| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas (too lazy to wait for sign in) On: March 28, 2003 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me the downstairs noise was Yami coming to get the boys and take them away. Poor Yugi chan! You just love torturing these poor hikaris don't you? If you were doing this to Malik as well I would have to track you down and seriously yell at you! Two hikaris is bad enough, but all three would probably annoy me. Please I beg of you, update this fic really really really soon! aragato! ja ne! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: CODY THOMAS On: March 22, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! onegai!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 08:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Yippey! Ryou and Yugi are going to get to go home with Yami and Bakura! I love this! Yay! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas too lazy to sign in On: March 19, 2003 16:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Well on the one hand there is my Hentai obsessed mind which would love to see Ryou and Yami. On the other there is my Hikari soft spot that wants Yami to rip the camera off the wall bust the door down, take both boys knock out both fathers and get the hell out of there with Bakura and then maybe have a sweet little lemon scene I can't decide!!!!!!!!!! Kuso!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ann On: March 18, 2003 18:00 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooh EVIL, leaving us like that.
What to do????????????
There's only really one choice. If Yami doesn't go through with it, Ryou is gonna get VERY hurt. At least Yami can be gentle to try and NOT cause Ryou pain. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess Yami got to do what he got to do. At leaset Ryou wouldn't be into much pain this time. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great chance to have a lemon going! bring it on! ^___^. though i would prefer bakura and ryou.... o well. this is good enough. hehe |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 12, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is good but i feel sorry for ryou and yugi and hurry up and put the plan into action. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good chapter. nicely writen |
Reviewed By: Red Dragon On: March 09, 2003 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Red Dragon" Hey Red here it started as an ok ficcy but now *glares until her eyes become hard like blood red rubies* HOW DARE U HURT YUIG AND RYOU LIKE THAT U NASTY BASTARDS U SICK PERVERTS THE WORST DEMENTED FREAKS ON THIS PLANET I'VE GOT JUST THE THING FOR YOU SICK MEN meet my sister known as the Black Red Dragon"
B.Red Dragon*with a cold almost dead glare and with a sinister frost bitten voice*" hello u sick bastards my sis told me of what u did and now i have my own punishments to give first with the fathers of yugi and Ryou * ties both fathers down brings out two whips one of molten fire so hot it leave blister and broken boned for a week and another of 10,00000000000000000 bolts of lightning so intense it leaves that person or even creatures in a shocked stupor and whips both men 5 million times for each bit of pain they gave yugi ang ryou* and now for that nurse *she takes a tube of raw acid so strong it can melt the densed metal and injects it into the nures mouth and all over him and whatches the nurse scream his head off as well as the other two*
Red"O_O!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i guess u reall dont like having ryou or yugi hurt do u sis
B.Red"hmmm nope for if there is one thing im greatly like u sis is my dislik/hatred/loathing of those who hurt yugi and ryou FOR THEY ARE NOTHING BUT @%$#%%@%%#%@%#%^$^$&%&%&%&$###%$%@$%^#^!!!!!!!!!!!just so u know
Red 0_0!!!!!!!!!!!!! " i see ^_____^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok thanks for the notice and the support i guess well i guess thats all um are u done with those men sis"
B.Red" |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't leave us there. Please update soon. Please please |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn u. meanie! argh... stupid cliffie. i love this fic. update mooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: GREEN GAL 13 On: March 07, 2003 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!!! I love This! Why?
1: Bakura isnt bad
2: You torture the bishonens {spell check}
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
ITS THE GREATEST!!!!!!!!!!!
Honestly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 07, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update the story soon the is great but sad. |
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