| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 09:16 CST
Comment/Review:
oh, that is so mean, leaving Yami cuffed to the bed. although... um, never mind.
Awesome story. I hope everything works out between Joey and Yugi.
Please keep updating! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 09:12 CST
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good. So, when are you going to get the part about why Yuugi wears the collar is so scared when Joey touches him? |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
this is great!keep it up!
can't wait for more!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 19:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! It's so original, and I can't wait to see what will happen next! It's very different, yet believeable. You have a lucid writing style and an interesting ability to characterize the emotions of the moment.
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O Yugi dont even no wats wrong?! Plz write more |
Reviewed By: Tipola [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 06:10 CST
Comment/Review:
write more please!!!
Very very good! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Woohoo love you (not literally) Love this fic!!!! NOW CONTINUE OR ELSE OK LOVE YOU BYE BYE!!! *zips of to class knowing she'll be late* |
Reviewed By: nikkei On: March 15, 2003 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
ouch. poor little yugi.
joey: hey!
yeah, whatever i feel for ya to.
joey: humph, that's better *stalks off*
yugi: you cruel author *cries* what did you do to me?!
anyways, please update!!! the story's great! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 16:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Solitaire: Gah!! That's it??? Oi, you evil, evil person, how could you leave it there?! I wanna know what happens! Was Yugi raped? Did someone crush his fragile ego a long time ago, and he never told anyone about it? Ahh! Please, please, please write more. ^_^`` |
Reviewed By: Yami's Girl710 (too lazy to log on) On: March 15, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This story is very intriquing. I like it alot despite the pairings. I'm more of a Joey/Seto, Yami/Yugi fangirl myself. Anyways update soon! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool start! I can't wait to see where you are going with this. (Although I agree with Joey, you should write the sequel to Angel ^.^ ) |
Reviewed By: Kendra On: March 15, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like what ur doing with this fic. i always had my own assuption on why Yugi wears that neck belt but... i'll keep that a secret *embareased laugh* ANYWAWYZ!!!!!! I can't wait till u put out the next chap. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi. Was he raped or something when he was younger? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 12:42 CST
Comment/Review:
This sounds really interesting. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: ElderWhisp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 10:19 CDT
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Daddy was sick an' twisted, but that's what made it so damn good! |
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