| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] |
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Reviewed By: liz On: March 10, 2003 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah!!!!!!!! I can't beleave you just wrote that! this is the apsolute best story i have ever read!!!!!!! this is the most amazing work you've done so far. i was so into the story when you ended it! please, i'm begging you to write more. the detail in that is so intence. poor kagome. i know she's been waiting for this to happen for a while, but i didn't think you'de actually write it. siss is probably so in love with her he can't stand himself. i subjest you get some more people on this site to read all the stories. i havn't read any of the other fics because i'm so upsest with this one. *sniff* i can't beleave the story is over, well, aren't you goin' to write another chapter?! i'm waiting!! *fingers drum while steam shoots out of ears* oh damn it, just wright another fuckin' chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelBaby028 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is one of the best stories i have read. I never review for a story unless it is REALLY good and this is GREAT. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 01:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE SOOO EVIL I TELL YOU, EVIL!!!!!!!!
ALL GREAT AUTHOR ARE!!!!!!! THEY START A CHAPPY
THEN THEY GO AND LEAVE CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!
WHY!?!?!?! PLEASE TELL MY WHY!!!!!!!!!!
P.s Will you please read my fanfic "kooraru"
it's found in the inuyasha section. PLEASE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Meamiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 01:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still in awe at your style of writing. It's rare to find anyone with a sophisticated style as yours. I try to be somewhat sophisticated but I can't ^_^ I'm just that kind of writer. Maybe when I take my writing classes for my major. My Mum made me swear that I'd become a famous author and do a book signing at her store. Keh! Yeah right! Hey if you become famous author maybe I'll get you to come out for signings, ne? I bet you could make it as a writer! Honestly. There are a lot of hidden talent out there and you're one of them! Well not so hidden now O.o
If you ever do any original work I'd love to read it.
Ok more to the subject here. I bout died of laughter when she couldn't move her arms. That was too funny ^_^ why on earth did it happen though? And that's just like Shippou to be conniving. "There may be some blood shed later." Now that one I almost fell out of my chair...only cuz it doesn't have arms to keep me in it so I bout slid off the side O.o stoopid chair.
Keep updating as quickly as you have been lately. It's great to get those emails that say you've updated until they send about 13 of them for the same update notification. It started with one then three then ten and it's up to 15 now O.o it's the most bizarre thing but I don't mind. At least I know when you've updated ^_^ Ok I've babbled enough. G'night.
Meamiko |
Reviewed By: Lady Sethia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Please keep it coming, lol this may be silly but I check everyday to see if you have updated. I just can't stop reading this story. Thanks for sharing it! |
Reviewed By: Faen On: March 07, 2003 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! You have to update soon! I know that a lot of people think that Inuyasha shouldn't have gone to hell, but Sees is my favorite character. He is sooo hot! I love reading romances with Sess in them, and yours is one of the best. I can't wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:55 EST
Comment/Review:
You mentioned in one of your reviewer replies that Inuyasha can still watch Kagome. So....
Is Inuyasha gonna be a peeping-tom!?!??!?! And depending on how often he watches her...sooner or later he's gonna realize what's going on. (unless he's blind;)
*lmao* Sorry, I had to get that off my chest. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You ended it THERE!?!?!?
That was absolutely positively the worst cliffhanger EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*lol* ...........can you tell I loved? ;) Me want more! Me want more!! Me want more more MORE!!!
Btw, that story the kids are writing IS kawaii as Hell!!!! :D (and it's interesting that it's about a king and a princess because of--nevermind) Shippou is the ULTIMATE antagonist!! ^_~ *lol* Who knew the "innocent" could possibly ... blackmail Sess? *lol* I WISH he would!! *snickers*
*heh* Lately, this is one of the only fics that I've been reading/reviewing as promptly as possibly--it's the most worthy one, really. :)
I got SO fic starved earlier this week that I started-- you guessed it-- my first Inuyasha fanfiction. *blushes* It's not going to be anywhere near as awesome as yours, but I think it has potential. (it's an AU/Fusion with a faerie tale called "King Thrushbeard." Yup, a king and princess story, sorta) *lol* One of the most annoying things about it is that even "I" don't know what pairing I'm going to prefer. ;)
Okay okay, I'm running off to daydream about being in the bathtub and having a hottie come up behind me... (which is funny as hell considering my dbz lemon is in the shower *lol* I'm all wet this week...) ^_^
Keep this up and update soon! (but, sadly, I probably won't be able to review until tues if you update this weekend) But remember that no matter what, I WILL review this!! ;) See ya!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snickers* My favorite part:
"What was that!?"
'Foreplay.'
*ROFLMFAO* DAMN, Fluffy, you're making it all hot in here!! The licking was a nice touch too. DAMN you, Jakken!!! (reminded me of the horrible interruption by Jakken in Voices at Midnight--thanks for recommending that. ;)
Sorry that I haven't been reviewing very fast. (I was all "caught up in the moment" of writing my first DBZ lemon all week. *heh*) I'll read ch12 right after I'm done writing this. :)
Well, GREAT chapter!! It really leaves you wanting more... guess we all kind of empathize with Sess on that. ;) |
Reviewed By: Rinaanne45 On: March 07, 2003 18:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great part, so love this story. Can't wait for another one. |
Reviewed By: bronie bite On: March 07, 2003 14:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Arigato!thank u thank u!thanks 4 updateing.......and so soon!man i luv this fan fic!i worship u...i know u just updated....but still update again soon!uve got me hocked on this storie!thank u! |
Reviewed By: Oshidori [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 06:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not usually into Kag/Sesshy fics (or rather i don't like them at all), but this is an awesome piece of work. This last chapter expressed the 'foreplay' very well, i could feel *my* pulse racing! Needless to say I'm very impressed with the ability and fluidity of your writing skills. I also like how well you've maintained the characters, although it may at points be a bit OOC, you've still managed to uphold Takahashi's knack of making a character and it's situation endearing and personal to the reader. So the OOC-ness is easily overlooked in context of the story, and the characters remain believable. Great job! Can't wait to read more! :) I've been addicted to this fic since last week...
And kudos to the speedy updates! God bless ya for that! |
Reviewed By: Sonomi On: March 06, 2003 18:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your fic so far!!! I've been keeping up with the updates, but didn't get a chance to review. And here I am!
What would Sesshi do if he caught up with Kagome? Is Inuyasha watching everything from above? Could Inuyasha visit Sesshoumaru in his dreams too? |
Reviewed By: CleverWitch On: March 05, 2003 13:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story and your writing is excellent. I hope to read more soon. |
Reviewed By: jumper On: March 05, 2003 09:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your site!! As you may know, i do hate pan, but i also hate marron, and you may not like to hear that. I just wanted to let you know i will be the one to marry trunks and we will fall in love and have a daughter named pan. we love eachother very much. I also love the way you made vageta go for pan like that, that was sooo funny!!!!! |
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