| "Watch Over Me" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: valea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHH!!!!! lemony good stuff! yay and bakrau and ryou next chapter! i can feel the joy! hopefully nothing can mess up that day. anywho, contuious sex over and over was a good idea i coldnt imagine it any other way. good job, i love starting my day with reading a lemon ^_^ lol ~Valea~
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 12, 2003 11:49 CST
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Very beautiful... NOW GET TO THE LEMON!! I'll pour m's on you and sick Aria on ya ... tee hee. ::: Holds out 3 bags of candy to the chibis. :::
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Title: Wedding Greatness!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! i so need to knwo who that song was by it was so great for the chappie! you know what i love? you manage not only to just liek write up the fanfiction but then you go into deeper stuff like by looking up words on a dictionary and whatnot and anywho, it was a sweet and kawiiful cahpter and i liked it! but then again i lik evrything lol. anywho..not to get off subject...are you planning a L-E-M-O-N ? lol anywho will aria ever ease up? can there be a lil moment where like i dunno she goes up and hugs him? but then there wouldnt be any drama, im talking to myself now! love much good stuff! ^_^ ~Valea~
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Reviewed By: Cynicalspiritvalea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font colorYay! Perfect song, once again my friend! *giggle* im so looking forward to the wedding, coudl there be second thougths coming back? But anyway nice remiscing you had going, it was so sweet, emtionful, il be getting good sleep tonigth because of you and all the cutness and old friendship stuff going on...OMG I SOUND LIKE ANZU!!! ahhhhhhhh!!!! *bashes myself over hte head with a fryign pan* ahh much better, love much it was great so very great...makes me question will Marik run away dont run away from the good future Marik, it will be okay or at least i hope so right...??*slips into sweet unconisouness* KURA!!!!!!!!!!! lmao love!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 11, 2003 17:36 CST
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Awwwwwww, kawaii!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 09, 2003 14:32 CST
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wow, fluffy, and sort of angsty, and kawaii at the same time. Bg, you know your stuff. *smiles and cuddles close to her pillow* i wish i had someone to cuddle with. *looks over at her cat* but kitty is sleeping and no one is here. Except for mu cat. Oh well, lemons always cheer me up. So, keep up the good work, I'm off to scrub my eyes (*Shudder* anzu naked*) and go read so good ol' lemons. Yaoi lemons, ya gotta luv 'em
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal On: November 08, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nnnnnnnnnoooooooooooo you can't bring Steven back!!!!!! nnnnooo!!!! WWWWWAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! Mmmm just imagining Malik in that outfit makes me tingle!! He's soooo hot hes my second fave after Bakura & Ryou... Great chapter, I can't wait until the wedding is on! I reckon you should make a sequel to this when Aten and Aria grow up... if they don't get killed first! ;_; keep it up great work!!
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww that was a cute chapter.
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Takes a deep breath* LMAO!!!!! OMFG! LMAO!! LOL!!!! I was reading all nicley...and I get to this part The dancer ripped off the veil and it was……………… ANZU! My eyes widened, and I seriously almost felloff my chair in laughter! Lol, poor, poor things...That must've bee soooo gross. Ewww, Anzu stripping *Shivers* Anyway, I'm glad she's getting better ^_^ *Waves and holds up a 'get well soon' card*
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 20:34 CST
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Anzu naked is the most frightening thing that could ever have happened... *dies* But the rest with the chibis was really cute... Keep up the good work!
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Title: *horrifeid yet not*
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font colorAHHHHH!! As always I got to read this on the bus and I nearly had a heartattack! lol i was so thinking it was like mariks wife recieranated in some way and then it was Anzu, i felt Seto's pain, that was so wrong but it it was sooo funny! But then it was like he hated my body! But it wasnt he hated Anzu who was trying to rape him, noooo!!!! Butyeah that was so funny I swear to Ra! *feels speical for saying that* And it was so cute everyone ran away but i would think there'd be a male stripper, anyway I would have to say that was a nice touch to add that in htere! Still cant wait until the wedding! Yippy skippy!!!!!@!!!!
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Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal 2 lazy 2 login On: November 07, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that chapter was sooooo funny!! i can't believe Anzu was the dancer!!!! I really hope that Hayden starts being a normal child around his new parents, he seems pretty distraught! I hope your wife is feeling better (don't mind me asking but are you guys really married/lesbians?) no offence!! ^_^ man i hope that baddie that you bring back isn't Steven! I hated him soooo much!! Aten is adorable but Aria needs some anger management!! Great story keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 07, 2003 18:01 CST
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AHHHHHHHH!!!!NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!EWWWWWWWWW, ANZU IS NASTY!!! MY EYES, THEY BURN, EVEN FROM JUST READING!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH *breaks off into sobs* make it stop! make it stop!!! AHHHHHHHH!!!
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Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *Goes crazy* They're getting married! HOW KAWAII! Now Yami and Yugi have to get married...or adopt a child ^-^
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: November 06, 2003 10:06 CST
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Wow... Beautiful way to pop the question... :::: Takes the four plushies she bought for her niece and nephew. She gives the purple one with pink ears/feet to Aria, the green one with white ears/feet and gives it to Aten, and the white one with red ears/feet and gives it to Hayden.::: Make sure you dont mess them up.. They are really for my niece and nephew.. but the white one is for a special friend of mine.
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