| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: stacie On: June 17, 2003 04:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great, great, great!!!please update! love the ear scratching and neutering part, hope more to come!! love the fact that you don't alter the characters and stuff, this could be good enough to be part of the series :) |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 03:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, I forgot something. Thanks for redoing the chapter. I can understand it a lot better now. An stealing Kurama's undeies are naughty! (lol) But my the interesting colors they are!
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Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* You never fail in the humor! *shakes head* Well maybe Inu-chan will be able to scare the bone-head Hobo anyway! *evil grin* Please do that?? |
Reviewed By: Caliko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 19:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
MORE! Please? **Sitting up and begging*** ^_^ I'm loving this |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: June 14, 2003 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i still haven't stopped laughing. please do update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 17:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
LOL!!! Loved the neutered conversation. That sent me into a fit of laughter, I almost fell out of my chair! I couldn't breathe! Keep it up!
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: GeshronTyler On: June 10, 2003 17:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this story is getting better and better.
I just loved the ear-scratching scene. LOL!!
I have this nagging suspicion that Hojo
might have some Miko and Hanyou in his ancestry...
Or maybe that's too easy.
Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 11:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uhh so this was Shippo's plan of tortures for both Inu and Hojo? *grins* The little Kit sure is going to have fun then! *laughs* |
Reviewed By: Raye-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's sweet, it's funny, and it's highly entertaining. I loved the 'scratching the ears' part. Inu was sooo cute, and it was soooo funny when he tried to hide it. LOL, Hojo's afraid of Shippou. Me likie!! Keep it up! ^_^
Raye-Rei |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: June 09, 2003 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story.. it's cute... in character... and well.. it's so cute! i love it. |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhh I Loved that bit of Fluff between Kagome and InuYasha! More like it!! Hobo shouldn't have interrupted at that time!? Grrrr.
Maybe Hobo should see InuYasha slay another demon! Then he'd know what he'd have to face if he tries any moves on Kagome! *snickers* |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*blinks* Ok, What is that thing on Hobo's neck anyway?? Some sort of protection tailsman? |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*laughs* Oh it gets more and more twisted for the Guys don't it!?? *chuckles* Oh what if it all ends up that he's actually not as Miroku thinks he is and that he's just Dense?! By the way...what was he going to say when InuYasha interrupted him with the tree branch? Hobo is 1/4 what?? |
Reviewed By: Paws [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know you really have me thinking about Hojo now that you had Miroku think such things! Way to Go! |
Reviewed By: Alena On: May 30, 2003 20:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is funny for sure! Looking forward to the next part! |
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