| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Title: Cute Story, but what happened to the ending?
Reviewed By: Faye273 On: November 21, 2003 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic in more ways than one. It was a captivating love/romance story with a very origional twist. Their "hook-up" was surprising, which took me off guard, but I enjoyed it throughly. I was especially happy that although IY didn't know what he was doing, he did end up knowing that Kag wasn't Kikyo. The writing style was very descriptive but not overbearingly so, which I felt allowed the reader to create very accurate mental pictures of the scenes without drowning out the readers own creativity. I only have 2 complaints, so my first is some of the grammar. I must admit I have seen much worse, but the point should be made that revision of the story and check for homonyms and such (such as their vs. they're etc.)should have been better scrutinized. My other complaint is one I'm sure is said often... where's the promised ending?? It's a great story, but I would love to see an ending that explains all of the ramifications of this "soul binding" and see what their future would look like.
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! YAY!!!! VEEEEERRRRRYYYYY GOOD!!! i LOVE it! very creative! yup! nice n fluffy too, n i like the kid yash also! hehe...i just dont know how you can stay on one story at a time tho...my muse keeps on making me do new ones, so she is currently being held prisoner in my closet...hehe. well, i really like this story! i just CANT wait for more okay! -Lani
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Title: Ending?
Reviewed By: Ithilwen, login failed On: October 25, 2003 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
There are those who yet await the ending, most awesome xi_hou! This 'fic is truly unique among ...'fics.
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Reviewed By: AleGnA On: September 06, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! I love this fic and I noticed that you took it off fanfiction.net for the reasons stated in your bio. I was hoping that you would continue with the rest of the story. MediaMiner's pretty good with ratings. You could always post on other people's sites too or there's another site called adultfanfiction.net. I'm not sure how that one works though... Anyways, I hope you continue with this fic. It really is great! |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: July 21, 2003 13:44 CDT
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well? where's tha next chapter!? Huh? i thought u were gonna wrap this story up? well? fine. i'm not complainin' i'm juss wonderin' when ur gonna post it? tatz all. well, i better be soon. i'm earger to read tha endin'. i think i'll put up a link to this story on my blog. is tat all? thanx! ^_^ can't wait till tha last chp. |
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is one of my favorite fanfics of all the ones I've read, and I return to it periodically just to re-read, even if it hasn't been updated. I'm patiently but enthusiastically awaiting the epilogue! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
There are those who await an update for this unusually skillful 'fic. |
Reviewed By: ccsinjapan On: July 03, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it ALOT!!really original..i liekd that fact of how u said that inuyasha didn't noe that he had done it with kagome and how everyone thought he dind't noe but he did...thats was really original..can't wait to read the last chapter..i just iwsh it wouldn't end..waaaahhhhh!! |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: June 28, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was incredible, you have an excellent grasp on your overwhelming talent, and on the show itself! I CANNOT wait to read your next fic! |
Reviewed By: Chisaii Angeli [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was great! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Nadark On: June 22, 2003 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
U gonna make a new chapter or not? Either way i have to say this was a great fan fic |
Reviewed By: InuyashasAngel On: June 22, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was FANTASTIC!!! I didn't find a single thing wrong with it. Hurry and put the Epiolouge up soon!! |
Reviewed By: NekoYasha On: June 02, 2003 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! FABULOUS! STUPENDOUS! i have read this fic a million times over and i never get tired of it! you are so talented. me need more!! everyone needs more! please oh please continue!! pretty please?? |
Reviewed By: Raquel On: May 31, 2003 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one was a bit hard to follow at first for me cuz im slo and junk but utha than that i loved it! dis fic kicked ass!
Rei-Rei |
Reviewed By: Ultima On: May 28, 2003 12:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a very innovating story and i'll love to read more. is kagome pregnate? what is going on with sessomouru adn rin what r they up to and i like how u updating often u've proved that this is a good story by ur reviews, so keep up the good work
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