| "Unexpeced Allies Part III: Trial of the Century" Reviews/Comments [ 239 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great series and I loved the happy ending! It was recommended by someone who did a fanart of the inuyoukai general on Doukuga and I'm glad I spent all afternoon, 6-ish hours, reading it! (I hope you've learned to spell since you wrote this though >.
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Reviewed By: addy692002@aol.com On: October 23, 2009 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really loved this entire series of fics and so very glad that I stumbled across them.... ... but honestly, I was a little disappointed in the rating change, especially so late into the story. Not because there wasn't lemony goodness - although that's always a perk with Sesshoumaru in the mix :-D lol, but because I felt that it made the fic seem somewhat unrealistic.. rushed.. and like a lot of things got left out. The rest of the story had this great UST factor in it and the driving force to keep reading - for me, anyway - was to see how it panned out when they finally got together - but it turned out to be a little bit odd because it was like UST, more UST, little drama, lottle fighting, more UST, things heading into serious, UST with feelings involved, more drama, little bit of angst, and FINALLY they meet again, everything's fine, and it skips from them ABOUT to get together officially straight to they're getting married and again straight to they're pregnant. It just felt like it was going for a huge explosion and a final end to the UST that just kinda didn't deliver... fun, kinda mushy, and happy ending... but still felt as though something got left out along the way and I'll admit I was a little disappointed. On the whole, however, I loved the story - just wish it'd have been a little more filled out toward the end. lol
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Reviewed By: Soleil C On: May 09, 2007 20:48 CDT
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YAY!! nice ending. loved the whole fainting and freaking out thing, very much a clique among my friends...great story and UPDATE SECOND CHANCE, WOMAN!!!!
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Reviewed By: Soleil C On: May 09, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cruel...you seperated them! how could you? anyways, good chap. shattered his marbles! Ha!
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Reviewed By: Kimiko-chan On: December 23, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ifyou didn't get what chibimistress 3 said ill say it. FOR THE LOVE OF KAMI WRITE A SEQUEL IN THE NAME OF ALL POTATO CHIPS, SODA,CANDY, AND DESSERTS PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hehe sorry, i just had 3 hershey bars, a pepsi a 1 dollar bag of chips and like 25 bubaloo's so i'm a LITTLE bit hyper *runs around the room screaming "gimme my chocolate you pirates!"* but just a little
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Reviewed By: Chibi Mistress3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dude!!! lol xD that was an awesome story! probably one of the longest ones i've read but completely amazing! *sigh* i feel so tired now... i've been staying up pretty late to continue reading this fic. lessee... i think i started reading it on... *thinks* last monday... so that would be exactly 8 days... but then again... you know... school is the most evil thing in the world right up there next to homework haha ^_^;; i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY hope you make a sequel!!! ^__________^ that would make me oh so happy! =^.^= i don't know how you could have kept up with writing such a long fanfiction! you see.. im a VERY VERY lazy person and have you ever started a story feeling really excited but then after a while... you just didn't get that feeling anymore and you couldn't really thinkof anything else to write for that fic? well yea... that's me... lazy-ass procrastinating chick... *nods* *sigh* are prom dresses really that uncomfortable?!?! *groans* no!!! prom dress must! be! perfect!!! *psycho look in eyes* *runs into store and attacks owner* wait! *comes back out* I DON'T KNOW MY SIZE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @_@;; err... yea.... anyway back to what i was PLANNING to say anyway... (see what i mean about me being a very very bad person?) PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU FOR GOD SAKES WOMAN!!! WRITE A FRIGGIN SEQUEL!!! LMFAO! xD sorry... got a bit..... "out there" but yea.. you get the message rite?!?!
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Reviewed By: hobbitfancier77 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 21:39 CST
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ogm wow i justr ead the whole stroy all three in 3 days...i swear ive never seen my mom so pissed off i spent so much time reading...but unexpected allies was soo good....at oen point i think i remember myself tearing up...dont ask at what time cause i dont think ill remember...but there is one thing im curious about what happened to aniki????o wells guess ill never know..thanks for sharing your story with me..it was a greatly needed smile -stefanee
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Reviewed By: a reader (once again) On: January 22, 2005 22:37 CST
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your request was on your chapter 14 of Unexpeced Allies Part III... if this wasn't the story you were looking for, eh, well, i thought it was a good read anyway... TITLE: Fallen and Abandoned BY: The Sinner USER ID: 290931 STORY ID: 1425975 on FanFiction . net
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Reviewed By: a reader On: January 22, 2005 22:32 CST
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I really like your story!!! Anyway, I read this story sometime within the last week or two: TITLE: Fallen and Abandoned BY: The Sinner USER ID: 290931 STORY ID: 1425975 on FanFiction . net this may or may not be what you were looking for when you wrote: "It's when Kagome, still traveling to the Feudal Era, comes across a slave trade in Modern Tokyo. She buys him and takes him home, realizing all the while that he looks a lot like Sesshoumaru. Anyway, If you know what I'm talking about, please help me find it. I can't remember the name."
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Title: AHHHH!
Reviewed By: Cori, Lady of the West On: October 04, 2004 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! You have to put a lemon in! I live for lemons and would loose my lung for sure if you didn't put one in. (see reviews for unexpected allies pt2) My lung! Save it! Add a lemon. PLEASE!! *puppy dog eyes* Even my lord wants a lemon. *Turns to ask Sesshou* "HN." See that means yes. *Takes Sesshou to bed chambers* Please!
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Title: Unexpected Allies Part III
Reviewed By: Youko' female fox On: October 04, 2004 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! One of the very best I actually look forward to the next chapters. I even look for other stories by you! AND I LOVE THEM ALL!!! Keep them coming!!
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart2122 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved this whole story! You did a great job and I love the parts at the end with the Inu cast. This story was sad and happy and funny and just all around fun to read. I liked the ending too, it was so sweet. You are a great writer and I hope to read more of your stories soon (I have already read a few other then this one) Oh and I have been reviewing the other parts with out logging in (AngelHeart21) it's faster and I am lazy. Just thought I would say that. ^_^
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Title: fireash
Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!!!! great ending and epilogue. beautifully detailed. can every one say awwwwww! loved it all the way through. can't wait to finish reading all of your stories.
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Reviewed By: demonic tenshii On: April 11, 2004 21:06 CDT
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i LOVE this trilogy, i jus read the 3 stories an the side story in less than 6 hrs, i have no life but..... O FUKING WELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is 1 of the greatest storys i have ever read an i read a lot of stories cuz i have no life but please list it on FF.NET if ur makin a continuation! btw i love all ur stories an lemme no wen ur nex chappy of second chance is due! ja ne!!
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Great ending to the trilogy. Loved the stories.
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