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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 22:43 CST
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KAWAII! That was just the most wonderful thing I've ever read! Keep up the amazing, wonderful work!
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Title: ^____________^
Reviewed By: Joeys_Gal can't login too hard lol ^_^ On: November 05, 2003 19:25 CST
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OOOH that was such a sweet chapter!!! Aten proposing for Marik hehehe what a cute idea! I can't wait to see what the bachelor party will be like. You'll have to make Bakura and Marik do something funny in it!! ^___^ great story keep it up!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 19:13 CST
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That was so sweet! Sweet and awesome to the max I swear! It was about time, I liked your jealous Aria going on there and the male bonding moment, looks like Hayden wont be so alone anymore things looking up! Planning to have the same wedding as Ryou adn Bakura did and will Yami *hiss* be the preist figure??so happy just two more days! SCORE! A naughty bachol party ahead! Anyway to sum it up it was sweet as the pie im eating right now, good-o!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess On: November 05, 2003 18:49 CST
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Stwabewwy Cotton Candy was good... but Bwuebewwy Sugar Pwincess is better^^ anywho... Aria reminds me so much of Bakura...only chibi.... and more feminen. Great chappie^^ *looks over at her halloween candy* ORO!!!^^ Candy!!!
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Title: Libido Finsihing love!
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! Now im up to date with your fics and I so want more! And I have to say reading this ont he bus in the mornign was cool, and the bloodlsut was wayyy intense!And I was so sad though ti was so wrong that Hyden had to be exposed liek that no privacy at all! It was so wrong...anyway I was thinking of soemthing I wanted to comment on...OH EAYH! If i didnt say it before ill say it again, the talk Marik had to ive was hysterical serious to the max. And hints on whats to come in the sequel are you palnning to like make it jump ahead some few years to them being teenagers or are you planning to take it one step at a time? Will there be any kawii moments ahead for Hyden to get better *puppy dog eyes* PLEASE ! They can have a big cold BBQ in the backyard with the swimming poool! Yay! *jumps in* AHH COLD!1 ARE THOSE PARANNAS?!!!*sees fish licking their teeth. O.o RUN AWAY!!! GOOD STUFF AUTHORESS KEEP IT UP!!! *gives hugs to all the fish and they turn to dust* Oh yeah...im a hugging fiend. OH YEAH and nice use of libido..i think i said that before too because its in a Nirvana song and I just love the sound and meaning to the word, thank you and goodnight*bows and walks away*
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow extreme coolness to the max! It was so mysterious and whatnot, I was loving it, everything al the small things you mentioned way long ago came back to me and I felt specail because I paid attention to it. *prays dont let anyone die!* funny..aria...seto...eep!!! good stuff though ^_^
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww poor Hayden. take the chibi and hug him. great chapter
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: November 01, 2003 11:25 CST
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awwwww, chibis are so cute^^ guess what tho? I'm moving... all weekend >< I hate moving, and try to aviod it but my roomieis bitchin at me for not cleaning it so that the landlord will be happy. Keep up the good work ^^
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 11:06 CST
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Aw... poor Hayden. I hope he losens up to his new parents. Such a kewt chappie! When do you get the time to write these?
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, I hope you'll both be ok. Though I don't know you in real life, it feel's like I've gotten to know you through emails, and stories. Hope you'll both do ok *Hugs both* Great chapter by the way ^_^ Happy Halloween!
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Reviewed By: Keiko Misstress of Destruction On: October 29, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohayoo! I didn't start reading this series until just before Watch Over Me, and I really likes it! But, I was wondering if there will ever be a possibility of a Bakura/Malik lemon... or are they not close like that? Luv the Ryou/Bakura, Bakura/Marik, Ryou/Marik, Ryou/Malik, Malik/Marik pairings ^0^ keep writing, cuz this is the only thing on mediaminer that I read
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Reviewed By: Stwabewwy Cotton Candy On: October 29, 2003 16:27 CST
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O.O WOOOHOOOOO!!!!! NOT MORE STEVEN JUST DEAD, BUT STEVEN TORTURE AS WELL!!! YESYESYESYESYES!!!! *bounces up and down and giggles endlessly* omg, that was the funniest thing i every read, tho. so f*ckin funnny.... omg, you are the best!
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 27, 2003 13:47 CST
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::: Once Again, she takes her Bunny plushie and her Ryo-Ohki plushie and tucks Bunny into bed with Aria, and Ryo-Ohki in with Aten::: Sweet dreams, sweeties.
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Reviewed By: The Mystical Dragon On: October 27, 2003 12:46 CST
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BWAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh My!!!! The BIG questions already... OH BTW--- I got to see my neice and nephew this weekend... two very kawaii chibis!
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Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Mommy Malik, I don't have my penis anymore!" Aria cried from the bathroom. *Falls off chair and bursts out laughing* LMAO! OMG! That was so funny ^_____^ Sorry I don't revew as much, bu I have a job, drum lessons and skool, and it's time consuming, but I still read/love your fic! And I'll never stop reading, because your super awesome! Hope you feel ok Dragondreamer!(That's her name right)
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