| "Ai no Kakarotto" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 05, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now i read it and i'm surprised, to say the least, that Kakarotto would come to such an act towards the one he claims hate above all things. Your way to describe their feelings and the way you show every scene in Kakarotto and Raditz pov is something more to add to why i like this fic so much. But there's something i miss (maybe you already did it, but i'm too lazy right now to check it and my internet connection is no help)will we have a chapter with Vegeta's pov? I mean till now, if my memory doesn't fool me, all Vegeta's actions were described by Kakarotto or Raditz pov, i feel like when he discovers kakarotto gone it will be imperative that this chapter would be in his pov. - No, i'm not trying to interfere in your writing and/or ideas, this is just a feeling i felt the need to share with you. Don't really pay this much attention to it. ^^
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Reviewed By: gokumum On: December 05, 2003 11:22 CST
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Well, I have only read 3 chapters so far, leaving the fourth for later, when I have more time to savor it. You are writing a wonderful fic, very AU, but very saiyan. I did not yet see the complete movie of Ai no Kusabi, just read the summary. As far as I can tell now, you managed to merge the world of Vegetasei, the idea of classes (which was common to the saiyans) and some plot bunnies of AnK to a new, innovative world of fiction. Excellent job! Some minor typos slipped the betareading, but no big deal considering the huge amount of pages released in little lapses of time. I really look forward to more of this fic.
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Title: xXx
Reviewed By: Nikki Kou On: December 05, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW the first person I've given all 10...and u deserve every last one of them...this fic is perfect...give us another update as a christmas present please? i can't wait to see what'll happen when vegeta finds out that kakarotto is gone and if kakarotto will ever get his tail back...about the review thing i feel your pain it hard seeing that ur fic has been visited more than 100 times and u only have about 9 reviews to account for those visits.
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Reviewed By: The Unforgiven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 18:06 CST
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Wow! this is awesome! I was kinda hoping Kakarotto would get his tail back... his dad was dumb. What's gunna happen next? I can't wait to read more!!! Broken
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 16:11 CST
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Oh jeez, I remember reading this fic awhile ago. I'm so glad you've decided to get back to it! I really love how you manage to convey the emotions that the characters are feeling throughout the fic so far. I'm a little sad that you made Raditz so horribly mean, though. :( Oh well, fics wouldn't be worth a flip if they didn't have a villain, ne? ;) Maybe in your next fic, you'll let him "get some?" :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter, even though I suspect it's going to be filled with a ton of angst... :O Keep up the good work, kiddo!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: December 03, 2003 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You want to know how good this story is? Listen, I don't HATE yaoi, but it's not something I'm usually drawn to... but this story is just so good... the characters are so well-defined... the story is so emotional... it seems that I am always checking my in-box for another chapter. Plaese don't thank me for being "speedy." This last update was SO good, I wanted you to post it ASAP so that everyone could enjoy it (plus, I had AM nagging me "is it done yet? I want an update").
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 03, 2003 17:36 CST
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Gods you're fast!! Thank you.^^ I didn't read the new chapter yet, but i felt i had to review anyway only to thank you for calmming my "itch". :D Is this some sort of Christmas gift, I mean the real speedy update? Cause if it is be sure i loved it.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. Absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work and update soon. ~MercuryGoddess~
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the pacing on this...slow enough to let the characters develop. Poor Kakarott seems so lost and confused - he is starting to lose sight of his goal. I think it is best that we don't get to see inside Vegeta's head - just get to understand him based on his reactions. What is going to happen when Kakarott's tail grows back?
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 02, 2003 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Just to let you know i'm itching to know what's is it Kakarotto will do that leaves "escape" as the only option for him.
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Title: AM
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story!! I love the characterization you have going on here, they all worked so well together
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very well-written! I love the plot, and I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update soon!
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Title: wow!!!!
Reviewed By: BD (not logged in) On: November 26, 2003 05:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Gods BS! This fic is amazing!!! write more soon!!!! ^_^ ~BD~
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - I could log in I guess On: November 26, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really love this fic. Such a fantastic idea done by such a wonderful writer. I look forward to the upcoming chapters!
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Title: eeee!
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 01:55 CST
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You MUST continue this!! I LOVE this story and I want to see another chapter please. =o) Oooh Kakarotto rrawrrr *drools*
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