| "A Demon Should Act Like A Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 298 ] |
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Reviewed By: lady love On: March 31, 2003 16:04 EST
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I have to say that was a great chapter! I hope Kagome tell him what she feels soon! The next chapter sound really good and I hope that you will get the next chapter out soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 07:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cheers* You really know your shit...your the first person's I'v seen write about the Moon Light Rainbow...thats so cool...and if You make a sequale I'll be readin it for sure |
Reviewed By: lea On: March 29, 2003 14:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter yet!!!! The summery for the nest chapter is going to kill me. I mean, I already have these "bad" dreams, this just makes them worse! (For some reason that's kind of a good thing). That was a truly great chapter, but what was the blue light? I'm guessing it came from her Miko powers. Am I right? You apsolutly have to keep writing! I can't live without your story!! Your my heroe. And now, I am opening the part of my brain I set aside for the daily rituals.....
P.S.
My friend is doing the same thing as you. I mean, trying to make the boy she likes into the boy she likes from TV. She is in love with Trunks from DBZ and she's trying to get her boyfriend, Trey, to dye his hair lavender.
P.P.S
Keep writing and make another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what i'm begining to get jealous of you and your writing. But i still support you. ^^ |
Reviewed By: vampirebunny On: March 26, 2003 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey yea i liked the fic cause it intreged me very much lol ne ways keep em flowing! cant wait. if inuyasha happens to go to hell im not pity him but feel swencer of his disision! over all i like how sess si toward kagome and how he is "trying" to handle the sistuation. please continue to write the storie i cant wait till the next chapue comes out later !!!!!!!!
sighing out : vampire bunny |
Reviewed By: vampirebunny On: March 26, 2003 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey yea i liked the fic cause it intreged me very much lol ne ways keep em flowing! cant wait. if inuyasha happens to go to hell im not pity him but feel swencer of his disision! over all i like how sess si toward kagome and how he is "trying" to handle the sistuation. please continue to write the storie i cant wait till the next chapue comes out later !!!!!!!!
sighing out : vampire bunny |
Reviewed By: Witch Child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 19:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it! write more PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Arsenal On: March 26, 2003 18:46 EST
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I am a little confused other than maby a slite variation in ch 13 where Fluffy is sleeping with Kagome I don't really see the diference between this and the version on FF.net. Douse that meen you are planing a lemon that you have not written yet or am I missing something? My e-mail is sche4004@blue.unco.edu if you feel like answering my question. |
Reviewed By: UPDATE On: March 26, 2003 12:41 EST
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UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: KANGEL On: March 26, 2003 11:37 EST
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THIS IS A GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 26, 2003 09:45 EST
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update soon |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 05:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your the one that should be thanked...so here go's thank you for writting such an ingaging story I would read it forever if it went on forever, but I know that it won't go on forever so until you stop writting I'll keep reading ~_^ keep them stories coming |
Reviewed By: Val On: March 26, 2003 01:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. It's hard to elaborate on just how awesome I think your story is. I was reading another story on ff.net and I saw a recommendation from the author to check out mm.org and read your story... so I did.. I have to say, I'm hooked and want more! I didn't know how many chapter there were, I just started reading and when I got to chpt 16 and wanted to click on the link for the next chapter I almost freaked out. LOL Well there are just some authors that are really good at what they do and I get so entranced with their writing that I loose track of everything else and then when I get to the point where they stop.. it's like oh no! You've got that magical gift of writing something that ensnares me completely! Oh and I was wondering if you had an update list.. if so add my email to it!! vlauback@twcny.rr.com.. if not I will certainly check back as often as possible for new chapters. :) |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 01:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that garb sounded beautiful! Sess's was sexy as HELL!! (I have a thing for guys wearing black, heh) He he he ... loved the scene before take off. Hot hot HOT!! ;)
Akuma? Good name choice! I forgot it meant devil. I learn something everytime I read this fic! ^.^ (Oni no Akuma was an evil/ugly/powerful Shadowlands personality from L5R-- a CCG)
!! Grrrrrr.... "Wicked Heart" got what he deserved. (I've always thought that SHOULD be the punishment for that crime!)
*sniffles* I don't know if I can write that fic now. (I will, but hear me out!) I mean, it's a formal event where she has to meet all the lords and such. In otherwords... it's like all the clothing. I had NO clue. o.O (though the black attire for the males sounds familiar now) In otherwords, mine would lack some MAJOR details like that. Can you imagine standing in a room where a craploads of guys come in, are introduced, and ALL wear the same thing!?!? (although, it would add to the boredom of the scene *lol*)
And I was going to throw in some performance (you're using the Noh masks) after the main introduction. Maybe I'll stick with shadow puppets. *lmao* I know, there are other forms of Japanese theatre, but STILL... I'm feeling very unoriginal right now. -_-
Aside from my personal problems, *heh* I LOVE this story and this chapter! Sesshoumaru is SO friggin hot/sexy/sweet/loving/gentle/kind/protecive... *runs out of breath* etc. Write more! ^_~
Oh, and I agree with what Thundercat said a chapter back... I wanna see Kagome's tail again! *lol* |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: March 25, 2003 14:16 EST
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Cool you wrote more. Thank you. I love the story.
SHADY |
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