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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: HanyouGal (Offline) On: October 27, 2004 01:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE IT AHHHHH I LOVE YOU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS STORY. The Batlle chapters weren't spaced enough though hard to read. Dont ake this as a flame I love this story soooooo much thx for writing! -HanyouGal
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Reviewed By: essie2 On: October 26, 2004 22:07 EDT
Comment/Review:
this is great please update
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 26, 2004 17:02 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter, very much looking forwards to the sequel. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: please god write more
Reviewed By: inuyashalover34 On: October 24, 2004 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more and a sequel would be so badass i had an idea try to develop hojo a bit it would make it a bit more interesting like make him learn more demon abilities
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Reviewed By: lone-puppy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 00:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
wow i'm soo happy i found this on! i used to read it on ff.net but got really disappointed that it was removed.
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Reviewed By: lyrica On: October 23, 2004 16:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
FIX YOUR FUCKING STORY
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Title: 55
Reviewed By: Lyrica On: October 23, 2004 16:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
what the hell is going on? i'm guessing this chapter has been up for a while, why haven't you fixed it? i love this story, but i wont finish reading it if i can't understand whats going on! you say you do this strictly for the readers and all that crap, but this shows me you don't give a shit. this chapter makes no sense and screws up the frickin story.
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (NLO) On: October 23, 2004 15:45 EDT
Comment/Review:
love this fic! cant wait to see your sequel!
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Reviewed By: Lyrica On: October 23, 2004 15:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've been reading it practically non-stop ^^ i loves it. i wasn't really planning on reviewing because i'm a lazy shmo, but you said my name (miranda) although not on purpose, so i decided i would because i'm sooo cool.
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Reviewed By: sarah gray On: October 23, 2004 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thanks for updating i was wondering when you were. on the last chapter you wrote there is a glitch i think. the first word is cut off every couple of paragraphs you start. maybe its just my computer. oh well anyways LOVE the story i am a big fan and i hope you do put those lemons in there, very entertaining!!!!! thanks again for updating....look foward to reading somemore
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 22, 2004 23:08 EDT
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It was still an excellent chapter, one that makes me all the more want to obtain the rest of Inuyasha, both manga and anime. I look forwards to both endings and your next story. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: firelord (not loged in) On: October 22, 2004 18:38 EDT
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that was great but you need to repost the chapter your cuting part of it off that was a ver fast up date keep up the great work you are a great writer.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: October 21, 2004 19:05 EDT
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Absolutely fantastic chapter, like how you wrapped it up. Look forwards to the final sequence all though perhaps a little scared by the sheer volume of lemons promised... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 20:56 EDT
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Very cool. I hope that you are able to update soon so that we can see what else you have in store for these characters! Good luck and catch ya next time! ^.~
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Title: chapter 57
Reviewed By: firelord (not loged in) On: October 20, 2004 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yhaa more you have got to write more and dont for get to write a squal to
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