| "Ai no Kakarotto" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 17:28 CDT
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EEEEEEEEK - due to extreme illness I'm late with my reviw!! *Slaps forehead* DAMN That was a good chapter!! I LOVE all the goings on in this fic!! Hurry up and update!! :D
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 23:00 CDT
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Well I must say, you've been busy! That's some horrible love triangle you have going on there with Celipa, King Vegeta, and Raditz! All you have to do is bump off the King and change Raditz' mind. Piece of cake, ne? So now Krillin has a crush on Chivaa, but I think she has the hots for Kakarotto... Then there's Vegeta. Damn, girl - is there anyone in your fic that is in a happy relationship? At least my hopes are a little placated with the end of this chapter. Now you have to keep Bardock busy so he doesn't chase after his son. Oh Barb... ; )
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... there was alot going on in that chapter. Just what, I wonder, does our dear Kakarrotto plan to do with the sexy prince when he finds him? Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - if I logged in it wouldn't matter On: February 28, 2004 07:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, in the short time I have known you, your writing has improved 200 percent... and it was damned good before. Another excellent chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 07:25 CST
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Awwwww - you wrote my Honey Lamb as being able to use Shunken Idou... :x Well, you told me he would be all heroic and lovable - and damn you weren't wrong!! :D I LOVE it when people put Bardock in their fics... "Oher things happened, you know." Yes - but nothing as important as you being there... :x
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Reviewed By: kitkat (not logged) On: February 26, 2004 22:36 CST
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The meeting was really unexpected. I loved the chapter! got to know bits of Raditz past... and possible future, got see Vegeta once again, and got to see my dear Bardock in action... with the instant transmission no less. Hehehe. Have i already said that i just love Bardock-san? I wonder what Raditz felt seeing his father in front of him even if for just a second and even don't knowing it was him. And i wonder if Vegeta will remember his previous encounter with him as well.
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Reviewed By: Kazza On: February 23, 2004 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic ... i love reading it, i hope u do more soon .. plzzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Kitkat On: February 21, 2004 13:46 CST
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o.O Celipa as the mother of Vegeta... and in love with Raditz?? That's a twist i never could imagine. You know something that pleases me the most in this story? Bardock-san is alive and is not the drunk man shown in the first chapter. Man, he is a High Priest. Yay! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl - I signed in just before this review! On: February 21, 2004 04:49 CST
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Wow... Celipa carried Vegeta, eh?? O.o You've given some really meaty roles to my favourite Saiya-jins here... :D I took an instant shine to Celipa when I watched the Bardock film... Not in the appaling dub version, though... I nearly cheered when "Fasha" died! And my Hunny Bunny was a High Priest... *Heart Eyes* I always knew he should have been more than a lowest class soldier... *Dreamy sigh* So - what's going to happen if Vegeta does decide to try to find Kakkarott? Will my poor precious Lamb be in danger?? O.o Ah well, update as soon as you can!! :D
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 17, 2004 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. the plot just keeps twisting and turning. This is one incredible and exciting story!
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Reviewed By: Artemis_Moonfairy On: February 17, 2004 06:48 CST
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*growls menacingly* you better update soon!!! Want more Want MORE!!!MORE MORE MOREMOREMORE!!!!! can you tell I liked it?? *grin* I'm putting you on my alert list, just so you know I'm watching you... *twilight zone music* but really, great fic, lots of interesting plot twists, cliff-hangers, and I LOVE it. Please update soon. Like, tomorrow. Thankies!!
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 16:20 CST
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Hurry UP!!!!!!! I need MORE!!! :((:(( Damn girl I started reading this this morning, and in between bouts of work, I've come back to it, because I just wanted to keep reading!! I loved the way you'd been telling the story from both Kakarrot's and Radditz's perspectives, then switched to third person when writing about the rebels... *Big, soppy moony grin... Bar... dock... sigh* I LOVE the way this is developing!! Soooo... my precious Honey Lamb had damn good reason to be hitting the bottle at the begining of the tale... poor sweet... At least I'm here to make it all better... :D So... stop reading reviews, and GO AND WRITE!!! :D:D:D
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 19:41 CST
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Wow kiddo - I would have never imagined the history that Kakarotto and Chivaa shared. What a way to weave a very tangled web! I kind of think that Vegeta must know that Raditz had a part in their escape. He's acting too strange around Vegeta now. And WTF does that last sentence mean??? Are you going to kill off the Ouji??? : ( : ( This is a spellbinding fic to read and I'm glad you update as often as you do. Jeez, I should pay attention, ne?
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: February 08, 2004 13:43 CST
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hi there, Blue! oh! i feel so ashamed i took so long to review. sorry being so late, i was on school's vacation at Amazonia, with little to none access to internet and working all day for the last two months. now i'm back home and catching up with my beloved fanfics. i'm really happy with the dedication of the interlude to me, i never thought i would receive a dedication one day, i feel so special. *dreamy look in the eyes* ;Þ thanks a lot!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - Carla On: February 07, 2004 06:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! What an action packed chapter! I love how you wove all of the characters and their pasts together in this chapter. Awesome job!
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