| "In the Heat of Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 258 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye273 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:37 EST
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The track you picked is exactly the one I would have chosen. She should rest, then continue the hunt w/ Mir+Sango. It would be cool for IY to keep doing things without letting anyone know (like get and leave food and other assorted items), but of course Kag won't be interested (at first). The clincher could be if she gets into trouble (in battle for instance), and IY kills the demon, but never even acknowledges Kag (kind of a "guadian angel" deal). I think after a while of that WITHOUT him in her face, she'll be able to heal, and see all the wonderful things he does out of love and kindness. WAFFy isn't it? (I love that stuff ^_^) Oh, and I'm sorry to hear about your friend. I know how you feel. Someone very close to me just got back, he was there for almost 2 yrs... and I have another friend there still. So as far as I'm concerned, you are forgiven for not updating. If I were in your position, I wouldn't have either. I eagerly await your next update!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: jinnandtonic23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 21:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this story and it's incredibly angsty! But I mean that in a good way.:) It's great and I can't wait for the next part. The only thing that I'm not quite sure about is that some of the characters' dialogue doesn't seem to fit them, but that's a miniscule concern of mine.:P Keep up the wonderful writing!
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 06, 2004 19:04 EST
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*smiles* no comment, something stupid would come out of my mouth.
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Reviewed By: starchild On: February 06, 2004 18:58 EST
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awww, thats too bad about your friend. Hope he gets better then you can update more ^_^
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Reviewed By: E. Marie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 15:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really glad that you decided to continue with this fanfic. Writing as a hobby is something I've struggled with, especially when it comes to fanfiction, because sometimes a few very negative reviews can make you reluctant to continue. I'm relieved that you've conquered that experience, and I'm excited that this storyline is going to live on! Please, never let other people deprive you of the fun of writing fanfics or your faithful readers of, well, reading them! Great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 20:11 EST
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you must write write write!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2004 02:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww *sniff sniff* im so sad
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Reviewed By: tbiris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 18:08 EST
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*tear* poor Kagome, Poor Inu Yasha, I think he's the one really suffering... considering that Kagome was the first one to accept him, and never tried to kill him.
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Reviewed By: Horse_Gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 17:43 EST
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you must update soon!!!!!! i love the story
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Title: !@#$%&!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 17:54 EST
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THE STUPID FUCKING COMPUTER JUST ERASED MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW WHICH COULD PROBABLY BE CONSIDERED ITS OWN FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @#$@#%^&*@%#^@#&$#@%^$�$#&$#&$#&%$�&$^#&$ �$^#^$$#&$#$#&$&$#&$&@Q^*@$*$^#$@$$^#%!@#*$#*!%$#^!% #$!$!#%#%$#&$#@&%!~#&^@#*~*#$$(*+(#*�%^%#&*#$%$%#^%#^*^$ %^#$*&$%^*$(*&$%*^$^^$^$ Ok, I'm ok now.. I'll try to calm down without destroying my $1,000 and up computer, which deserves to die.. I'll e-mail the review instead.. that should take care of it.
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Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're being mean (
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Reviewed By: inuyasha100 On: January 18, 2004 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are really pissing me off up date one more thing next chap try and make inu try sucide
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 15, 2004 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. i can't wait for you to update.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!! you updated. love the chapter. i am glad she knows that he didn't mean to hurt her. i hope everything works out in the end.
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Reviewed By: Cindyve13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 22:40 EST
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Hey I love the story! I can't wait for the next chap. Oh and yeah college is a bitch especially if your workin through it too, hope your exams came out better than mine. Oh! and as a guess is kikyo gonna talk to kagome about what happen??? You can tell me I swear I won't tell anyone >:). Nah j/k. Can't wait for the next chap bye! *Cindy*
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