| "This Can't Be Good" Reviews/Comments [ 265 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2004 09:11 EST
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Wow. So many things to comment. I *akhem* haven't like Hojo since well for his racist remarks. But I can understand a little bit about it. Being thrust into something he doesn't understand and is afraid because of the stories told by his grandmother. Then seeing the girl of his dreams who is usually off sick being around these things and so he is worried and does what he can. But there is a line. Like listening to the damn girl when she says everything is fine. Sheesh. Think much does he? Keep up the great work. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Jesse Ryuu On: November 30, 2004 21:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. You're truly a gifted writer. I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm from Argentina, btw, just so you know you have a Latin American fan :) Your story is just perfect, everyone was in character (which is often rare), and you've managed to balance the comedy, romance and angst perfectly...I for one cannot do that, I don't even dare to post my always-unfinished-only-read-by-me InuYasha fics in English, since all of my friends speak Spanish and I don't really have internet buddies, or fellow Inu fans for that matter...it's also so hard to find decent fics...or I'm probably too lazy to look more...but lucky for me I came across yours! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bscl43 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:53 EST
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can't wait for Miroku's master to meet Hojo
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 19:03 EST
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'"Yeah!" remarked Kouga. "It was my turn!"' -- That was very funny. The whole bit with tossing Hojo down the well was most amusing.
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Reviewed By: plaid_pj_pants [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 18:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHAHAHAHA!! Houjo followed Kagome through the well?! That's awesome. I'ma go read the next chapter now.. teeeheee.
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 18:00 EST
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What thats an insane idea!!! he'll just end up as perverted as Miroku!
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Reviewed By: Kagome14: Eep! Don't look! I'm NLI!!! On: November 29, 2004 17:29 EST
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Eep! ^^ Lurving it like always. Who's the third person? o.O
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Title: Hojo
Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I love your story so much! I enjoy every chapter you make, but I hate how the boys are treating Hojo. I know this would probably happen in the anime, but its still annoying. I was surprised when Miroku started to think badly of Hojo. However even though I hate the way the boys are treating, its so funny at times! You're so good at the jealous thing with Miroku, Kouga and Inuyasha. Oh, oh can you make Kikyo or Sesshomaru come back into the picture? I don't care how long I just want to see Hojo interact with the two again. *sweatdrops* I sure wrote a lot so I'm going to stop. *shakes fist* See what you make you me!!
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Reviewed By: erinlin (not logged in) On: November 29, 2004 15:49 EST
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You know, we could just climb down." "No one asked you," can't...stop...laughing! As soon as Hojo said "Ireland",a little bell in my head went dingdingding! I can't beleive it took me this long to figure out. Good use of mythology. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this!
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 22:37 EDT
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omg the best story ever! halarious yes!!! No how could u stop it ther! how could u stop it at all.. i read all 47 chapters in like 3 days (with some rests even tho i didn't want to). hojo is a complete idiot.. so thanx for continueing making him one :)
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 15:55 EDT
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When I read this (again!), I can't believe I satyed away from fanfic for so long! What is wrong with me?! Keep up the great yarn---I can't hold back the laughter inspired by Miroku's inner dialogue. You balance everything so well, especially the Kagome/Inuyasha angst. And fight the good fight against ff.net!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 02:21 EDT
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coolsa. Keep up the great work.
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Title: hey....
Reviewed By: Kitsu Kurasei On: October 14, 2004 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic for a bit, it's hilarious, but quite frankly, Hojo's an ass, just like I'd thought he'd be, *smirks* sure hope he crawls under a rock to die, I hate the guy!-Kitsu
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I started reading this fic a couple of days ago and have been reading it non-stop except for the occasional exigencies of life such as earning a living, attending my daughter's concert and being sociable with my husband. That is to say it is really good. I particularly like Miroku's inner conversations. He's a character who is often depicted as a mere letch. I enjoyed how you left that in but also added in a more spiritual (and not just in the alcoholic sense) side. I originally started this on FF . net but moved over here to see this "Kurama Arc" you made mention of. Usually I find the author's conversations with anime characters just plain annoying but I was amused. I enjoyed that Kurama got bashed harder than Kuwabara (not that big a Kuwabara fan but he is pretty hard done by in fanfic) what with falling for the crayon restraining order and all. However, who's "Tusuke"? (there's a typo in the most recent chapter.)
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Silver Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 21:20 EDT
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I still LOVE your Kurama-arc-things. . . YAY! Miroku got one of his own in! Goodies for Miroku! (PS: Do NOT let Kuwabaka tell it like it . . . isn't . . . again? ^^; *Doesn't like Kuwabaka*) Don't let my personalness get in the way though ^^; I can't write that gewd.
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