| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 14:19 EDT
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great chapter. ^_^ can't wait for more!!! ^_^ DEATH TO HOJO!
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Reviewed By: skne On: October 12, 2004 01:00 EDT
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*snicker* "He'll do it. He's crazy." That brought me exceptional joy. In other news, this fic is quite fantastic. Best of luck with the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: sweets427 On: October 01, 2004 11:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, its so funny! and i really like the beginning/ending notes. i have a favor to ask though...could u get me hiei's boxers? :)
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli > On: September 21, 2004 16:58 EDT
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OoooooOooooOoooh!!! That's all I have to say XD
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 17:51 EDT
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Interesting. So what is Kikyou going to do? Love the last part about Hiei. Come on do you really think it is a nasty way of proceration? I mean hell we are the only ones who do it. The main thing about nature may be proceration and reproduction but they still do it for the fun of it. Now the Sea Horse has it made, well the women do. Since the men are the ones who give birth. lol cools beans. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: me not logged in On: September 10, 2004 10:54 EDT
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I tried to get into this story, but, it is too dry and boring. Which is disappointing because I have throughly enjoyed some of your other works. Sorry, but this story just isn't that good.
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Title: Contact
Reviewed By: gaijinmononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Despite your rather wacky sense of humor, you manage to keep most of TCBG realistic within the boundries of the IY world (the exception being the Kurama arch, of course). A good example of this is keeping Houjo in the dark concerning Miroku's wind-tunnel. To often in fanfiction Miroku is introduced to outsiders somewhat like: "This is Miroku. If we don't kill Naraku soon he'll die..." (sometimes the wind tunnel is totally forgotten...) Having Houjo unwittingly rub Miroku's uncertain future in his face is dramaticly perfect. That was such a great angst moment that I would have cried if reading your stories didn't always put me in such a good mood... It's also interesting to see a slightly less comical bit of instruction from Mushin (not that I have a problem with the funny stuff... I just have to make sure I don't eat or drink anything while I read.)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 21:42 EDT
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great chapter. cruel hojo. bad very bad hojo. Also loved the uh.. whachamacallits, the Kurama side stories. Are you saying that in one of the stories, Kurama and Sess hook up? I gotta see that. They are both male right? Oh man I gotta see that. Sess would probably kill the author for that. Though if you think it, he may be bi though. I was laughing so hard at where Kuwubara sp said that... oh man. that was priceless. I was gaging for breath I was laughing so hard. cools beans.
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Reviewed By: Kagome14 nli On: August 24, 2004 20:44 EDT
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*sigh* This is just an... I dunno. There are no words for this chapter...
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Title: Ooh. . .
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (mm.org doesn't like me?) On: August 24, 2004 19:49 EDT
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I think I'm not all that mature after all. . . I don't understand half of what's said between Miroku and Hojo on certain subjects. . . *Shrug* Other than that, (even including that, really) I love this story! Still! The author's notes are something else, by the way-- so funny, and they're like their own story! *Wonders what Kurama and them are going to do to the ff.net deleting-people. . .*
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Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli On: August 19, 2004 16:22 EDT
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^-^Time for Hojo to get what's coming to him...YEA! Keep updating, please!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:01 EDT
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yuod better update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 20:01 EDT
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NNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! why must you always end on a freakin cliffhanger?! DAMN you!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14nli On: August 17, 2004 15:19 EDT
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Whoohoo!! Another good Hojo-slap!! You ROCK!!!!! ^.^ Please update soon, Ithilwen-sama...? Plllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeee?
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Reviewed By: akuma_river *not signed in* On: August 17, 2004 00:32 EDT
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Great chapter. I love this story. What is Kagome going to do to him? Keep up the great work.
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