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| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] | | Pages (20): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have just finished reading this fic from the start to the author note, and I would just like to say that I like what I have read thus far. The story is captivating. I was saddened by Inuyasha's death scene. *sticks out lower lip, pouts, and stomps her foot* Not that Inuyahsa should have HAD a death scene! :P lol
Kagome's dream about Inuyasha, and the special moment they shared, was heart wrenching as well.
But, all that aside, I'm enjoying the Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing. It has to be tering at Inuyasha's heart watching this take place.
Another thing, I've had this nagging suspicion at the back of mind after reading that Inuyasha would come back.... he's not going to come back as their son is he? O_o; Now that would be one heck of a plot twist! lol Inuyasha and Kagome just have to have another chance at their unrelinquished love! God, I'm such a romantic! ^_^
Another point, I'm enjoying how everyone's characters are evoling and developing throughout this story. It's refreshing. Their are so many fics out there; and not just in this fandom; that the characters growth and development just starts to fizzle out and grow stagnant. So nice job on that front. ^_^
Now for the constructive critique. Really there's not much to complain about. The only thing I found in error was a few grammatical errors. But, those errors were not so pronounced to disrupt the flow of the read. ^_^
Well, this has ran long, so I'll wrap this up. Again, I have enjoyed reading this, and am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Oh by the way! I'm still *crosses fingers* holding out for a romantic ending for Kagome and Inuyasha! *looks sheepish* But, *uncrosses fingers* considering this is a K/S fic, I think that is a long shot. ~_^ lol
I'll sign off saying, reading this fanfiction has warmed me to the K/S pairing. O_o Who knew that would happen! lol Thanks for the read.
~**ssjprincess**~ | Reviewed By: Lord Obsidian [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that i like you story, and wanted to say that if you don't update soon, I will send my cyborg mutent ninga dwarfs to put Barny on endless loop on your computer, and I don't want to have to do that, please update soon. | Reviewed By: hi On: April 17, 2003 16:01 EDT
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well put the chap. up soon | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lol* I FInally get to review this! ^.^
I decided to read the updated Chapter16 to get me in the mood for the newest chapter-- I STILL love it. Just a teensy weensy typo that you don't need to fix but I'm being detailed today:
However, this was the neutral zone, and he would not act start a war.
Okay, now for the newer chapter! :)
!! You drew a pic of Kagome in her new duds? *grins* I MUST see it! *a little while later, sniffles* I tried to look at your sketch, but it wouldn't load for me. :(
I found an awkward part, but that's funny that I'm obsessing with details considering I don't even know who this Ayame is (yet). *lol*
“...She’s in love with you, Kouga-kun, and you did promise to mate with her when came down the mountain.”
*giggles* I like Sesshoumaru when he's jealous. ;) Especially when he grabbed her and kiss her. So, he basically told Kouga without words, "Stay back, bitch, she's MINE!!" *lmao* Priceless.
Umm... quick question about this part:
He wished he still had toujikin, but the sword had been destroyed when Naraku was finally killed.
I must be a poor american who is unlucky enough to have to watch all Inuyasha eps on Cartoon Network, but . . . in America's dubbed version they called his sword the "Tensusaiga." *blinks* I'm guessing that was WRONG? I thought he only had one sword and it was the other one that Toutousai made from Inu/Sess's dad's fangs... *head hurts* Nevermind, what do I know anyway?
*grins* Me thinks it's getting hot again... Awwww. "Made Whole." I'm SO glad this happened. :)
Well, I'd write more, (I guess I'm not too intuitive about my reading today) but it's raining pretty hard here. (when it rains, I have URGES to work on my stories;) Thanks for putting up with my habitual lateness. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lol* I FInally get to review this! ^.^
I decided to read the updated Chapter16 to get me in the mood for the newest chapter-- I STILL love it. Just a teensy weensy typo that you don't need to fix but I'm being detailed today:
>However, this was the neutral zone, and he would not act start a war.“...She’s in love with you, Kouga-kun, and you did promise to mate with her when came down the mountain.”He wished he still had toujikin, but the sword had been destroyed when Naraku was finally killed. | Reviewed By: claudia67g On: April 14, 2003 18:52 EDT
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When you going to update..
Please sooooooonnn
it has been 10days and we are about to become an angry mob !! | Reviewed By: Chibihalo On: April 14, 2003 16:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I read the whole thing before reviewing this. For some reason I like reading Kagome and Sesshoumaru stories. This one definately became a favorite. I had seen this one before on FF.Net but not knowing this was going to be a Kagome and Sesshoumaru story I really didn't give it a chance until I saw it here on MM.org. That's when I saw that it WAS a Kagome and Sesshoumaru story. Your writing pulls the reader into the story making them want to find out what is going to happen next. You keep hinting that Inu-Yasha will be making a return appearance. If that is going to happen I can not wait to see what happens when it does. And I for one can't wait for the day when Sesshoumaru formally asks Kagome to become his mate. I have a feeling now that he has both arms again that time is drawing near. Sorry for the long ramble but the longer my review the more I like a story and I LOVE this one. Keep up the absolutly fabulous work. I look forward to the next installment. You're going on my list of favorites. | Reviewed By: lea On: April 13, 2003 20:47 EDT
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what is taking so long to get another chapter up! im counting on u | Reviewed By: kittygirl On: April 13, 2003 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you have a grate fanfic and pleas! finish it soon cant what to find out the ending hope its good. | Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really enjoyed this!! I hope that you can find the time to get more out. It's fabulous! | Reviewed By: Savonprist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:48 EDT
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I love how you incorporate the Japanese language into your story. It makes the story seem a lot more real, as if it is apart of the original story. I deeply respect the fact that you didn't turn this fanfic into a "quicky." There is history and flashbacks built into it to give the characters ground for how they feel and the way they act. | Reviewed By: Oshidori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:56 EDT
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hmm...I wonder what Sesshy will try out with his new hand... heh heh heh
Aww, I would have liked to see more of a Kouga/Sesshy rivalry. He's one of my favorite love rivals, next to Ryoga of course lol. But then again I guess Kouga would just end up dead much too quickly, what with Sesshy's sense of humour, or lack thereof. Any hope of future possible uses for ol' wolfy? ^_- | Reviewed By: lea On: April 07, 2003 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazingly terriffic chapter!!! I can't wait until the next one!! I can't help noticing that Shippou and Rin havn't been in the last couple of chapters, anyways, your still doing great. Thank god Sess has his other arm back! I can't wait to see what he does with his "fullness".? Anyway, I can't think of anything more to say than this was great. Write more soon!! | Reviewed By: shadypony On: April 07, 2003 10:08 EDT
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So happy you wrote more. I realy love this story.
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^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY | Reviewed By: Rei On: April 06, 2003 21:25 EDT
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Ohhh..I like this fic so much, and I know that you're typing as fast as you can...but could you type any faster? *pleads* ;) Good luck! | | Pages (20): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
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