or are the readers just left to wonder? great chapter, I was wondering when you were gonna update. Update again soon!!
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Title: Rooster Ravisher
Reviewed By: Jennifer Munson (AKA mightymightymunson) On: October 18, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent chapter. I was particularly fond of the "demon database" and the manic possessiveness of the father to be. (Clyde was as paranoid as they came, always locking doors, checking windows and whatnot...he didn't even have the excuse of a looney demon on his heels) I feel that I am at a disticnt disadvantage when reading this well crafted fic, since I am not as familliar with this manga/anime as most of your readers. Thankfully, you write in a way that allows me to still really enjoy reading this story even if I don't have the requisite background on many of the characters and the original plot line. As a neophyte, I do have some questions that I hope you can answer. 1.) Is the position of MIKO hereditary? 2.) Is our hot little dog demon immortal or does he just have a very, very long life span. 3.) Is Kagome carrying more than one child (pup?) I know that on this question, I'll have to just be patient and wait. 4.) What place do dogs demons (and Mikos) hold in Japanese Mythology? On A side note, I really am impressed with your writing ability. YOu are able to totally change the tone and content of your work depending on the story and the timeline. In Dreams we dreamt instead, your writing style complimented the time period. It was reserved and subtle. This story certainly has one hell of an edge to it and is completely believable as an AU fic taking place in a tough town. Your characters are as hard as ten penny nails...and delightfully realisitc. Super job! Best wishes, Jenn
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 11:25 CDT
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So many lifetimes... Long-dead friends... Subtle, but sorrowful. An excellent contrast. So I guess Vegas isn't his home town so much as his more recent home town. ~ ~ ~ Oooooooh! Kagome's finding out that Inuyasha's been running around with all of her previous incarnations! He's so bus-ted!
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 21:59 CDT
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why aren't you updating? god dangit!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 14:42 CDT
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Don't worry fluffy she is still writing. She was just part of that power outage. Things are just starting to get to normal for her. Okay now the real reason I am writing this. There was this question buring in the back of my mind and I can't stand it any longer! When does Kagome make InuYasha explain his "relationship" with Kikyo as well as his use of the word "pups"? Come on a little hint. *looking up with puppy-dog eyes and quivering lips*
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:37 CDT
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keep it up!!!!!!!!! i usually have some "constructive" critism BUT i have none for you! this fic ROCKS!!!!! you RULE!!!! KEEP wrITING! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLEAZZZZZZZZZZ if you can't b/c of skool that i unserstand cuz i'm in the same sistuation......but plezzzzz!!! |
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter as always, you've never let me down. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work.
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 21:19 CDT
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I was right! I was right! Bad InuYasha! Making Sango and Miroku do all that work for you and turning around and giving them that godforsaken eyesore.
I see that InuYasha still has Shippo treading around him. So possesive! I like how you made Sango block InuYasha. I never thought about doing that when I didn't want to talk to an annoying friend. And I think that their home life is going to be really sweet but, right now InuYasha has this crissies to keep Kagome caged but.....Its not going to last forever. I wonder it he will let her go to the wedding?
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. As far as I'm concerned you can do no wrong. It was nice to finally get some answers too. At least there was some reason behind the wedding from hell, although I still wouldn't call it "fun". Can't wait for the nest installment. |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe.........gotta love it~! plez write more! i luve it!
-locachickea |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 22, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I donīt know how many times i declare my unconditional love for this fic...but Iīll do it again.
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I LOVE THIS FIC!
The fear that Kagome fells, all the possibilities, the possessiviness from Inuyasha.
Very good...
Canīt wait for the next chapter. |
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