| "Ai no Kakarotto" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 16:11 CST
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Oh jeez, I remember reading this fic awhile ago. I'm so glad you've decided to get back to it! I really love how you manage to convey the emotions that the characters are feeling throughout the fic so far. I'm a little sad that you made Raditz so horribly mean, though. :( Oh well, fics wouldn't be worth a flip if they didn't have a villain, ne? ;) Maybe in your next fic, you'll let him "get some?" :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter, even though I suspect it's going to be filled with a ton of angst... :O Keep up the good work, kiddo!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: December 03, 2003 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You want to know how good this story is? Listen, I don't HATE yaoi, but it's not something I'm usually drawn to... but this story is just so good... the characters are so well-defined... the story is so emotional... it seems that I am always checking my in-box for another chapter. Plaese don't thank me for being "speedy." This last update was SO good, I wanted you to post it ASAP so that everyone could enjoy it (plus, I had AM nagging me "is it done yet? I want an update").
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 03, 2003 17:36 CST
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Gods you're fast!! Thank you.^^ I didn't read the new chapter yet, but i felt i had to review anyway only to thank you for calmming my "itch". :D Is this some sort of Christmas gift, I mean the real speedy update? Cause if it is be sure i loved it.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter. Absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work and update soon. ~MercuryGoddess~
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Title: Very nice
Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the pacing on this...slow enough to let the characters develop. Poor Kakarott seems so lost and confused - he is starting to lose sight of his goal. I think it is best that we don't get to see inside Vegeta's head - just get to understand him based on his reactions. What is going to happen when Kakarott's tail grows back?
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Reviewed By: kitkat On: December 02, 2003 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Just to let you know i'm itching to know what's is it Kakarotto will do that leaves "escape" as the only option for him.
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Title: AM
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story!! I love the characterization you have going on here, they all worked so well together
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Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: MercuryGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very well-written! I love the plot, and I can't wait until the next chapter. Please update soon!
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Title: wow!!!!
Reviewed By: BD (not logged in) On: November 26, 2003 05:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Gods BS! This fic is amazing!!! write more soon!!!! ^_^ ~BD~
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Reviewed By: Phantomscribe72 - I could log in I guess On: November 26, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really, really love this fic. Such a fantastic idea done by such a wonderful writer. I look forward to the upcoming chapters!
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Title: eeee!
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 01:55 CST
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You MUST continue this!! I LOVE this story and I want to see another chapter please. =o) Oooh Kakarotto rrawrrr *drools*
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Reviewed By: Sailor Pookie On: November 25, 2003 00:24 CST
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I love this fic! Please update soon.....I really want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: goertz On: October 18, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Please update soon, I _need_ the next chapter. Thanks for a good read!
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Reviewed By: I Luv Vege *i really should log in one day!* On: October 11, 2003 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woo hoo! This is great! Yaya! I luv the way you have described the 'classes' of Vegetasei! That was really good!! Hehe.. I want more Kakarotto/Vegeta!!!!!!! There is only one thing that I can see with this, your spelling and grammar is a little off in parts, but nothing to stress over!!!! Im only saying that since I guess your supposed to give constructive critism in reviews... But don't worry about it!!!!! Luv this ficcy, please so continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: MiraiGee-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur spelling could do with a bit ofa check up every now and then, try just re-reading paragraphs after uve written them.... not that i can talk.... :)
im fully luvin tha plot at the moment! the whole p.o.v. was a bit confusing in tha beginging but it got easier! hmmm... maybe im just stupid!
u did say that kakarotto was goin to b OOC but i think that there still is a lil bit of son goku in ur OOC version.
cant wait till Kaka gets his tail back ;) its gonna b cool!
cant wait for an update!!! |
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