| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Brit On: May 25, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I'm in love...this story is soooo totally neat-o-licious! Please, please, PLEASE update soon ^_^ I'll simply die of heartache if you do not!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 16, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another great chp. lol. loved it. kawaii.. um, when u said on to tha next fan fic at tha end does tat mean chp. or ur gonna make a new story? well either way make a new chp. an' complete this story w/ sum lemon... well, more. LMAO. ok, so well keep writin' an' inform me if ur writin a new story. |
Reviewed By: Paws On: May 14, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Laughs till gut hurts! Oh Geez whenever I really need a good laugh I'll come back to this chapter and re-read the part of Kagome facing down Inu-Youki! That is my most Favorite part to this all! Thanks for the story as a whole. Can't wait to see the resolution. |
Reviewed By: Joyleaf On: May 14, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please-Please-Please hurry with the next chapters!!! I LOVE this story. "^_~" Keep up the great work!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 21:09 CDT
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the=this
*smacks herself on the head, then begins to read 'Keyboarding for Idiots'. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 20:41 CDT
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I like the version of the chapter better. The interaction amongst Kagome and the youkai Inuyasha was more in depth. ^_^
Still can't wait for the next chapter....
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 18:14 CDT
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Now here's a continuation with something approaching the coolness of chapter thirteen! |
Reviewed By: wow On: May 13, 2003 10:27 CDT
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Wow great story please con't |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 00:16 CDT
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Poor Kagome! Her experience was so much harder than Inuyasha's. Geez! All he had to do was catch her from a tree and say I love you. But, I suppose that is because she doesn't carry around half the baggage that Inuyasha does.
So now we know why Sesshoumaru stuck around the cavern. He was after the Tetsusaiga. Silly Sesshy, Tetsusaiga's not for Youkai, It's for Hanyou's. ^_^
All in all, I think this was a good chapter. (Wish it was a bit longer, though.) I am sad to see this fic coming to the conclusion. I've really enjoyed it. But, as they say, all good things must come to an end. So, I am eagerly awaiting the final chapter, and did you say there was going to be an epilogue? Anyway, don't take to long with it. ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 23:48 CDT
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Makes total sense that Inuyasha would have an easier time than Kagome. She has fewer demons, pun intended.
And Miroku is doing the big-brother guardian thing in Kagome's mind. How cute.
The Kagome-DemonInu faceoff was a bit anticlimactic, especially considering how it was left at the end of the last chapter. I was expecting more of a big deal. IMHO, Demon-Inuyasha's arrival should have either been more important or left out, some scoldings from the pinned-Inu put in their place. Kagome deals with Demon-Inu more seriously in the cave-vision.
I like Sess' spooky forebodi-ness about the soul mate thing. If one thinks about it, even a lifetime can change a person...
This chapter seems so short somehow. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 10, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! tha plot! tha romance. tha drama. i love it all an' i want more! MORE MORE MORE~~ so i guess tat means u gotz ta update like everyotha day juss tat satisfy ME! lol. an' sum otha restless fans o' this story, am i rite? well, keep it up an' UPDATE!! PLEZZZ! ^-^ i thought it was tha #1 best inuyasha fic eva. |
Reviewed By: Mimiko On: May 09, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had fun writing this chapter because you're EVIL! Evil evil evil!! And not just evil, you're PURE evil...but I love you anyway. *hugs* Can't you FEEL the LOVE? And you know what I'd love? To come back here later and find a new chapter...that's what I'd love. I've said it before, and I'll say it again-this story is addictive! When I see there's a new chapter, I stop everything I'm doing and run to read it. I'm serious, it can't be legal to be this addicting, can it? You're writing crack, that's what you're doing! WRITING CRACK! |
Reviewed By: Joyleaf On: May 09, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job on the story with interesting twists. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Great Job! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 20:37 CDT
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I love this dark psych stuff! Inuyasha's forest. Inuyasha is the forest.
So Inuyasha demon-dreams about killing Kagome... I wonder what kind of dreams they are. It could be that he does have some dark wish to kill her, or it could be that he's had nightmares about losing control, and his waking self interpreted them as a dark wish. Eh. I should just shut up and enjoy.
I got it! I got it! The well is abandonment. He's so used to Kagome's leaving -- maybe forever -- through it, that it's come to mean that in his mind. So when the Inu-tai and the woman go through...
Sesshoumaru didn't go, though. Sesshoumaru is still with him.
...and Inuyasha tried to send her away. I LOVE THIS!!
Gaaaaaaaaaaah! Now I have to wait more! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 19:35 CDT
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Wow! Fantastic chapter. Very intricate. I just wish the chapter was longer. Ugh. Now I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. I hate to wait! ~_^ |
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