| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bronie Bite On: May 20, 2003 20:31 EDT
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AHH YES ITS ME AGAIN............I HAVENT BEEN HERE IN A WHILE....N E WAYZ LETS GET TO THE POINT YOU NEED TO UPDATE!IT NEVER TOOK YOU THIS LONG TO UPDATE B 4......DONT START NOW!PWEEESEEEE..........BY THE WAY THANX FOR YOUR FABOULAS WRITTING!AND WHEN YOU GET DONE WITH A NEW CHAPTER E-MAIL ME AT Birdy Gurl2003@aol.com. Arigatou!! |
Reviewed By: Berserker On: May 10, 2003 02:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one great fanfic your writing. Kagome as a youkai was subtle and very well executed. The title charcter's role and presence was very reduced. But what suprised me the most about this story was how I have gained more respect for Sesshoumaru. I'm eagerly waiting to see happens to Youkai Kagome and the rest of the cast. |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 00:58 EDT
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Awwww... Kagome left for home. Poor Sesshoumaru. But, if Kagome cared as deeply for Sesshoumaru as she claimed, wouldn't her 'home' have been with him? *knocks Kagome on the head* What were you thinking?! Ugh.
That was a great chapter; sad; but great neverless. I can't wait for the next angst filled chapter. I'm curious as to how all this will play out. Will Sesshoumaru and Kagome meet up again? Will he forgive her for leaving and not considering his love and that of Shippo and Rin as home? And lets not forget about Inuyasha, what role does he have? See, I'm filled with questions. I need answers, darnit! ~_^ I hope you hurry with the next chapter, because the suspense just might kill me! O_o; Ok, ok, so it might not kill me, but it'll will make me darn uncomfortable! Do you want to be responsible for that?! :P O_o; Ummm... don't mind me.....
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: Chick On: May 04, 2003 02:54 EDT
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First off chapter 18 was really sad but good!! And I don't know what you said to get MiniMorr to contiue her story 'the bet' but thanks for inspiring her cause I just hated to see the story removed or somebody to take it over!! Keep on writing and i'm sorry about the friend who's story was copied!! |
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 09:33 EDT
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please tell me that this is not the end!!!!!!!! that was probably one of the greatest although saddest chapters ive ever read! :'( i was crying! but great job on this and the rest of the fic. dont even think of stopping there!!!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Devil On: May 03, 2003 01:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A little sad but very romantic. Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: inusasha-sama On: May 02, 2003 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good i like it. please udate soon |
Reviewed By: lea On: May 02, 2003 19:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh...my...god, that was the sadest chapter i have read so far, i crying, litterally. please excuse that other note, my computer wasn't working, so it wouldn't show the next chapter, but i found it. will kagome come back?? please say she will, or else i think sessoumarou will kill himself because he feels so alone. PLEASE don't let that happen! please let her come back. will the shikonotama be revieved or something? is that how she gets back? or does she not come back at all? what will shippou say?? sorry if im asking so many questions, i just must find out, pleaseeeeeeeeee write more!! now, i have to go crawl in a corner and cry, excuse me. |
Reviewed By: lea On: May 02, 2003 18:54 EDT
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i don't get it, what's new, i didn't see a new chapter, every time i clicked on "information" it just went right back to the begining, well, im off to check your other fic, and please, write more of this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rei On: May 02, 2003 03:03 EDT
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OMG! That has got to be the saddest chapter EVER! Pretty please don't make it too angsty! My heart seriously hurts when I think about how unhappy both Sesshoumaru and Kagome will be in the next chapter! Is there going to be ANY Sess/Kag happiness in it, or will I have to wait for the chapter after next? *I hope not!* Well, please update reallllly soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inukamisashi On: May 02, 2003 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'ts a sad chapter for me *sobs* will Kagome come back? Please do not let Sesshomaru change his feelings towards Kagome
Please let Kagome go back to Sessh-chan as soon as possible *sobs* :(
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!! Onegai!!! |
Reviewed By: Kithkin On: May 01, 2003 23:13 EDT
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I'm so sorry thatso much happened at once for you. Yes, I did join PPP because of your mention. I will say, though, that this chapter made me cry. Yes, I know it fits in with Kagome's character, but it just hurts, but in a good way, I suppose. I hate to not have anything productive or critical to say, but I'm truly enjoying reading your work. I check MM.org just to see if you've updated. Thank you again!! |
Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2003 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that made me want to cry, wait it MADE me cry, :::Tear::: awww how much angst, a chapter, two?? please no more then three, Sess and kagome should be happy togethor always....
:::breaks down and crys::
YOu are very talented writer!!
~paperheart~ |
Reviewed By: Maerlyn On: May 01, 2003 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stop teasing and have Kag and Sess get it on already! Just kidding, although I do hope there's a lemon or a lime in the works soon :-)
Really though, your story is great. Keep up the fantastic work! |
Reviewed By: lea On: April 26, 2003 21:11 EDT
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hurry the heck up and write another chapter!!!!!!!!!\ |
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