| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: Geshron Tyler On: July 21, 2003 18:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Was chapter 18 not nifty? Yes it was! ^_^
So, do we get to see Hojo display some kickass
powers of his own in the next chapter? And will
he ever get a clue? Only the author knows....
Looking forward to more (and more and more etc) |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
crourser and crouser
what is hojo's problem with shippo?
must say though - kagomes gota be prity pissed at him for this - the others to but spesely her
hehe - cant wait to see THAT confruntation.
please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: French Fairy On: July 21, 2003 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooo glad you updated, I've been checking every few days to see if you have heh.
Up to now, I've been half annoyed and half amused with Hojo. Now he's just annoying me. It's because he knows Shippo is a demon right? Gah!!! I'd really like to kick him!!!!!
The ratings I gave are all high because I think this story is just one of the best I've read. Definetly one of my favorites (there aren't that many fics that I check up on nearly every day). Heck, I'm even enjoying the author notes. Now that is really creative, having an almost mini story in them, I've never seen that before and I think it's funny. Though, I have to confess to not knowing the character you are talking to or about... heh. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 03:13 EDT
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Well this is new. Hojo is developing a back bone in this battle, now of all times! Why didn't he stay in the village or just hang back to see what a battle is like first before attemping to help unless asked to do otherwise?! I hope doesn't think that a "normal" arrow can take a demon down. He is so going to get someone hurt ( probably InuYasha or Kagome ). Then he'll will get chewed out by the one that isn't hurt. However for his sake it better not be Kagome that gets hurt. But enough of you babbleing.
Thanks for the quick update. Be looking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Guardian Angel One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SO HAPPY to have made this my first official Inu Yasha fic to read. Your story is not only great, but your style is awesome and you update frequently. Kudos and keep up the good work! (and I love the little sidenotes at the beginning and end - gotta love the humor!) |
Reviewed By: chris On: July 10, 2003 00:22 EDT
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update or else! |
Reviewed By: Mellie On: July 08, 2003 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am having fun reading this, you are walking the fine line on your humor and your writing is easy to read. Ideas are consistant with storyline with just the right amount of frisky attitude. Bring in Kouga and don't forget to let us see what happens when they go back through the well, how will Hojo's attitude change? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 14:21 EDT
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I am very happy with the updates. I was laughing so hard I had tears in my eyes, my family thought I was crazy! I could hardly contain myself as Hojo finally realized that InuYasha and Kagome had a 'thing' and still yet Koga has to be explained. Is Koga going to show up too? Pleaseeee say yes. Even if he is there for only a brief moment. It would to funny if InuYasha had to deal with both Koga and Hojo! And in return Hojo would get an even better idea of the situation that he has stumbled into. And how does Miroku take Sango's rising intrest with the boy who only has eyes for Kagome. But on a lesser not Chapter 16 was a little confusing. The part where you are trying to tell us how InuYasha and Hojo are positioned could be worded better. And I am slow but I just found out that Koga is spell like this and not Kouga. ( It looked right to me, too. )Be awaiting to next update. TA-TA
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Reviewed By: BakaGajiin On: July 06, 2003 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a good story! Everytime I see you've updated my heart actually does a little skip of joy! Please continue, for this story is both amusing and intriguing! (BTW, what's up with Hojo and Shippo...?) |
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More? Please? We humbly plead for more! |
Reviewed By: Aphrael On: July 03, 2003 12:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::laughs:: I love the part where Miroku talks about Hojo being a 'natural'. Keep writing it, or I will hunt you down Mwahahahaha!(j/k) |
Reviewed By: princess_impatience On: July 03, 2003 07:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It seems that hojo is finally showing that he has something in his head, sort of. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon! i don't think i can stand waiting to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay - this fic keeps getting better and better. I just finished Chap. 15 and I LMAO! I would say in all honesty that this fic is the best one I have ever read. Period. On MM, on FF, on the internet. Sheer brilliance! Characters stay in character, dialogue and description are seamless. Technically speaking, the grammar and spelling are excellent. The plot is believable, well thought out, and the humour is inspired. It leaves me thirsting for more (now now now)! An exquisite read. |
Reviewed By: nekobaka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 16:32 EDT
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you cant leave us haning like that!!! s not fair!!!!
i want more - hehe i want to see inu and hojo's confruntation giggle |
Reviewed By: kookie On: July 02, 2003 16:02 EDT
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I look forward to every update!
Thanks so much for writing and keep it up! :) |
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