| "Father, Mother, Lover" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yuki On: March 07, 2003 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SAD THOUGH!!!!! LOVE THIS!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl (not logged in) On: March 07, 2003 11:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this story. it is so good i can't explain it. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: March 06, 2003 22:29 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH YOU CAN'T LEAVE OFF THERE! Please write more!!!! NOW!!! I'm begging you ! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: March 06, 2003 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH YOU CAN'T LEAVE OFF THERE! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: March 02, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Write more! Poor Ryou! Poor Yugi! |
Reviewed By: Danielle (again) ^_^ On: March 02, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay you finally Updated !!!!!!!!!
This is such a good story
I still come here everyday to see if you updated
I have already reviewed here about 4 times
I am not making any sense am i ~_0? |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! two chps! poor yugi and ryou... can we have a four-some lemon with yami yugi ryou and bakura? hehe. ur one of the fastest writters i no, n i think ur angst stuff is really good. keep it up! hope to see more soon. |
Reviewed By: lapislazuli On: February 28, 2003 23:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting fic. i hope it is all four of them together, it seems unfair to separate them when they're all living together |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chp was to short! more! ^_^. at first, i wanted yami/yugi n bakura/ryou, but now i wanna four some! yea, all four of themm... *eyes go sparkly* be nice to widdle ryou... poor him... ^^ |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
read this on ff.net . . just had to read and review it here too . . . MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Right . . . |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 28, 2003 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That short? Oh well! I love it! Write more! And I think it should be Yami/Ryou Bakura/Yugi |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 28, 2003 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That short? Oh well! I love it! Write more! And I think it should be Yami/Ryou Bakura/Yugi |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!! YEA!!!!!! poor Ryou and Yugi!!!! waaaah! can't you be just a little bit nicer to them? Yami is going to rescue them right? pweeze? I can't stand to see chibi bishies hurting without a rescuer. I would save them myself, but I'm not in your story!!!!!! update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: February 27, 2003 11:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not... gonna cry... *goes really teary* I'm not... gonna cry... *bursting to flow* I'm not... *can't hold it.. any... longer...* WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vash On: February 25, 2003 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
please make it y/y and r/b i don't like it when the yami/hikari pairings get mixed... and i think that ryou should be able to stay with yami and bakura after the trial, then you could have a kidnapping thing *^_^* |
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