| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: ChaosEnd [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh! Update soon, damnit. This is really good, please keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Crystal On: March 23, 2003 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style of writing, and the grammar is preet good, but I've seen bett, no offence to you. I really like the idea of this story. I think it's the best thing going for you on this fic. Keep writing and put out the next chapter soon, please? |
Reviewed By: moonymonster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 23:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Niiiice, could add a bit more in the lemon but that's what happens when you let yamis write them right? *snicker*
Mokuba: O_O
Marisa: I TOLD you not to read it, kiddo...
Mokuba: O____O
Marisa: *sigh*
Moony Rating: 10
VERY GOOD JOB!! KEEP IT UP!!! |
Reviewed By: yamisgirl On: March 22, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG this is SOOO good. Comon comon what happends next!!! Even though I can maybe guess but I won't!!! poor yugi :grabs him into a hug: |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT A PLACE TO END IT!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!
Yami Junko: Aibou! will you calm down!
I CAN'T CALM DOWN!! DID YOU SEE WHERE IT ENDED!!!
Yami Junko: Yes I saw, and it's no big deal. It will be updated so calm down NOW!
*pouts* fine...But this is an AWSOME fic ^_^
Yami Junko: Please forgiver her, she had to much suger today. |
Reviewed By: kaco On: March 22, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic the whole Yugi getting abused by his father thing though i've seen quite alot before so that's why the overall rating isn't higher. I really like this though and i hope you update this soon |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeira: My poor brother! (talking about Yami)He's caught up in the middle of things!
Yana: Your brother! What about MY brother!? (talking about Yugi)He's the one with the horrible past! O Yugi, my little brother..... please be all right!
PLEASE WRITE MORE!! IT WAS GREAT!!
(These are characters from a fanfic of mine. when I write it you all should read it.Please.) |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Freaky. Poor Yugi-kun |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:53 CST
Comment/Review:
Freaky, but in an intriguing way. In other words, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It is getting really good! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
"My Yami made me do it" is not a suitable excuse. It was good. A little predictable but very well written. More soon. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter! I hope you post another chapter soon! Poor Yuugi! He was so abused when he was little! I hope he can get over it! Post soon?!! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!
can't wait for more!
I can't wait to find out what is going on!
I'm sure those are more than just normal scares!
:)GRALNAK
Undying Light ch.8 coming soon:) |
Reviewed By: stupid kid04 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 21:25 CST
Comment/Review:
*laughs* poor Yami . . . Locked up like that! Hope you continue soon dude! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds up sign chanting * LEMON! LEMON!HORRAY FOR DRAGONDREAMER! DOWN WITH ANZU! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah!
:)GRALNAK |
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