| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: mint On: August 02, 2003 02:28 EDT
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inuyasha really needs to kick hobos ass. at least he kept his temper for kagomes sake, but seriously he is really starting to get on my nerves. anyway glad youre so great at updating and the story is still the greatest so i hope you stick with it till its over whenever thats gonna be (hopefully not for a long time!)
p.s. love the kurama part he is a major hottie!!! |
Reviewed By: VioletRose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:02 EDT
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dah! effin hojo! i wish i could kick his ass... HOW CAN ANYONE BE THAT MEAN TOWARDS SHIPPO?!?!?!?! grrr.... baka... inuyasha n kagome are like his new family, its not a good idea to piss them off. I really like the story, update soon! (Kurama's a hottie... n its just so funny what u write before n after chapters... ) |
Reviewed By: M. Durand On: August 01, 2003 20:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is quite enjoyable and doesn't let me go. I also like the unrelated sidelines w/Kurama & you. Really funny! Write more Inu fanfics, i'm sure they'll turn out real good! |
Reviewed By: Uncle Rickie On: August 01, 2003 15:21 EDT
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Mutter Father AAAAIEEE! dO HaST mEisT BIatchchachachacha! |
Reviewed By: VEE On: August 01, 2003 15:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the Sh1T is wrong with HOpo....is he on something?!? Shippo isn't some kind of freak. He's a bit too furry for anything like that! By the way Inuyasha should wup some major A$$ next capter! |
Reviewed By: Vioden On: August 01, 2003 15:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Shippo that HOMO was imagining sounds like a freaky mother FKR*. I wonder how Koga is going to react when he learns of Hobo...Vegetto F****'N rules!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 00:17 EDT
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So InuYasha is going to take his frustrations of Hojo out on Koga? Now that just isn't right. Well I guess Miroku will have to explain Koga to Hojo sooner rather than later. And thanks for the way you worded the begining of this chapter. It helped me figure out who was thinking the italics in the last chapter, I think? So if that is not the real Shippo then where is he? Is Kagome going to be mad at Hojo for much longer? What does Sango think about this new development?
I have to know! Enjoyed this chapter. ( even though it felt like a nessesary filler ) Be looking for the next one. |
Reviewed By: mizuko On: July 25, 2003 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was confuse ( still am) about hojo's adversion to Shippo. (Who could dislike such a cute kit?) But I reread it. It almost sounds like Hojo was insiuating that Shippo is a ghost...Creepy. But funny too.
I'm I on to something or am I way off and just really confuzzled?
Anywho I really like this story, it's so funny ^_^. You gave hojo new meaning to the word clueless!
-Mizuko |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: July 25, 2003 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i swear if you don't tell us what Hojo's problem with Shippo is in the next chapter i'm going to curse you out. It will make you feel bad. Do you want to feel bad? I didn't think so. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 23:49 EDT
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Great fic ^^ I'm so sad that I haven't yet found out what the deal is with Hojo and Shippou! I really, really didn't think I would like this, based on the summary, but I am glad I took the time to read it! |
Reviewed By: nekobaka On: July 24, 2003 23:25 EDT
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the part where hojo refused to save shippo when he had the chance?
she isent mentioning it - did she not here? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 18:37 EDT
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Cliffhanger! ( *whinny vocie* ) Nooo, I hate cliffhangers! Hmmmm.. I wonder what Hojo was trying to say. I think he completely blow off the fact that they could have gotten killed to ask if Shippo has a crush on Kagome. And wants to know if he is using his shape-sifting powers to look like a kid still. The italicied part during the battle is Miroku, right? Oh well, I'll figure it out. Thanks for the update. Be checking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aisuru On: July 24, 2003 18:05 EDT
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This is such a great fic! Please update very soon. I just HAVE to know why he is so scared of the kitsune! |
Reviewed By: RainCloudRoth On: July 22, 2003 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I have been reading this fic for almost two months now and contine waiting for you to update. Very good story! |
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