| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] |
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Reviewed By: kangel On: March 25, 2003 09:47 EST
Comment/Review:
good so far keep on writing |
Reviewed By: lea On: March 24, 2003 20:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another perfectly wonderful chapter! You know what? I think, no, I know you are the best writer I know. The wait wasn't bad when I read this last chapter. Heck, I didn't even mind the wait if you write something as good as that. Please write more! Your story keeps getting better! I now have cleared a place in my brain for daily rituals of this fic and the writer, of course. Keep making these damn good chapters and I can't wait for more!!!!
P.S.
Now, about those dreams. They're getting worse. I'm not sure you'de want to have Sess in your dreams the way I do, or meybe you do. I don't know. But, I have to admit, he is one sexy beast. Keep writing!!! |
Reviewed By: sessluvskag On: March 31, 2003 00:33 EST
Comment/Review:
I am getting addicted to your story its soo spiffy. I hope you write more soon...arigato |
Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um I have a small request. Could you please bring back Kagome's Tail? Please? But this time make it long and fluffy like Sess's. I think it would be funny if he saw it and got turned on! Pretty pretty please! *Big "kitten" eyes and "kitten" pout* I'm your biggest fan ya know! I check back almost every day for updates! |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 22:48 EST
Comment/Review:
I FORGOT TO TELL YOU THE SONG WAS PURRRRRFECT IT WAS REALLY LIKE THE KIND OF THING TO PUT FOR THAT MOMMENT.I LOVE U ~~KISS KISS~~ THAX AGAIN
DONT FORGET SESSHOUMARU IS THE BEST *SMILES* |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 22:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD BLESS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!THANX SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH. YOUR THE BEST I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. IT WAS KIND OF SAD FOR BOTH SESSHOUMARU AND KAGOME *TEARS TEARS* SESSHOUMARU THE MOST HOTTEST THING.HE WAS KINDA CRYING OH MY GOD IMA CRY TOO.I HAVE BEEN RECOMENDING THIS FANFIC TO MY FRIENDS CAUSE IT IS TRULLY THE BEST!!~KISS KISS~ KEEP IT COMMING CANT WAIT |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 21:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still love this story *sniffs* poor Inu Yasha |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Me thinks Fluffy likes Kagome's new duds! *snickers* Compromises are a GOOD thing... ;) Poor bunny!! Waah!! :( Wha?? She flew away?? COOOL!! I am SO jealous!
O.O He made her his... his... *tears up* Damn, those kids are just SO sweet! (I can't get over them:) Ohmygod... Sesshoumaru is just aDORable!! I bet even his kanji is as graceful, strong, and sweet as him. *sigh* Writing in his own part of the story... that sneaky youkai. ^.~ Waahh!! Kagome didn't get to read it!! *pouts, but realizes it would be better if HE told HER himself* I think that after the "end" of the this story,(sequel!?!? HELL yeah!!;) you should put up Shippou and Rin's story in it's entiry. *shrugs* It's just SO kawaii!! *lol*
Boo!! Why were the kids in her room... j/k Sess needs to think. *blinks* Why DID she run? (aside from the putrid odor *gags*) *sniffles* I hear ya, Sess, I'm coming for you!! No Sess in pain. Never. *sniff* That GIRL should get off her butt, track him down, and-- *smirks* you know. ;)
The song choice was perfect, btw. I only noticed one thing wrong and it was a quotation mark that shouldn't have been there. *shrugs* No biggie. //‘Oh, Kami-sama, how they must have felt. Help me make them happy, onegai.” // Other than that, it was PERfect!! *starry-eyed*
OH, and what happened in 101 Dalmations was that the dogs Pongo and Perdita ran around their people and tied them up in the leashes so they would meet in the beginning. Aww!
About that fic I'm trying to write... I got my printer working so I was able to print out a first draft to go over. (finally!) It's kind of slow going at the moment. Why? Uhh... let's just say that it's REALLY rare of me to ever use outlines. *lol* Plus, I need to add some descriptions, background, thoughts, a few extra scenes, etc... and THEN I might have a first chapter! *lmao* But we'll see what happens. ^_~
Write more!! ^_^
PS ... you're now enamored with Gundam Wing?? From the eps or Endless Waltz?? And how soon will those fanfics be out?!?!? *lol* No pressure. Writing GW is kind of... interesting. Why? Uhh... probably because the majority of the fanfictions for it have ... unconvential pairings. (that's putting it mildly) Mainly yaoi and occassional yuri. Personally, I write 1x2/2x1. And if you don't know what I mean.... I shouldn't be the one to explain it to you. O.o Bye now! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 20:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! ME LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!
BUT DO YOU HAVE TO LEAVE THE STORY RIGHT THERE!?!?
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
P.s me add another chappy to "kooraru" just to let you know.
p.s.s
do you read the fics on mm.org? (mediaminer) |
Reviewed By: magor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 18:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COME ON BUDDY WRITE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! KEEP THEM COMMING LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!~~KISS KISS~~ |
Reviewed By: Rkanna On: March 20, 2003 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are not many fanfics that I become addicted to, but I have to say that this is one of them.
Please for the love of god, write more!!
All in all, it's a great story! Keep it up!
I like the way the story is going and if you bring Kagome and Inu Yasha together I think I'll cry. I like the way it's headed. |
Reviewed By: lea On: March 19, 2003 20:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! Why do you have to take so long to make another chapter. I know, I know. I should've read a chapter a day so It wouldn't feel like I havn't read anything from your story in ages. Pweze keep wrighting. Your killing me. You have to get chapter 15 posted as soon as possible. Then again, it might not be you who's taking so long, it might just be my computer. Anyway, I still really love this fic and I will come back every day until you get more posted. You are the absolute best wrighter I know so just keep wrighting.
P.s.
I think your story has started to drive me crazy. Just between you, me, and all the other people looking at the reviews on this site, I've started to have dreams where I'm like Kagome and I have to live with Sess and we fall in love. Do you think I'm mental, and if you do could you recomend a good therapist? Just between you and me, you know? |
Reviewed By: laya On: March 19, 2003 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on, please. write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Inu-Libby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 23:21 EST
Comment/Review:
ME LIKES, ME LIKES, ME LIKES! uh that's it. can kikyo got to hell? pweety pweeze? |
Reviewed By: Lea On: March 15, 2003 11:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! I havn't reviewed your story yet so I thought I might start now. I love how you paired up sess/kag. They seem like such a perfect couple. I only started reading yesterday and since then I've read all 14 chapters. This is definatly the best fan-fic I have ever read. Keep at it and write some more chapters, soon! |
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