| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: tigerclaw On: April 23, 2003 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey how about you put a yuri in it. |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fire: LOVED IT!
Yeira: Finally that bastard got what he deserved!
Yana: Got that right!
Fire: Poor Seto though.
Yeira: Well he has Yami now!
Yana: And I bet your jealous!
Yeira: That's it I'm sending YOU to the shadow relm!
Fire: Oh Gods here they go again! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 13:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Cool, happy reunions and resolutions!
LD: And Bakura killing people!
Karen: You did see what the next chappie is right?
LD: ^___________^
Karen: * nods * This has been a really good story... I almost don't want it to end!
LD: ^_________________^ But we won't mind since you are giving us a lemon! |
Reviewed By: CrazyYami On: April 20, 2003 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I'm gonna come back and back over and over to see and review and... well, you get the picture. So dramatic and the character ending scenes are funnie. Cause... I... don't wanna bug ya, just wanna hug ya, keepin it fer ya.... yah....yah.... Sorry, just my carzyness. Didn't you notice my name? |
Reviewed By: Yathtallar Infinity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very, very good! ^_^ I really enjoyed this fanfic, from start to finish. Really dramatic, suspenseful, and quite heart-tugging. I appreciate all pairings, as long as they're well developed, and plausibly brought together. ^^;; I didn't see anything of how they got together though, so if I missed that in another fic, I ought to read it then, neh? I digress, but all in all, wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 19, 2003 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate cliffhangers.
That said; I can't believe the events happening! Otogi, Yugi, Yami... jeez it's drama-angsty! Is Yugi's dad going to notice that Yami doesn't have any scars? Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My god... u r the cliff hanger queen!
Update fast! |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: April 15, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: *lying passes out on the floor*
Wufei: She stopped breathing.
Vega: *twitch, twitch*
Wufei: She couldn't handle the cliffhanger.
Vega: *sits up* MORE!!! *falls back over*
Wufei: *blinks* I believe that's pretty clear. |
Reviewed By: Yami girl On: April 15, 2003 21:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know you are SO lucky that you update this story really fast you know that? Other wise I would have to come through my computer and kill you.
Yami Junko: Please forgive my hikari. She has had to much sugar today ^_^
I HAVE NOT! Any way Awsome story! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fire: Great chappie!
Yana: Yeah but poor little Yugi! *hugs her brother*
Yeira:My poor Yami!!! * Hold Yami tight*
Fire:I thought it was GREAT!! Even though Yeira kinda had a major breakdown, she's fine now! THANKS YAMI!!!
Yami: You're welcome!
Yeira: Sorry about that Fire! Is your head ok?
Fire: Yeah just a bump! THANK GOD!!
Yana:You scared us Yeira!
Yeira: I said I was sorry!
Yami: Leave her alone Yana!
Yana: Fine!
Raine: Well I can't wait to read more!!! I will try to work on the NEXT chappie for A Darkened PAst! Well Bye for now! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: hehehe. Pissed off Ryou. hehehe
Karen: * rolls eyes * The STORY, LD, Focus!
LD: * snickers * yeah that was good... heheheh
Karen: I cannot believe that you are still torturing poor Yugi. geeze, this is seriously disturbed.
LD: Um, I think that is the point, Karen.
Karen: Well I don't care. First are the problems between Jou and Yugi, then Yami and Seto, now just when Yugi and Jou were intimate, you go and give the poor boy amnesia.
LD: Ahh, so we come to the root of the problem. She wants another lemon!
Karen: Be that as it may... this is just becoming depressing.
LD: She doesn't deny it! Hahaha! I will protect YD and DD from the lynch mob because I happen to love a good angst fic!
Karen: Suck up. You want a lemon as much as I do.
LD: * sighs sadly * too true... |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 13, 2003 12:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah!! No, it's another cliffhanger! ;_;
I knew it! He's inadvertantly after Yami. I can't wait for the next part of the story. I have a few scenarios in my mind, I wonder how it's going to go.... |
Reviewed By: Firey Jazz On: April 12, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is totaly amazing!!!! I love it, and I totaly can't wait for more. Hurry up and write!!!! Please, I beg it of you! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 21:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter. Who is Yuugi's father going to attack? He obviously thinks Yami is Yuugi. Please post more soon?! I want to see what evil thing you make happen next. Great job so far! |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, Love it, Love it! Write more soon! |
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