| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww... poor Yami. Poor seto. Poor Ryou. Poor everyone *sniff* |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: Hehe SETO and YAMI CRYING!
Karen: And Yugi and Joey practically having sex in the kitchen. Maybe they could get back to that at some point...
LD: You are sick.
Karen: Well, it really isn't that big a deal as long as they clean up after themselves.
LD: You are sick.
Karen: Humph. Anyway, this chappie had a little bit of everything. Humor, romance, angst, drama... it's a genre-paloza!
LD: Dear Ra... Please update again before she goes completely insane... |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! IT TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH!! LOL!
Yana: You can't blame her Fire. She was busy. *laughs*
Fire: Oh ok. I guess you were pretty busy! LOL! *laughs*
Yeira: My poor Yami! *hugs her brother* It'll be ok!
Fire: He's the mighty Pharaoh! He'll be fine!
Yana: Yeah! If Yugi can fiace his troubles then Yami can too!
GREAT NEW CHAPPIE!! Poor Bakura though I bet he really wanted to kill me! O well Bakura...THAT"S LIFE!!!! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool writing! I hope to see more of this soon. *winks*
KK =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Nagareboshi On: April 05, 2003 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great Fic, but please update soon!!! I expect that Seto has gone through something similar to what Yugi went through and has never told anyone. I can't wait to see what happens!!
Update ASAP!!! Please!!
Stellacadente |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 05, 2003 12:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah coffee. Tomb Raiders need their coffee in the morning. XD
I was waiting for Seto to say/do something like that. I'm also curious as if this 'stranger' is going to take Yami instead of Yugi... that'd be interesting.
I can't wait for the next parts of your story! It's written wonderfully well so far, keep up the good work! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 11:13 CST
Comment/Review:
wow.....I didn't see that coming at all....
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: lastdj7701 On: April 04, 2003 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm not usually a fan of this kind of fic, but I really like your story. And thank the gods Seto finally cracked Yami one, I would have too. Not that I condone violence or anything... ;) Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Fever On: April 04, 2003 22:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Holy crap that was good!! You better write more, I want to find out what's up with... well you know.... |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 04, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
=^^= Excellent fic, great plot, and your style of writing is magnificent.
Poor Yuugi, and alas (referring to chapter 6) poor Yami... |
Reviewed By: MJ On: April 04, 2003 09:55 CST
Comment/Review:
YOu can't blame your inablity to multi task on me!!
First you slam me and then you want me to reivew your work!
*pout* fine
I like where you hit Yami....the little over done hedgehog....he he he |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 On: April 03, 2003 16:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! GREAT NEW CHAPPI! (like always!)
Yeira:*holds Yami* My poor brother! How could you make Seto hit him! You're so evil!
Yana:I have to agree with Yami! I'm going to KILL Joey!!!
Fire: Oh great! Here we go AGAIN!! Poor Yugi how can he live with her!? Well she is HIS sister.
Well, I still think it was GREAT! Yana STILL wants to know when the next chappie is going to come out! And MY FANFIC IS FINALLY DONE! It's called A Darkened Past! So have fun reading it, Dragon! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEMON!!!!!!!!!!I'm glad you took my pillow idea. That worked out micely. I love the "baby" touch. Nicely done |
Reviewed By: yamisgirl On: April 03, 2003 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
HE HIT HIM?! SETO HIT MY YAMI?!?! *cuddles Yami* WHAT IS HE THINKING?!?!? Heehee, keep up the good work. Com'on what happens next???? |
Reviewed By: Arwynn On: April 02, 2003 23:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Wadda ya mean "status: completed"? COMPLETED?!?! That's not complete!! You left an evil cliffie, dang it!
Love the story, babe. I'm a hikari/yami type person, but I still wanted to read this. You just keep on doin' your thang, 'cause you're d*** good at it! |
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