| "Ai no Kakarotto" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sailor Pookie On: November 25, 2003 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please update soon.....I really want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: goertz On: October 18, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Please update soon, I _need_ the next chapter. Thanks for a good read!
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *i really should log in one day!* On: October 11, 2003 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! This is great! Yaya! I luv the way you have described the 'classes' of Vegetasei! That was really good!! Hehe.. I want more Kakarotto/Vegeta!!!!!!! There is only one thing that I can see with this, your spelling and grammar is a little off in parts, but nothing to stress over!!!! Im only saying that since I guess your supposed to give constructive critism in reviews... But don't worry about it!!!!! Luv this ficcy, please so continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: MiraiGee-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur spelling could do with a bit ofa check up every now and then, try just re-reading paragraphs after uve written them.... not that i can talk.... :)
im fully luvin tha plot at the moment! the whole p.o.v. was a bit confusing in tha beginging but it got easier! hmmm... maybe im just stupid!
u did say that kakarotto was goin to b OOC but i think that there still is a lil bit of son goku in ur OOC version.
cant wait till Kaka gets his tail back ;) its gonna b cool!
cant wait for an update!!! |
Reviewed By: Sophia On: August 23, 2003 06:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a tangled web you writhe and I love it. Hope you continue with the story REAL SOON. |
Reviewed By: arovak On: August 05, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUV THIS FIC! Its a great story. I cant wait to see what happens tho goku and vegeta. write again real soon! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 10:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story so far, I just love 'planet Vegeta' stories ^^
I hope you update soon!
Greetz Kiri-chan ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ðäñtè [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!PLEASE!THIS FIC IS ABSOLUTY MAGNIFICENT!I LOVE VEGETA AND GOKU STORYS THEYRE AMAZINGLY GOOOOOOD! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 02:12 CDT
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Hm. I think you really, really need a beta to clean up the grammar.... there are innumerable run-on sentences, missing commas and awkward sentences. But I do love this concept - I just pray the ending is happier than the real Ai No Kusabi!
Devoted Radditz = good. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way you set this story up. The idea of the classes was a stroke of pure genuis! I have never seen that before. I also am impressed with the way the plot is developing. Having Vegeta defeat Kakarrott and use him as a pet is wonderful! This story has a lot of potential! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 21:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, the thought of poor Kakarotto without a tail and his father in that kind of condition is horrible! :(
But ooh, what an intriguing plot you've woven... Will Kakarotto keep his promise or will he succumb to his true feelings for Vegeta?
Go for Door Number Two!!!
Oops... Sorry :) |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN U PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!! LOVE IT SO FAR GENIUS GIRL !!!!!!!
YAHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! AND GIVE ME YAOI!!!LOL!
LATER! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 16:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good so far. A bit confusing as to who belongs to which point of view in the beginning, but it gets easier to understand as it goes on. Interesting ideas regarding how classes are defined (tail thing). |
Reviewed By: rebel On: August 06, 2003 22:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT STORY I LUVED IT. i cant wait to hear what happens next. pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaasssseeeeeee write again sooon! |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: August 06, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... i don't have words to describe what i think about this fic. Really, i don't know how to say it ... wonderful is an understatement.
There are few fics nowadays that are so well written as yours and fewer that actually have a plot so interesting... and i must say they aren't updated frequently.
Generally the good fics i've been reading have plots gravitating around the followings subjets: time travels, bonds and sex changes , not that I don't like this subjects anymore, far from it, as i'm planing on start my "career" as fic writer doing a fic about time travels as well... the only problem here is my total lack of writing skills. Ok i know you don't want to know about this... i don't even know why i started talking about it... ah! yes now i remember: this was to show you that very good stories as this one are really an inspiration to a reader like me.
I hope you update soon.
PS: forgive my mistakes, english is not my native language... but i think it's understandable. ;P |
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