| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Title: Kudos my friend, Kudos.
Reviewed By: IckyVicki On: July 09, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story line. You have a real gift for grabbing the reader's attention with witty comments and quite a fantastic romantic plot. I really don't want to sound mean or heartless or anything, because goodness knows I am no writing genious, but I just noticed a... lack of descriptions. Like their feelings of everything. But that is just my picky opinion. You are truly blessed with your writing. Keep up the good work! God Bless! Love Much Vicki
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Reviewed By: Shinryo On: June 27, 2005 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thoroughly loved this story, and hope that you update soon (even though it's been years. The story overall is extremely creative, something I would never think of. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tarialla On: June 07, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! Ok, I know you wrote this, like, eons ago, but please finish it! So close to the end... you said just one more chapter and an epilogue! *begs you*
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Reviewed By: momcitrus too lazy to sign in On: June 04, 2005 19:36 CDT
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Hurrah!!! What a wonderful storyteller you. Thank you for sharing, and for posting on mediaminer, which a much more user-friendly than adult fiction dot net. Again, thanks for taking the time and effort to write and post this very entertaining story.
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 28, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this fic. it's great!! and i really hope that you will write more chapters soon!! PLEASE UPDATE!! : )
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Title: Elemental
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Confusion??????????
Reviewed By: Lydia On: January 09, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was the best fanfic I have ever read. Where is the epilogue? Please tell me or I will go crazy with wonder. Thankyou for the wonderful story. Made: Jan 9 2005. Whats with the no epilogue. Very upset, please write it!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:28 CDT
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AREMT YOU GOING TO DO AN EPILOGUE????????!!!!!!!!!!! you better do it!
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 22, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was sooooo amazing!!you know...that was the best fanfic of inuyasha i've EVER READ!!!! when i started reading it i wasn't expecting much, cause i kinda thought inuyasha would be in love with kikyo and thats what kagome would try to give him, but OMG! it was just so... like... FRICKIN AMAZING! and it was well thought out and the characters were themselves,cause you know sometimes the characters in the story are different than they should be, but you NAILED IT! and i know this sound really corny and gay but it was like i could feel what they were feeling and almost like i was there with them and i just looooved it sooo much! buuuuuut... im worried cause you haven't updated since may, and that leads me to believe yur not finishing it or yur taking yur sweet time. so pleeeeease for the benefit of EVERYTHING GOOD IN THE WORLD, pleeeeease finish it soon, yur killing me and i really wanna know how it ends!!! loli'll bother you until you do!!! again, AMAZING STORY!
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Title: a
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 14:33 CDT
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i love this story!! it was so good!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for the final chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ejqHorseLady On: March 15, 2004 13:39 CST
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Please, oh please post the next chapter(s) If you don't then please e-mail them to me at ejqHorseLady@hotmail.com In case you can't tell it's EJQ NOT EJG
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Reviewed By: SesshomaruStar On: March 10, 2004 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Eru...For the thrid time.. On: January 17, 2004 11:30 CST
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Wtf...Okay here is the rest of my update..Keeps getting deleted...Please update or I shall send my army of gummy bears after you with their marshmellow cannons!! ::throws a gummy bear at you for good measure::
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Reviewed By: Eru On: January 17, 2004 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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