| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenny On: June 23, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a very good fanfic and I hope there is more to the story soon. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 22, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Very well written! Only complaint I got is not enough fluff between Inu/Kag! Otherwise, really good chapter! ^_^
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 21, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very pleased with this story and I look foward to see where you are going to take the readers(us)next. I also dig this suave Inu Yasha. I can honestly say that I am truly intriged by this twist so much that I an going to read part 1 I Have Lemonade, Please. Be lookinh for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm...what other jobs could Yash have had...I can think of a couple I would like to see him try;). Great chapter. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very little is right; I'm eager to find out what's next! |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 01:22 CDT
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Wow, it's great that you updated so soon! This was another wonderful chapter! I've noticed you like to leave us on a cliff-hanger so please update just as soon next time or I may die of anticipation and you would be out one reviewer(I know, like you care). Hope to hear from you soon anyway. |
Reviewed By: Chelsea On: June 15, 2003 03:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, and how Sess and Kag don't get along....this oughta be good! If it's possible, try to add more of the lemony goodness we all love!
I'm not a hentai, really! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! who ever thought it? Sesshoumaru a pop star? He, Love it!
I can't wait for the next chapter, please continue and update soon. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 07:50 CDT
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I can't help but think that Sess would find it a bit undignified, but considering the other carreer options opened to a long-haired bish with his eyeshadow tattooed on, he had little choice but to be a rock star.
This is so over the top! It's delicious! Anyone watching me read this would think I'd LOST MY MIND.
So is Tetsusaiga the thing Inu will get or the thing he had? I'm always up for a look at how people think youkai culture might work. |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 08, 2003 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: wut's up?!! On: June 05, 2003 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've been like, waiting for this update for like, EVER and u totally like, put me down!! It was AWFUL; no plot, not much talking, and even wrose, no lemony goodness. I'm sorry but u really let me down. Please, do try to do better work, especially if ur gonna take so long to update!
OK, now people, tell me who's the bitch? I, who wait patiently for the third chapter to be out and got mad at someone who dared insult the creativity of fujifunmum or wut's up?! who insults her??
Fujifunmum, I greatly enjoy this chapter! Please update soon.
wut's up?! bitch, learn respect! |
Reviewed By: CherryEvil On: June 07, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love this story! Could you e-mail me when you update? |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg that ending has me speachless like what the? Sesshy-chan a singer? O.O don't take forever to update again!! or i shall spaz lol |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 16:41 CDT
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It's SO good to have you back. I was totally afraid you had died or something. Or worse...you just got bored and didn't want to finish. That would have made me sad. Oh well, your back now. Great chapter as usual. Update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so happy to see you're back and updating ^^ Love the bonding and the way Inuyasha is trying hard to make Kagome happy. Bruce Lee impression? This I got to see. |
Reviewed By: wut's up?!! On: June 05, 2003 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've been like, waiting for this update for like, EVER and u totally like, put me down!! It was AWFUL; no plot, not much talking, and even wrose, no lemony goodness. I'm sorry but u really let me down. Please, do try to do better work, especially if ur gonna take so long to update! |
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