| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked that chapter. It was pretty good. I hope you post another chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: awww, that was too sweet!
LD: And Seto bitch slapped Yami!
Karen: You are heartless. There was a tender Joey/ Yugi moment and you mar it with your sick sense of humor.
LD: I like what I like. I also liked that ominous figure who is going to try to get Yugi back. Yay for scary villians!
Karen: Just as long as there are more lovey-dovey scenes. I love cuddling!
LD: *Rolls eyes at alter ego* Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 16:03 CST
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just had to add that part of how cool I think your idea of "the mysterious shadow person" (who I think everyone knows who it is) is mistaking Yami for Yugi. Great Idea maybe we will be seeing a mind crush or a penalty game in a future chapter huh? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I shall scream, hold my breath, throw every imaginable temper tantrum I can think of, invent a few new ones, then mercilisly beat my muse into the ground if you do not update this fic NOW!
Cody's Muse - 'O_o! What do I have to do with any of this? You are the one who's desperate!
I swore off threatning the Authors so you are my new "stress releaving test dummy"
Cody's Muse - I'm not gonna be a test dummy, I'm a muse! It isn't in my job description! Not that you care but you wouldn't have been able to write Half of your stuff without my help! Find someone else to beat up on your wild writers tangents.
Be that way. Anyway, I love your fic, keep writing! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 17:40 CST
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I feel really sorry for Yuugi! Post another chapter soon! I want to see what happens to him next! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good story. update. update.update. is hit by her sharacter Ka. "they get the idea" he grumble. "ooo hehe. sorry" Smile sweetly. can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: March 29, 2003 17:51 CST
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o.o Wow. I can't wait for the next parts. It's written well. And I haven't seen a fic quite like it. Angsty! (love the angst)
Is Seto going to tell Yami about his own similar past? The person lurking in shadows... ooo... evil! |
Reviewed By: jupiter_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 17:45 CST
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This is so cool. It's different though. Al through the Yu-gi-oh series,I've never seen any of the characters in this much conflict. GOOD JOB!
But I felt sorry for Joey -although that part of the fic was funny- when he was recovering from seeing Seto kiss Yami, and PLUS earlier that day,he saw Tristan and Otogi together!
In my own opinion,I think you did really good! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey
GREAT NEW CHAPTER!! (as usual) LOL!
Yana:*Crying* Yugi.*hugs Yugi tight*
Yeira: Poor Yana she still can't face what happened to you, Yugi.
Yugi: I know but she's my older sister and it's her job to protect me and worry about me. I love her for that. *hugs Yana back*
Yeira: I still think my brother has it bad!
Yana and Yugi: YEIRA!!!
Yeira: sorry!
LOL! Keep writting my friend it's GREAT! CAN"T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!! ;) |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 20:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Awww, poor yugi! *siffs*
LD: emotional. This story is getting really good! Sensitive Bakura is good. It seems like Seto is trying to be like an older brother to Yugi while Yami is being a mother hen. hehe *pictures Yami looking like a chicken* hehe, chicken Yami!
Karen: that is a little off topic. Joey is so sweet. I love how you use the endearments. They seem so natural. When I try to write them, it sounds phoney.
LD: When I try to write them, you mean!
Karen: Whatever, the point is, it is good.
LD: Yeah, Update again soon! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's Raine! Like I said before GREAT FANFIC! LOL! I hope you got my e-mail! And I finally think I'll write my fanfic! YAY! HEHE.
Yana: I still can't believe my poor little Yugi is shattered. HOW COULD THIS HAVE HAPPENED?!
Yeira:O shut up Yana! It's not your fault....
Yugi:Yeah Yana. It's NOT your fault!
Yeira:It's no use she always blames herself.
Yana:But....what about....
Yeira:YANA! SHUT UP! I'm trying to sleep here! *zzzzzzzzz*
HEHE! Well talk to you later. BYE!! |
Reviewed By: CrazyYami On: March 29, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to keep writing this! I'll come back to check if you do. I must know what's gonna happen!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hyperventalates* must...wait... |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WE LOVE DRAGONDREAMER!!!!! AND YAMI DRAGON!!! YEAH FRIENDSHIP! |
Reviewed By: lastdj7701 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 21:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Awsome story...I really want to know what happens next!! |
Reviewed By: KraZOtaku On: March 23, 2003 18:58 CST
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story!!! Please continue writing it! I need to know what happens!! PLEASE |
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