| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 23:48 CDT
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Makes total sense that Inuyasha would have an easier time than Kagome. She has fewer demons, pun intended.
And Miroku is doing the big-brother guardian thing in Kagome's mind. How cute.
The Kagome-DemonInu faceoff was a bit anticlimactic, especially considering how it was left at the end of the last chapter. I was expecting more of a big deal. IMHO, Demon-Inuyasha's arrival should have either been more important or left out, some scoldings from the pinned-Inu put in their place. Kagome deals with Demon-Inu more seriously in the cave-vision.
I like Sess' spooky forebodi-ness about the soul mate thing. If one thinks about it, even a lifetime can change a person...
This chapter seems so short somehow. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: May 10, 2003 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! tha plot! tha romance. tha drama. i love it all an' i want more! MORE MORE MORE~~ so i guess tat means u gotz ta update like everyotha day juss tat satisfy ME! lol. an' sum otha restless fans o' this story, am i rite? well, keep it up an' UPDATE!! PLEZZZ! ^-^ i thought it was tha #1 best inuyasha fic eva. |
Reviewed By: Mimiko On: May 09, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had fun writing this chapter because you're EVIL! Evil evil evil!! And not just evil, you're PURE evil...but I love you anyway. *hugs* Can't you FEEL the LOVE? And you know what I'd love? To come back here later and find a new chapter...that's what I'd love. I've said it before, and I'll say it again-this story is addictive! When I see there's a new chapter, I stop everything I'm doing and run to read it. I'm serious, it can't be legal to be this addicting, can it? You're writing crack, that's what you're doing! WRITING CRACK! |
Reviewed By: Joyleaf On: May 09, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job on the story with interesting twists. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Great Job! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 20:37 CDT
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I love this dark psych stuff! Inuyasha's forest. Inuyasha is the forest.
So Inuyasha demon-dreams about killing Kagome... I wonder what kind of dreams they are. It could be that he does have some dark wish to kill her, or it could be that he's had nightmares about losing control, and his waking self interpreted them as a dark wish. Eh. I should just shut up and enjoy.
I got it! I got it! The well is abandonment. He's so used to Kagome's leaving -- maybe forever -- through it, that it's come to mean that in his mind. So when the Inu-tai and the woman go through...
Sesshoumaru didn't go, though. Sesshoumaru is still with him.
...and Inuyasha tried to send her away. I LOVE THIS!!
Gaaaaaaaaaaah! Now I have to wait more! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 19:35 CDT
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Wow! Fantastic chapter. Very intricate. I just wish the chapter was longer. Ugh. Now I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. I hate to wait! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 22:17 CDT
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Kagome seemed a lot more comfortable when Inuyasha was delirious. Now that the claiming is for real and for life, she's hesitating.
This was markedly different from chapter one. For all Kagome's sorrow then, she showed fairly little hesitation. This one was all nerovousness and unease: Kagome was scared, and it makes sense. Inuyasha was visibly trying to put her at ease... And he didn't do a bad job for two ordinary teenagers for their first time.
Too bad this isn't their first time and the stakes are far from ordinary.
So Inuyasha's psyche is a muddy forest, and the only stable point is the one he was pinned to for fifty years. Coooooool. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 07:09 CDT
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Sweet, sexy and tasteful. The aura thing was NOT overdone.
I like the spookiness at the end. |
Reviewed By: Mimiko On: May 07, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*polishes her super pointy pitch fork*
Soon, you say? I'll be waiting..*poke*
*camps out in front of the awesome fanfic so that she'll know when it's updated~* |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_fan On: May 06, 2003 19:37 CDT
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update soooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Joyleaf On: May 06, 2003 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep the updates coming!!!!! I love it! Ja! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 16:20 CDT
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I wonder what Inu's going to do to ease her apprehension.
I wonder what she's afraid of showing him. |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your writings and postings give you help and comfort against the troubles of the outer world -- I know they do that for me.
Yeah, 'tis right. No laughter. Maybe a knowing smirk, though...
The scene in the cavern is so sweet and sad...
He'd ask her to take the beads off if he needed her to trust him; it makes so much sense! It's PERFECT and it didn't even occur to me...
I can see how Kag would be nervous and scared, and not just 'cause she's got an unleashed Inuyasha who's grinning like a cheshire cat. So she's going to get to judge his every thought, his every mean little headclick against Sess or Naraku or Kouga, his every resentment against his parents, humans, the world, and even her for running off through the well... Even his memories of Kikyou.
I wonder if she'll judge him at all. |
Reviewed By: AngelWings On: May 03, 2003 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur fic is... is... (AneglWings is speechless). I dont know what to say... It's really good. I couldnt stop reading it. PLEASEEEE write more soon!!! Ur very gifted ^_^ |
Reviewed By: misticknight2002 On: April 30, 2003 03:54 CDT
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This is a good fic and I hope that you will update soon.^-^ |
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