| "Transformations" Reviews/Comments [ 409 ] |
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Reviewed By: haruka_tsuki_kou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:17 EST
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WOW!!0_0 This fic pulled me right in. I can't wait to read more of it, and soon, maybe? Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 22:57 EST
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YAY!!! It's about time we get some new chaps, I was begging to think that you forgot about the story. As for your brother in law Throw lemons at him ::hands you bag of lemong:: I hope these updates keep comming because if not ima have to read the whole story again to remind myself what it was about. As for weapons why don't you ask Miroku to use his kazana (wind tunnel) :)
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 19:26 EST
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Doing great, get the next chapter up quickly please. ^-^
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: samie On: March 28, 2004 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story, cant wait for the next chapter. good job so far.update asap.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 28, 2004 18:08 EST
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Excellent set of chapters! Glad to see Miroku and Sango finally get together. The insight into Kagura was unexpected and the last part certainly caught me of guard. Keeps getting better, look forwards to the next chapter. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Evil Eric On: March 27, 2004 11:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall this is decent, but it gets that rating based almost entirely on strength of concept. The actual writing and plot are far too simplistic and uninspiring. It's good enough to amuse the simple-minded, but leaves a lasting feeling of "For Joe Schmo, by Joe Schmo." It's obvious the author barely knows the bare minimum about the subject to write about it. It's lucky to get the rating it does, since I have a soft spot for Kagome-turns-into-a-hanyou stories. Mediocre, mediocre, mediocre.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 22:46 EST
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Another amazing chapter. I liked the perspective on Kikyo, not many people are very simpathetic for her. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep writing. ^-^
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Title: A-freaking-mazing
Reviewed By: PVX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This, was the BEST Inuyasha fanfiction I have ever read. The story is amazing. And, *lifts up chainsaw* I brought you something. *pulls cord, nothing happens, tries again, still nothing* Is this thing even sharp? *Brings blades up to neck, sudennly chainsaw kicks to life and rips face to shreds* DAMMMNNNIIIT! NOT AGAIIN!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: March 15, 2004 19:59 EST
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Very nice chapter! A lot more introspective this time, you gave us more of an inisght into some of the supporting cast,a welcome change from much of the near pathlogical need to focus souly on the two stars. Looking forwards to the next. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Tekablade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 23:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are still one of the best writers I've have ever seen. Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, love the story. Update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww but inu/kag lems are the best
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Reviewed By: wynter89 On: February 13, 2004 15:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a very great fict, the plot says alot, explains alot of things. love the blue pack and how kagome is the leader, it would be great if the cristal could be used to bring back most of the blue wolves and all of the people narako killed or his minins killed. update the fict love to read more. keep up the good work, DON'T GET LAZY. love it, best inu/kag yet or ever.
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Reviewed By: faerie demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2004 19:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm not a pervert! I like smut enthusaist better. Anyway... abosultely love your fic and can't wait until you update. At the end of a chapter you could have some people who haven't reviewed or people that have flamed you in a dungeon and blackmail them into reviewing or something along those lines. I got to go. Lots of love and luck!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 09, 2004 18:50 EST
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*cough*Nice chapter*cough* Sorry, never did like reviewing lemons, hard to know what to say... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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