| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] |
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Title: 25
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 18:12 EST
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XO who got married?!!! is sango and miroku or kag and sess? |
Title: 24
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 17:32 EST
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ok the desire to hunt you down is almost entirely gone! |
Title: 23
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 17:14 EST
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please don't let her make anymore stupid decisions..... |
Title: 22
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 16:58 EST
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just when i thought I couldn't hate you any more.... please tell me it at least has a happy ending! |
Title: 19
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 16:36 EST
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i still fucking hate you. while it would have been 500 years for HER she could have gone back to the shrine to let them know she was alive the minute AFTER her past self left!!!!!! how fucking stupid is she!!!!!? and now Kagome may not get a chance to fix her fuck up because she wasn't fucking thinking! |
Title: 18
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 16:27 EST
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at this moment in time I HATE your guts!!!! |
Title: 16
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 15:50 EST
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..... kinda disappointed that she was so weak here until the light show.... I mean even as a human she would have fought harder..... |
Title: 15
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 15:16 EST
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:C why is she so affected by it? she has been helping to kill demons for a long time by now.... I just don't get why it has effected her so much. Especially that time she kill the komoto or what ever. I get that she was scared of what she did, but I don't get why she was that disturbed.... and how could you be so cruel to sesshomaru as to make his addition to the story fall out?!!!! |
Title: 14
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 14:56 EST
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wow, boy am I thankful for his wish now! it sped up the pace in which they got together! (even if it was unintentional on his part...) |
Title: 11
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 13:54 EST
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oooo I wonder what inu is thinking now O_O.... |
Reviewed By: Ailes On: November 04, 2011 21:14 EDT
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It's been many years since I've read this. I recently got back into Inuyasha and came back to re-read the fan fictions I did those many years ago. I just wanted to tell you that I read along as you posted each chapter then and was saddened that you weren't able to finish this beautiful story. I understand that real life always gets in the way, but if you do still get notices that comments have been left to your story, I just want you to know what an amazing writer you are and I sincerely hope you have not stopped writing, even if it's just for your own pleasure now. Thank you so much for sharing your story with us, even the hard to write parts. All of it is amazing. |
Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 17:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Judging by how long it has been since your last update I am not sure you plan to finish this story. This story could really end right where you left off though. It would be nice to have a chapter where you show them getting married but it isn't needed to enjoy the story. I would also like to say that you should try to stay in one tense for the whole story. When you are telling a story you should not change so often between past and present tense. Other than that I liked this story.
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Title: WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BlackRubyKitsune101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 02:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story rocked i cant wait to read more you have to update soon YOU JUST HAVE TO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! because that story was AWESOME!!!! keep up the good work : )
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Reviewed By: deviousauthoress1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 04:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Why the heck haven't you updated your story??!! I'm all into it and stuff, and now I have to quit cold turkey. Grrrrr...
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Title: Inuyasha's mothers name
Reviewed By: Shiro-Neko-Hanyou On: September 11, 2007 09:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love your story! it's the third time I'm reading it now, but i noticed something this time.. I don't know if you are aware of it but Inuyasha's mother's name is Izayoi :D Just so you know! :D And why don't check out my story? It's called a drastic change! (damn i feel bad for doing commercial for my self in a review that is sopposed to be about you and your story!) I Really Love you story!
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