| "Ai no Kakarotto" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Mythic Curio On: January 27, 2004 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering the amount of words that are in each chapter, I am impressed with your grammar. Your story and style are very interesting. I enjoy reading it after school a lot. Keep up the good work!!!
|
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: January 21, 2004 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for the dedication! I feel so special... but you know I haven't done anything! Two great chapters - The one from Vegeta's perspective was just awesome. This fic is incredible and you deserve so much praise!
|
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad you made this side story that portrayed Vegeta's POV. Well written, as always, and very detailed. Please update soon; I can't wait to know what happens next! ~MercuryGoddess~
|
Reviewed By: GoldFusion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading all of the posted chapters for this fic thus far and it's got a lot going for it. An OC that's not annoying, an interesting set of circumstances. Sometimes the sentence structure and those AuthorID-Date thingies made it hard to get through certain paragraphs. Those are my only real complaints. Raditz in the role of an obsessive jealous type is a nice deviation from what I normally see, which is Nappa playing that role. Whenever the story switched to Raditz's POV I oddly found myself replacing Raditz with Nappa just out of habbit. In any case, I'm looking forward to finding out what kinds of twists and turns this story is going take. In the meantime, I'll be perusing through some more of your fics. Happy New Year ^_^
|
Reviewed By: saiyainprincess88 On: December 26, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fiction is like no other i have ever read (and I've read alot). This story is intoxicating. I beg you to update with "surrender". I've waited to long....i will be here to review "surrender" when u finally decied to update... MUCH LOVIN' Saiyainprincess88 A.K.A CAT
|
Reviewed By: MissJinny On: December 16, 2003 03:32 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG, that isn't fair. lol it isn't often that i stumble onto a story that once i begin to read, and come to the latest chapter, swear colorfully because it isn't a finished product and i want to know what happens. this is a fantastic piece of fiction. i know there are dozens of handfulls of stories that are somewhat similar with Kakkarot being a slave, but this has so much more emotion and angst drawn up into it that it is more than a story. to give you an idea of my intense like of your fiction, i should have been in bed two hours ago, but forced myself to stay awake to finish reading...and then realized (to my great dismay) that it isn't a finished piece. =D i enjoy your style of writing, again, it isn't often that i get a story that is so well done that i want to skip ahead to see what's coming and yet i caught myself time and time again scanning forward and then mentally berating myself for getting too far ahead. i hope you update soon. my obsession is growing. ~Nnif -.- ps. i write fanfiction as well and i totally agree with what you've said about reviews. i hope you get all of the ones you deserve for this piece.
|
Title: carry on writing!
Reviewed By: sparks On: December 11, 2003 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, enjoyable, sweet! cannot wait for the next installment!!!
|
Reviewed By: the Prince's Jewel On: December 10, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if it's a media miner thing, or if you did it deliberately, but the dealies with author#'s & dates was highly annoying. It's a great read, other than that, and an interestingly twisted plot. If you would, can you email me when you update? jewel@vegetalovers.every1.net I have yet to open an account here.
|
Reviewed By: xevius 1 On: December 08, 2003 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
keep up the good work. your story was captivating and emotional. i really enjoyed reading it and look forward to more chapters. jstar36@aol.com
|
Reviewed By: gokumum On: December 06, 2003 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
I finished the 4th chapter and it was some kind of turnaround. The marking, the escape... things are heating up and yes, of course, I want to read very soon the next part. The plot is well done, thrilling and your style is smooth and nice to read, so, keep it going!
|
Reviewed By: blue1482 On: December 06, 2003 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i love this story it's so good, i don't know who to feel sorry for. veg or kaka.
|
Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 05, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now i read it and i'm surprised, to say the least, that Kakarotto would come to such an act towards the one he claims hate above all things. Your way to describe their feelings and the way you show every scene in Kakarotto and Raditz pov is something more to add to why i like this fic so much. But there's something i miss (maybe you already did it, but i'm too lazy right now to check it and my internet connection is no help)will we have a chapter with Vegeta's pov? I mean till now, if my memory doesn't fool me, all Vegeta's actions were described by Kakarotto or Raditz pov, i feel like when he discovers kakarotto gone it will be imperative that this chapter would be in his pov. - No, i'm not trying to interfere in your writing and/or ideas, this is just a feeling i felt the need to share with you. Don't really pay this much attention to it. ^^
|
Reviewed By: gokumum On: December 05, 2003 11:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I have only read 3 chapters so far, leaving the fourth for later, when I have more time to savor it. You are writing a wonderful fic, very AU, but very saiyan. I did not yet see the complete movie of Ai no Kusabi, just read the summary. As far as I can tell now, you managed to merge the world of Vegetasei, the idea of classes (which was common to the saiyans) and some plot bunnies of AnK to a new, innovative world of fiction. Excellent job! Some minor typos slipped the betareading, but no big deal considering the huge amount of pages released in little lapses of time. I really look forward to more of this fic.
|
Title: xXx
Reviewed By: Nikki Kou On: December 05, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW the first person I've given all 10...and u deserve every last one of them...this fic is perfect...give us another update as a christmas present please? i can't wait to see what'll happen when vegeta finds out that kakarotto is gone and if kakarotto will ever get his tail back...about the review thing i feel your pain it hard seeing that ur fic has been visited more than 100 times and u only have about 9 reviews to account for those visits.
|
Reviewed By: The Unforgiven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! this is awesome! I was kinda hoping Kakarotto would get his tail back... his dad was dumb. What's gunna happen next? I can't wait to read more!!! Broken
|
| Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] |
