| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: LDD (Too lazy to sign in) On: August 17, 2004 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update! I could feel the tension in the scene where Kagome slapped Hojo silly. I never knew the girl had such fighting spirit. And I love the author's notes, being an embittered author who's story was deleted also, I feel your pain. As always, excellent update, and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aha! stupid hojo, he's gonna get whats coming to him. great chapter i love it! please update really soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Clutzoid On: August 13, 2004 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo what do you mean Status:Completed this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please keep going
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Reviewed By: gauntlet challenge On: August 11, 2004 02:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is such a great story! XD I started reading it a day ago and I finally finished, LOL. I enjoyed it a lot. And the parts with Kurama were hella funny too. ^_^ This is such an awesome story. Extremely original and well done. :D The plots are very interesting. I also find it highly enjoyable that you've written this much and Inuyasha and Kagome still aren't a proper couple. Or anyone else. I think that this is my all time favourite Inuyasha story. ^_^ I can't wait till you update this. Please do... soon. *puppy eyes* I have too many favourite moments to mention them all but my all time favourite part is when Hojo is talking to Sess and being so inadvertantly silly and dumb. ^_^ I laughed so hard then. Just imagining the look on Sess's face. HAHAHAHAHAHA. I also really liked the part where Inuyasha is calling Hojo a Nueteral and puts his foot in his mouth big time. That was sooo funny. XD ROTFLMAO XDXD!!!! You make Hojo very interesting. I haven't read a fic before that had him as well developed as you, and well actually characterised as a person not a plot device or joke(In a bad way). Very refreshing. ^_^ In fact I think all your characterizations are very well done and stick with the so-called 'canon'. Mad props to you one it! Oh and if you wouldn't mind, if it's not a hassle or anything, could you e-mail me and tell me when you have? >.< My e-mail is gauntlet_challenge@hotmail.com Once again mad props on the story. ^_^ GC
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Reviewed By: paxnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I figure since I've devoured all 43 chapters so far [I even have this story on email notice ^_^ ]and enjoyed every one of them that I better send you feedback. I love the characterization you've managed with everyone, but especially Miroku. He's brilliantly handled, insightful and very, very funny. His inner dialogs make me smile every time. Inuyasha and Kagome's interactions are wonderful as well, full of dog-boy's endless macho posturing to cover his soft heart and Kagome's willfull cluelessness. The girl's good and she might love him to pieces, but her 'tude is torture on that poor boy. Not that he should have it easy, but wow... UST. *grin* Shippo is adorable. Go Shippo! Now Hojo, of course, can't go back to the present fast enough for me either. But really, I just wanted you to know someone else (out of the hundreds, it seems) is reading and greatly enjoying your story. Please, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 16:24 EDT
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wow! awesome chappy, but i still didnt get to see the dumbass's head split open... you'd better update soon! sorry i didnt review sooner, but my parents wouldnt let me do anything til i finished the evil summer reading assignment. keep up the good writing! you rock! (but please have hojo get the crap beaten out of him next time. love ya!)
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Title: chapter 43
Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 17:18 EDT
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Hi The chapter seemed kind of short but you were able to make things clear. Thanks for the update, jschu25
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 22:23 EDT
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Wow. Great chapter. But not what I want. When I saw the update and remeber where you left us, I instantly uncorrectedly thought, *with glee and happiness* Hojo's going to get it, Hojo's going to get it, over and over again. Oh well I can wait another chapter for Kagome to beat his ass into the ground. *with wide hopeful eyes* She is going to beat his ass into the ground, isn't she?
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Title: Also, for the most recent part of my memory that functions. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:03 EDT
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Hamsters! And. . . I hope Hojo gets his ass kicked. NOW goodnight
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Title: Do you have any idea how hard it is to read your fanfic and not laugh loud enough to wake my family at the same time? I think my ribs broke sometime near chapter thirty. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oy. . . that was a helluva long read. Worth it though! I love your little author-note-things which prove once again that genius and insanity are separated by a very fine line made entirely of oreo crumbs. Oyyyy. . . my head hurts. . . *rubbing head.* Maybe I shouldn't read things like this in one gulp. Anyway, I now have a new favorite author! And you have a new junkie, because my old favorite author did bad things to their arm. X.x. Also, I like laughing my head off. And suddenly I wonder how this fanfic hid from me like that. *Mumblemutter* Anyway, great. . . *yawn* great fanfic, and g'night. . . and stuff. . .*yawn*
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Reviewed By: Shaid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 01:43 EDT
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eeek! too short! but still good. Is Kagome going to hurt Hobo? PLEASE?!?
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Reviewed By: InuGirlTeen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 21:41 EDT
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Hehe... evil hamster *snickers* oh yeah, please update!
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Reviewed By: LDD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 16:09 EDT
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Hooray for the update! ^_^ I'm so glad you did! Anyway, I love the whole story, even the author's notes are hilarious! Please update soon, I wonder what's going to happen to Hojo. Methinks it will be something painful, ne?
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Reviewed By: Ryuu of the Broken Light [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, this fic is hilarious. please,p lease update real soon! i love the idea!
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 02:25 EDT
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Well then... It is about time someone kicked Hojo's ass, isn't it? All the better that it's Kagome. Kind of poetic justice mixed with irony, though truthfully I don't know if she'll hurt him bad or just banish him or what. It's gonna be fun to see regardless. The last twenty chapters have all been building up to this scene so unleash the pain on Hojo and give us an update!
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